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sorry i havent written in awhile. 1) i havent had time 2)school, dance, poms, and family stuff has been crazy since the end of feburary aka the last time i was on...ill try writing more, i might start a new story cause i havent written in so long so im not really feeling the story, but i'll see. thanks to those who want me to keep writing! i love y'all!!

Heeyyy~ sooo I write stories(:  I don't know if they're any good, that's a question for my amazing followers!! My first story is This Is The Story Of A Girl. Chapter 18 is the last one and I'm pretty happy with the way it turned out! My other story which I just finished is Friend Or Sister?. I just realized the last chapter for this story is chapter 18 too!! Hahaha that's so weirdd! Read them if you have time! I'm always looking for feedback! (:
I'M WORKING ON MY 3RD STORYYY(: I really like it, It's called Careless. It's kinda boring now... but hey it's only the 3rd chapter, it'll get good(: I hope! hahah please comment and fav! 
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xo, kristina

  1. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    April 12, 2011 4:54pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 10
    Devon's POV:
    Throughout dinner, Blake kept looking up at me, I don't know why he IS with another girl! McKenzie
    thinks I like him, but I don't! At least I don't think I do. After dinner McKenzie came back over and slept
    over. It was fun except for her bugging me about Blake the entire night.
    --I'm sorry, I don't really know where I'm going with this. Any ideas how to finish it off or should i just start
    a new story?

  2. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    March 22, 2011 5:12pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 9
    Devon's POV:
    Mikayla and I went to mall, I bought a couple new outfits. She's getting me to dress up more so she helped me pick out some stuff. We decided to get dressed up and go out for a fancy dinner tonight. After the mall she came back to my house and we got dressed in our new clothes. Once we were all dressed with makeup and hair done, we took a few pictures, you know for facebook and to twitpick(: "Devvv!!! Readyy?" Mikayla called up to me. "Yeah I'm coming, I just gotta find my purs-FOUND IT!" I ran down the stairs and we went to the car. We decided to go to this really fancy restaurant where you go for dates or special occasions, but hey we just wanted to have some fun. We got a booth by a window and were just talking when I saw him. Blake, yeah he comes walking in with some other girl. I don't know why I let it bother me so much, we don't even like each other. But seeing him with another girl makes me a little jealous. I guess I was staring because Mikayla noticed fast. "Liking the new singer eh?" I shook my head and looked back at her "No!!! I like Zack, I didn't even realized he was here, I just spaced out looking that way." I was satisfied with my quick response, but Mikayla saw right through it, "C'mon Devon. I know you better than that. You've liked him since you first saw him, you just won't admit it to yourself." I felt my face turning red but I refused to let it bother me. "Mikayla I do not like him. I like Zack and I'm going out with him. Blake is a stuck up singer who takes random girls out on fancy dates just cause he has money. He probably doesn't even know her nam-Oh gosh he's coming over here. Crap he's sitting right next to us! In the booth I'm facing!" Mikayla laughed, "Relax, he hasn't even seen us, just look down at your menu." I nodded and we both picked up our menus as they walked by. I slowly dropped my menu as I see him sitting in the booth facing me. "CRAP!" I shout-whisper. Mikayla looks up confused, "What now?" I open my eyes and nod behind her, "He's facing me." Mikayla smirked. Great, what did I say now that's she gonna make fun of? "I thought you didn't like him," she said. I rolled my eyes as the waiter came over to us. "Hi my name is Blake and I'll be your server today." I smiled, he would have the same name. Lucky me, Blake thought someone said his name and looked up over at our table and saw me. He smirked, excused himself from his date and came over to us. "Hey Devon and Mikayla" I replied "Hi" and turned back to the waiter, "I'll have a coke, thank you" Mikayla smiled and ordered an iced tea then turned to Blake, "Hi! So what are you doing here?" He smiled, happy he was getting some attention from one of us. "I'm on a date." I smirked, "Wow, congrats!" He rolled his eyes, "Well see you guys later!" I shrugged and looked back down at the menu, "see ya." I looked up at Mikayla when I felt Blake leave. She was just smiling at me with this huge obnoxious grin, so I looked back down at my menu.

  3. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    February 6, 2011 6:44pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 8
    Devon's POV:
    Zack had to leave so I just stayed in the theater room alone watching TV. I decided to go see what Blake was up to. I turned off the TV and opened the door to the recording studio, it was empty. That's weird. I thought he'd be here for at least an hour. I shrugged and went upstairs. I looked in my dad's office, to see a note that he was at a board meeting. I went to my mom's office to see a note that she was food shopping. What the heck? How long was I downstairs for? I checked my phone, one missed text from Mikayla,
    TO: Devon
    FROM: Mikaylaaaaaaa(:
    MSG: Ahhhhh why didn't you tell me about you & zack?! awwww you guys are perfect for each otherr! love youuu call me when you get this
    I smiled, I love Mikayla, she's always so outgoing. I called her, maybe we could go to the mall or something. "Hello?" Mikayla said. "Hey Kay, it's Devon." "DEVVVV! Sweetie!!! next time you better call me asap when someone asks you out! especially if he's IN OUR BAND!" I laughed, "Mikayla, chillll he just asked me if I wanted to go out sometime, just the 2 of us, I said yes then kissed him, thats all." I smiled, and she answered, "Okay fine. Hey wanna go to the mall?" "Sure sounds good, I'll pick you up in 30 minutes?" "Okay see you soon bye lovee" "bye!" I hung up and went upstairs to shower & get ready.
    *sorry its short hectic weekend...

  4. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    February 3, 2011 7:18pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 7
    Devon's POV:
    A few weeks later, me, Mckayla, Zack, and Justin are all sitting around a bonfire in my backyard just talking. "Oh sorry guys I gotta go, I'm going out with Kate." Justin said, I smiled, Kate was really sweet, she goes to a different school so they don't get to see each other that much. "Awww! Have fun!" I say, "Oh Just can you drop me off at my house? My mom just texted me." He nods, "Yeah sure! Bye guys! Thanks for having us Devon!" "Anytime! Have fun!" They leave and now it's just me and Zack, we continue talking like normal until he slides closer to me. I look up from my messy hands holding a stick with a burning marshmallow on it and see him looking at me. I smile and lean my head on his shoulder. "Devon?" "Yeah Zack?" I say not moving my head. "I was uh wondering if you wanted to go out sometime? You know? Like just the 2 of us?" I smile and look up at him, he was amazing. "Yeah, I'd like that." I replied before giving him a quick kiss on the lips. He smiled and put his arm around me and we eventually fell asleep by the fire.
    The next morning I woke up in Zack's arms with a blanket over us. I yawned and sat up, Zack woke up too, "Good morning beautiful." I smiled and blushed a little, "Good morning." We brought all the food and blankets inside. Zack put his arm around me and we were about to walk downstairs when the doorbell rang. He steered me away from the basement door and brought me to the front door. I just laughed the entire time at how he was controlling where I was walking. I opened the door and saw Blake. I put my arm around Zack, his arm still around my shoulders, "Hi." I said as nicely as I could, he bugged me for some reason. "You remember Zack? The guitar player for our band?" "And her boyfriend." Zack said smiling. I laughed and looked up at Zack who looked so proud. I looked back at Blake, I swear I saw him tense up but then he relaxed. Blake nodded and said, "Yeah hi."
    Blake's POV:
    I rang the doorbell hoping Devon would answer, I kind of wanted to just hang out with her for a little, she seemed nice, and she wasn't all over me like all the other girls I met. She opened the door with some guy from her band. Wait why is his arm around her? Probably just an inside joke. "Hi" Devon said, it was the same fake voice she used when we first met. "You remember Zack? The guitar player for our band?" she continued. "And her boyfriend" Zack said with a huge grin on his face. WHAT? HER BOYFRIEND?! I clenched my fists then realized Devon and I aren't even friends, let alone going out. I relaxed a little and said, "Yeah hi." They looked at me questioningly, "Oh sorry, it was a long night, I'm here to record a little." Devon smirked, "Party too hard?" and she opened the door wider to let me in. I rolled my eyes, why should I be nice to her if she's not nice to me? "As a matter of fact I was." And with that I walked into Mr. Sommers office. I heard her and Zack laughing but I just brushed it off. It doesn't even matter, she doesn't like me like that, or at all. "Good morning Blake! How are you?" Mr. Sommers said. I smiled, he was always so happy, I have no idea how Devon turned out the way she is, "I'm fine how are you?" "Great!" he said with a smile, "Ready to record? I can only do one song today because I have a board meeting." I nodded, "Sure sounds good." We walked downstairs, I saw the movie theater door shut and I heard Zack and Devon laughing. I tried not to make it noticable that I noticed and kept walking towards the recording studio. After one song, I was done, I didn't say bye to Devon, she doesn't care. I just left.
    *sorry it took so long, I forgot I had this saved to my computer, I kept forgetting to publish it(:

  5. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 30, 2011 4:03pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 6
    Devon's POV:
    Mckayla and I stayed up late watching movies and just talking like normal teenagers, it was nice being able to talk to someone other then yourself. I told her about Blake, she thinks I like him, I don't know..."DEVON!" Mckayla screamed and buried her head into her pillow. I look up and see a saw coming towards us, I laughed, Saw 7 in 3-D, I've seen it before so I know whats about to happen, it doesn't really scare me. I laughed and throw a pillow at her. When the movies over I turn on the lights, "Wanna tour of the house? I just realized I never showed you around." "Sure!" she said. I took her to all the rooms and saved the recording studio as one of the last ones. "Woah!" Mckayla said as she ran over to the equipment, "This is wicked awesome!" I smiled, "Yeah it's fun to mess around with. C'mon I have one more room to show you." I led her through a door connected to the recording studio and into this room with my drums and a few microphones. She turned to me her mouth open, I shrugged, "Zack told me you guys were still in the garage phase, so I moved my drum room around a little and made it like a lounge/rehersal area." She ran over to me and hugged me "Devon this is amazing!!!!" She looked at everything from my drums to the purple couch to the mini fridge. I have to admit, I did a pretty good job with it. "Tomorrow when we get up I was gonna call Zack and Justin and have them come over for the same tour thing, then we can rehearse? Or go to the mall or go swimming? Whatever." We both smiled and then went to bed.
    The next morning we woke up, made chocolate chip pancakes, got dressed then called Zack and Justin. As we were putting the dishes in the sink the doorbell rang Mckayla ran to the door thinking it was Zack and Justin, "GUYS YOU HAVE TO SEE- Oh...sorry we were just expecting our other friends...sorry...Devon! Someone's here." I was so confused, who would be coming over now, unless... I walked to the front door, yepp, unless it was Blake. "Hey Devon." he said smiling. I smiled back, a real smile, at least I think, "Hey." He looked at Mckayla, "I thought you were a loner with no friends?" He said looking back at me. "HEY MAN! WHY ARE YOU CALLING DEVON A LOSER WITH NO FRIENDS?" Zack yelled as he walked up to my house. Zack's been great always looking out for me since everyone thinks I'm some crazy hermit or something. I rolled my eyes, "Chill Zack, it's just Blake. He's working on stuff with my parents." "Theeeee Blaaaakkkkeee?" Mckayla said. I glared at her then turned to Blake, "These are my FRIENDS, I joined their band as the drummer." I said with a smile. He looked surprised, "I thought you said you could only play the drums a little?" Mckayla laughed, "A little? seriously? Have you heard this girl play? She's amazing!!" I smiled, "Okay so maybe I lied a little about how I only play the drums a little, I've been playing since I was 5..." Blake looked surprised again and said "Oh, well that's good." I nodded, "So, I don't mean to be rude...but why are you here?" I heard Justin snicker when I said that, Justin's hilarious but quiet if he doesn't know you. Blake looked back at Justin then turned to me, "Working with your parents...?" I rolled my eyes, "right right, well c'mon in...everyone." I pointed to my dad's office, "Blake, you can go in there. The rest of you are getting a tour!" Mckayla squeeled with excitement, Zack and Justin looked confused but then shook it off as I showed them the house.
    When I showed them the rehearsal room they were awestruck, I swear they didn't say anything for like 5 minutes. "Well? do you like it?" They stared at me like I was crazy "YEAH!" Zack and Justin answered at the same time. "Wanna rehearse? Go swimming? Go to the lake?" Zack answered for them, "I say we rehearse for like 30 min to an hour then go swimming or to the lake?" he looked around at everyone who nodded in agreement. As we were about to start we heard some singing from the recording studio. "UGGGGGG! Blake's recording now! I totally forgot!" I said, gosh he's so annoying! "It's fine, I guess we'll just have to go swimming instead!" Justin said laughing. We all laughed and went upstairs to get our bathing suits on. The rest of the day was amazing, just hanging out by the pool and ordering pizza.
    *feedback?

  6. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    January 29, 2011 7:54pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 5
    Devon's POV:
    The rest of the weekend I did pretty much nothing, as usual. Monday morning I rolled out of bed, put on light wash skinny jeans, a black shirt, scrunched my hair, applied eyeliner and mascara, grabbed my backpack and walked downstairs. In the kitchen I put my converse on, grabbed a breakfast bar and went to school. When I got to school there were posters everywhere, apparrantly this band is looking for a drummer. I decided, maybe it's time I start being social, or whatever. So I took a look at the poster and saw that the band was made up of 2 guys and 1 girl. Zack, Mckayla, and Justin. Zack is the leader, he has long black hair that almost covers his pure brown eyes, he has a lip piercing, and he's basically a skinny jeans kinda dude. He plays the guitar and is a background singer. Mckayla, has straight bleach blond hair with pink highlights, a nose ring, and piercings all along her ears, she has the same style as me and is the lead singer. Lastly, there's Justin, he's basically the same as Zack, except no piercings. They're a good fit for me, same style, the 3 of them keep to themselves...but aren't as un-social as me, they talk to other people, I thought I'd give being their drummer a try. Now I told Blake I wasn't that good, but I'm actually pretty good if I do say so myself, I drum for some of my parents clients if their drummer can't make it for some reason. I think about when I see Zack during the day and realize he's in my first period. Score. I smiled and walked to first period, this might actually be good for me.
    I walk into first period to see Zack sitting on the opposite side of the classroom, Mckayla and Justin aren't in this class. I walk up to him, "Hey Zack, so you guys are looking for a drummer?" He looked up surprised, we haven't talked since pre-k when I told him off- in baby language- when he hit me with his pillow during nap time. He smiled, "Yeah you interested?" I nodded "Yeah. Is there like a try-out or something?" He shook his head and smiled, "Nahh, you hardly talk to anyone, I don't think you would put yourself out there to be a drummer in a band if you weren't good." I laughed and nodded, "That's a pretty good reason." I smiled and sat down next to him. We had a substitute teacher in this class, so we just spent the rest of the class talking about music. We exchanged numbers and he told me he would text me when they had rehersal. The rest of the day was actually nice, I talked to Zack in the other classes I had with him and at lunch he introduced me to Mckayla and Justin. They were all really nice, and really similar to me.
    The rest of the week went pretty much the same as the first, although since it's the last week of school we have exams the last 3 days. I haven't heard from or seen Blake since he texted me after I brought him his phone. But I don't really care, I'm just glad I actually have a group of friends now. The last day of school Mckayla and I decided to have a sleepover, I suggested my house, since it's huge and no one has used the movie theater in the basement in years. We drove to my house after school and I introduced her to my parents and told them about the band, they were really excited for me, but I could tell they were trying to hold it in so they wouldn't embarass me.
    *feedback? I know this is kinda boring, I just wanted to introduce the new characters and like show that they are actually friends & Zack, Mckayla, and Justin aren't just using her for her skills, they are actual friends(:

  7. justdance08 justdance08
    posted a quote
    January 29, 2011 3:00pm UTC
    Careless: Chapter 4
    Devon's POV:
    While wrapping my towel around me I walk back inside. I put the leftover pizza in the refrigerator, and notice Blake's phone on the counter. I laugh and walk over to it. Looking around to make sure my parents aren't coming, I grab the phone and walk up to my room. I put it under my pillow and go take a shower. I put on sweatpants, a t-shirt, and my hair in a high messy bun. I walk out and sit on my bed, you only live once, why not go through some strangers phone. I smile to myself and unlock it. That's weird, he doesn't even have a password on it, I go through his texts and see one from a Chrissy. I smirk and decide to read it:
    Chrissy: heeey blake [x
    Blake: hi
    Chrissy: wanna hang tonight?
    Blake: ummm im busy
    Chrissy: awww it'll be fun [x
    Blake: nahh i can't
    I laughed and exit the texts, at least he seems not into all that...stuff. I go downstairs and see my dad went to the food store, I quickly slip into his office and look for Blake's address. After rustling through a messy desk, and 2 messy drawers I finally found it. "Mom I'm going out." She doesn't care, if I say I'm going out she gets so excited. Like I'm actually going out with other people. "Okay honey have fun." I smirk, yeah have fun all by yourself. I grab the directions, my phone, my wallet, Blake's phone, and the keys, and get into my car. I arrive at a house similar to mine, but a bit smaller. I pull into the driveway and a butler comes out. I roll my eyes, I hate butlers and maids, the last time my parents hired them I made their lives miserable so they quit. My parents tried with 3 different butlers and 5 different maids, each one I made quit, ever since I was 7. I was a smart kid. Anyways he comes up to me, "Hello miss. Colfre residence." I put on my fake smile and say, "Yes Blake left his phone at my house, I'd like to return it." I open my door, step out of my car, and walk past the butler to ring the doorbell. I guess it's the butlers job to open the door because when Blake opened the door he was pretty mad, probably because he was wearing a towel around his waist and another towel he was using to dry his hair. "I've told you before you don't have to ring the doo-" he said and then he moved the towel away from his face and looked up. "Oh, Devon, hi sorry." With an amused look on my face I replied, "Hi...you left your phone at my house...again." He looked relieved then quickly put on a surprised face. "Oh really? I thought it was in my pocket, that's weird." I rolled my eyes, "quit lying." I said handing him his phone. As I turned around to walk back to my car I yelled behind me, "See ya." I got in my car and drove off. Out of my rear view mirror I saw he was still standing on his porch watching me, whatever.
    Blake's POV:
    When I opened the door I was definitley not expecting to see Devon there wearing sweatpants, a t-shirt, and her hair in a messy bun. I like girls who don't always have to dress nice when they're talking to a guy. I stood there and watched her drive off. Then I looked at my phone to see if she did anything or I had any missed texts or calls. Nothing was out of the ordinary, but I did notice she put her number in my phone. Did that mean something? I clicked on her name and then sent a text message.
    Blake: Hey it's Blake. Thanks again for bringing me my phone.
    Devon: idk why you said "again" you never said it the first time.
    Blake: Oh...well...thanks for bring me my phone.
    Devon: you're welcome
    Blake: so what ups?
    Devon: dont you remember what my dad said? im a loner with no friends remember?
    Blake: well maybe we could hangout sometime?
    Devon: maybe.
    Blake: K i'll text you.
    No response. Hmmm well that went well, I guess. I walked into my room got dressed, put my phone in my pocket, and decided to go to the mall.
    **feedback?

  8. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 29, 2011 11:06am UTC
    Careless: Chapter 3
    Devon's POV:
    I walked into the kitchen, grab the phone and order a pizza, yeah I do that a lot on Friday afternoons, then I walked out to our huge backyard. We had a pool, a huge yard, and then a lake a little while down the yard. I decided to go for a swim in the pool, it was hot out, and the last week of school in California. I went upstairs, put on my navy blue Roxy bikini grabbed a towel and walked downstairs. I never bother with a cover-up because no one is ever here. I'm on the bottom step when the doorbell rang. I figured it was the pizza guy, I didn't care if I just had a bikini on so I opened the door and saw Blake standing there. "Oh sorry, I-I just forgot my phone in your dad's office..." Blake said. I rolled my eyes, "No biggie, c'mon in." I opened the door wider and saw the pizza guy coming up the long driveway, I turned to Blake, "one sec." and I walk down to the pizza guy. I pay him and take the sausage, pepperoni, cheese, mushroom, and onion pizza- it may sound gross but it's my favorite- and walk back inside. I put the pizza on the kitchen table, grab a slice and turn to Blake, "Want a piece?" I say taking a bite. He shakes his head, "No thanks, I just need my phone..." he looks around. I nod, "right right...DAD!" I yell. Blake looks surprised, but hey he doesn't know me. "What Devon?" "Blake's here he left his phone in your office!" I yell back. He comes running out of his office holding Blake's phone, "Oh here you are, I was just going to call your father to tell him your phone was here." Blake smiled, "Thank you Mr. Sommers." Then my dad looked at me, in my bikini, eating a pizza with 5 toppings on it, it must have been quite a sight, "Having people over to swim tonight D?" I laughed, "Yeah right." I grabbed the pizza box and my towel, and walked out back.
    Blake's POV:
    I must've looked confused when Devon said yeah right, because Mr. Sommers smiled and said, "She's not the social type...I don't even think she has any friends, always by herself, and she gets detention a lot, I just don't know what's with her." I felt kind of uncomfortable talking about her, since she was my age, but I just nodded and said, "Well she doesn't seem awkward like she doesn't have any friends." He smiled, then quickly took it off. I turned around and saw Devon standing by the door holding a water bottle, "Well I'm glad I'm not awkward," then she turned to her dad, "You confide in him about me? You just met the kid today!" I widened my eyes, did she just call me a kid? I opened my mouth to apologize but she turned to me and said, "Save it" and walked back outside. I turned to Mr. Sommers, "I'm sor-" He interrupted me, "No no she's right, it was no place of me to tell you all that I'm sorry." We shook hands and I was on my way again. When I got home I realized I left my phone there again on the kitchen counter where Mr. Sommers put it down. Great, now Devon's gonna think I'm just trying to see her again. I decided to ignore it and just pretend I didn't realize it.
    *is anyone reading this?? if not then i probs wont continue...please comment/fave!

  9. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 29, 2011 10:10am UTC
    Careless: Chapter 2
    Blake POV:
    As I was talking to Mr. and Mrs. Sommers out of the corner of my eye I saw someone brush past me towards the stairs. I didn't want to look and see who it was, I didn't want to disrespect Mr. and Mrs. Sommers, after all, we were discussing them writing songs for me, so I pretended like I didn't notice. This worked until Mrs. Sommers called the girl Devon. I smiled, turned towards the stairs, and looked up to see this beautiful girl, about 17 years old, my age, with dark brown hair in small curls with purple streaks, and bright blue eyes, she was gorgeous. I shook my head to clear the thoughts so I wouldn't stare. "Hi" she says in a voice that's also forced to sound polite. She smiled, but it was definitley a fake smile, she turns to go back upstairs as her mom calls out, "Wait honey we want to introduce you to someone!" She drops her bag on the stairs and walks back down the stairs. She walked over to stand next to her dad with her hands in her back pockets. "Devon, this is Blake, we were just discussing a deal with him" Mr. Sommers said. Then he turned to me and said, "And Blake this is Devon, our daughter, she's a junior in high school." I smiled, me too, "Hi Devon" I said. She just nodded her head like the sup nod. "Do you sing or play any instruments?" I asked trying to make conversation. She shrugged, "Nahh they tried to get me to sing when I was little but that was a disaster, I play the drums a little but I'm not any good." I smiled and nodded. "Blake, here sings and plays the guitar!" her mom said. I smiled "Yeah, nothing big yet though..." Mr. Sommers laughed, "Well we'll help you change that!" "Thank you sir" I repsonded. "Can I go upstairs now?" Devon asked. Her mom looked at her in that kind of "be nice" face but nodded. "See ya!" she said to me, "Bye!" I replied. What was with her? She walked half way up the stairs to where she dropped her backpack, picked it up, then walked the rest of the way up. I turned back towards Mr. and Mrs. Sommers, "You'll have to excuse her, she has a mind of her own." I smiled, "No no she seems very nice." They just laughed. "Well thank you again for meeting with me." I said and held out my hand for each of them. "It was a pleasure" Mrs. Sommers said. "We'll discuss another meeting in the future?" Mr. Sommers asked. I nodded "That would be great thank you!" and I walked out the door to my car.
    Devon's POV:
    When I heard the loud engine of a sports car I looked out my window to see Blake driving off. He was probably disappointed that I didn't try to make a move, I admit he is really hot, but I'm not drooling over him by any means. When he was out of sight I walked downstairs into the kitchen. "Devon!" My mom called from her office, I sighed, "Yeah?" I called. "Be nice to him, he's gonna get us big money!" I smirked "Like we don't have enough already?" I looked into the door and she smiled and shook her head jokingly. I'd be fine living in a small house, with no pool, no movie theater basement, no game room, no indoor pool, no recording studio. But this is what it is.
    *sorry Devon's POV is short...breakfast time(:

  10. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 29, 2011 9:45am UTC
    *so, it was a tie between this and The Doctors, I have some idea where to go with this one so I'm gonna do this one first, then The Doctors after(: Thanks to the 4 people who voted...
    Careless: Chapter 1
    "YOUR LATE DEVON!" My teacher yells at me as I walk in the classroom 5 minutes late. I glare at her and walk to my seat. I slam my backpack onto the floor and take out my homework from the night before. Teachers and students think I'm a lousy senior who doesn't give a crap about life. If they only knew..."DEVON!" My teacher snaps me out of my thoughts, "What did you get for number 4 on the homework?" I look down, "The square root of -5i." My teacher looks surprised, she always thinks I'm going to get the answer wrong because I never pay attention, it's not that I don't want to pay attention, it's just that I don't have to. I have almost photographic memory, anything I learn stays in my brain forever. That's why I like my 'I don't give a crap' look that I was assigned with freshman year. I don't really have any friends, but I don't mind being a loner, it gives me more time to work on my artwork. I'm not a nerd who gets made fun of by the cheerleaders, I mind my own business, so no one bothers me.
    The bell rings, I pick up my backpack, throw it over my shoulder and I'm about to walk out of the class when my teacher, Ms. Smout, calls me over. I roll my eyes and turn towards her and sigh visibly for her to see. She pretends not to notice but I know she does. "Devon, I've noticed you've been late to classes lately and not paying attention. I just want to make sure everything is okay." I look at her and say, "Yeah I'm fine" and with that, I turn around on my black converse and walk out of the classroom. The thing I really hate about school is the teachers all think they know you and that they can fix any problem you have. HA! If only! I walked into my next class as the bell rang, Mr. Black glared at me, "Ms. Smout was talking to me, you can ask her on your date tonight." I sat in my seat as the rest of the class tried to hold in laughter and Mr. Black turned red. "Devon, I will see you after school today." I shrugged, "Whatever." I don't get why all teachers are so annoying, they don't want to spend their afternoon with me and I don't want to spend it with them. The rest of the day went by pretty much the same, people ignored me, teachers yelled at me. As the bell rang for the end of the day I walked into Mr. Black's classroom for my after school detention to see him and Ms. Smout getting it on, if you know what I mean. I smiled, "I guess this means no detention?" and I shut the door and walked to my car.
    I walk in the front door of my mansion, yes my mansion. My parents are some famous song writers for some famous people, I don't know and I don't care. When I was little they tried to get me to sing, but then realized how bad I was and decided to let me be my own person instead of paying for private singing lessons. Yeah, like that would've helped. Anyone, this is how I turned out. Black converse, skinny jeans, dark purple tight fitted shirt, dark brown hair in small curls with purple streaks underneath. This was basically my everyday outfit. My mom was furious when I bought all these dark colors and skinny jeans, she wanted a daughter that would be a famous singer and dress in all designer clothing. No way am I ever going to carry around a Juicy Couture purse. So anyways. I walk inside to see this incredible hot guy talking to my parents. What? What am I thinking! I'm Devon, the loner...I can't fall for a guy! I try to quietly walk upstairs before they see me. "Devon?" I slowly turn around to see the 3 of them looking at me. I put on a fake smile, everyone knows its fake, but they pretend to think it's real. "Hi" I say and turn to walk back upstairs. "Wait honey!" my mom calls, "We want to introduce you to someone." I drop my bag on the stairs and walk downstairs.
    *sorry it's kinda boring, I was trying to get all the boring descriptive stuff over with(: as always, feedback is appreciated!!!!

  11. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 26, 2011 12:50pm UTC
    Okay so I'm going to write a new story(: please comment with which of the 3 you think i should write!!
    A) The Doctors
    I'm running down a long hallway, sweating, out of breath, but I can't stop, someone is chasing me and if I stop they're gonna kill me. I can't stop. I have to keep running, I have to keep run- "Honey? Honey are you okay?" I sit up on my bed out of breath and all sweaty. I see my mom standing next to my bed. I relax, and look up at my mom, "Yeah, it was just another nightmare." My mom shakes her head and says, "We have to go back to that doctor Madison, that medicine he gave you for your nightmares just isn't working. This is your 3rd one this week!" I nodded, "yeah, I guess we should."
    I guess I should introduce myself, I'm Madison, 15, a sophomore in high school, and I've been having these terrible nightmares for as long as I can remember. We go to doctors all over the country for advice, but nothing they say seems to help at all.
    B) Careless
    "YOUR LATE DEVON!" My teacher yells at me as I walk in the classroom 5 minutes late. I glare at her and walk to my seat. I slam my backpack onto the floor and take out my homework from the night before. Teachers and students think I'm a lousy senior who doesn't give a crap about life. If they only knew..."DEVON!" My teacher snaps me out of my thoughts, "What did you get for number 4 on the homework?" I look down, "The square root of -5i." My teacher looks surprised, she always thinks I'm going to get the answer wrong because I never pay attention, it's not that I don't want to pay attention, it's just that I don't have to. I have almost photographic memory, anything I learn stays in my brain forever. That's why I like my 'I don't give a crap' look that I was assigned with freshman year. I don't really have any friends, but I don't mind being a loner, it gives me more time to work on my artwork. I'm not a nerd who gets made fun of by the cheerleaders, I mind my own business, so no one bothers me.
    C) Best Friends Forever
    Me and my best friend Lilly have been inseparable since birth. Our mom's were best friends when they were little, and they had me and Lilly a week apart. I don't know how I would survive without Lily. She's basically my other half. I'm quiet, smart, and I know what to say to people. Lily is outgoing, crazy, and need's to think before she speaks. Lily makes me be me. In school, I'd probably be a loner with no friends, Lily meets people 1 second and the next, we have plans to go to the mall with them that weekend. It's great. I'm Carly, 14 years old, and starting high school. Everyone says high school is when you meet your real friends, I already know my real friend is Lily and that we will be best friends forever.
    Which one do you think I should write? I like all of them so it's truely up to youu!!!! THANKS(:

  12. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 23, 2011 2:13pm UTC
    Hello there~
    If you've read either of my stories "This Is The Story Of A Girl" or "Friend or Sister?" then please please give me some feedback(: Should I write another?
    A HUGE THANK YOU GOES OUT TO ALL MY FOLLOWERS!!!! SO THANK YOU!!!!!!! (:

  13. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 23, 2011 2:09pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 18
    Corey's POV:
    Kailin and I have been dating for awhile now, and today she is helping me move into my dorm at Penn State. "Where do you want these?" She asked holding up my boxes of books and magazines. I shrugged, "I don't know! Your a girl you can design my dorm!" She smiled happily and got right to work. We worked out that every other weekend I would come home and the opposite weekends Kailin would come and stay with me.
    6 years later:
    Kailin just graduated from Penn State, 3 years after my graduation from there. At the reception, I popped the question. Yepp, I asked her to marry me. She said yes and we got married that summer. Our mom's were thrilled(:
    2 years later:
    We welcome our first child, we named her Karlie she has Kailin's eyes, and Kailin thinks she has my smile. And with that- we lived happily ever after.
    **I hope you like it(: I do, although I like my first story better. Should I write another? Let me know! As always- feedback is loved <3 haha

  14. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 23, 2011 1:55pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 17
    Corey's POV:
    I pulled up to Kailin's house, beeped the horn of my jeep and a few seconds later she came out to my car. I wanted to make it as unlike a date as possible, which is why I beeped instead of getting out of the car to get her. She got in the car and laughed. "You beeped?" she asked. I smiled "Yes I did. Ready?" Before she could reply I quickly said "wait-don't answer that. of course you're ready or else you wouldn't be sitting in my car." She smiled and said, "5 points and a gold star for you for remembering." I laughed and said "and five points and a gold star for you for remembering that." Kailin laughed and I drove off to the pizza place. I ordered the same pizza we got the first time, and as I was paying the check she asked, "what movie are we seeing?" I smiled and said, "you'll see." She rolled her eyes and stood up. I stood up to and we walked back to my car. I drove to the movies, got our tickets from the box office and before she could see them I handed them to the ticket collector. She glared at me then walked to the snack bar. We ordered two cokes and a large popcorn for us to share. I led her to the theater and that's when she realized it was Saw 7. She smiled big, and I laughed and said, "my mom thought I was crazy for taking you to see this, but I told her you would love it." She was still smiling as she said, "Yess!! I do! She grabbed my arm since my hands were holding the popcorn and coke and pulled me into the theater. We took a seat at the back of the theater and were shocked to see very few people in the theater. When the movie started Kailin instantly reached for my hand, I didn't mind, it wasn't a date, she was just scared.
    Kailin's POV:
    I instantly reached for Corey's hand as the movie started, then instantly regretted it. I didn't want to make is awkward by letting go though, so I just kept my hand there. I love scary movies, but only when I'm with someone who I feel safe with. Towards the middle of the movie I noticed my head was laying on Corey's chest and his arm was tightly around me. I didn't mind, this is one freaky and scary movie. After a few more minutes I looked up at Corey as he was intensely watching the movie. I guess he felt my eyes on him because he looked down. I stretched my neck up and quickly kissed him, on the lips. He looked surprised, but I just smiled and turned my attention back to the movie. I felt Corey hug me a little then go back to watching the movie.
    Corey's POV:
    When Kailin kissed me, I was shocked. But I didn't mind, I've been wanting to do that since dinner last night, but I didn't want to press her since she just broke up with Matt. I hugged her a little then went back to watching the movie. When the movie ended we both stood up and as I was about to gather our empty popcorn tub and empty coke bottles Kailin surprised me and pulled me into a tight hug. I know she likes my hugs so I just hugged her back tightly.
    After we went out for ice cream I dropped her off at home, this time I walked her up to her door. Kissed her goodnight and watched as she went inside.
    **THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GONNA BE THE LAST ONE :(

  15. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 23, 2011 1:25pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 16
    Kailin's POV:
    As soon as my heart got back to it's regular beat I picked up my phone and saw it was Corey calling. I immediately got butterflies, great, I thought, I can't fall for him again. "Hello?" I said into the phone. "Hey K, it's Corey." I smiled and laughed "What?" he said. "I know it's you one because of caller ID, and two because you're the only one who calls me K." He laughed and said, "whatever." There was a short silence until I broke it by saying "You called because?" He laughed agian, "right right! wanna go out tomorrow night?" I froze, 'a date? Really Corey' i thought. "not as a date!" Corey quickly added. I breathed out not realizing I had held my breath when he said that. "sure. where are we going?" I replied. "I was thinking pizza, a movie, then ice cream?" "Okay sounds good! I'm not doing anything tomorrow so whenever is fine!" I agreed. "Alright cool, I'll check the movie times and text you tomorrow." "Okay! Bye!" "See ya." I hung up and smiled. I'm so glad we are friends again. I didn't realize how empty I was when we weren't talking.
    Corey's POV:
    YESSSS! I got her to go out as friends! I wasn't gonna try to pull anything. I just wanted to make sure everything really was all good. I ran downstairs to our desktop computer since my laptop is dead and I can't find my charger. My mom was sitting at her desk next to the computer and watched me as I went to look up the movie times. I was just waiting for her to ask me what movie I was seeing and who I was seeing it with. "So..." my mom said. I laughed, "I was waiting for you to ask me something." She smiled and said, "who are you going to the movies with?" "Kailin." I replied matter of factly. Her face lightened up, then she saw I was checking the movie times for Saw 7. "SAW? COREY ARE YOU CRAZY?" I laughed, "chill mom, Kailin and I love scary movies!" She shrugged and went back to whatever she was working on.
    **Sorry it's short, I had to break it up, next chapter is their "date"!!! haha I'm excited to see what I'm gonna write(: yepp I'm still trying to figure out the ending.
    **I'm predicting like 2 or 3 more chapters just so you knoww(:

  16. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 22, 2011 4:26pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 15
    Corey's POV:
    We walked downstairs, Kailin in front of my and sat down at the table. Our mom's looked at us expecting an explanation, but we didn't offer any, so they didn't ask. We ate our dinner talking about school, and my plans after I graduate. Kailin and I both stiffened at the thought that next year, I won't be here. I shrugged it off, "I'm just trying to live in the moment." I said smiling after Kailin's mom asked what I wanted to do. They all laughed and we continued to eat. After dinner Kailin and I went back upstairs and sat on my bed. We just talked and laughed like we've been best friends with no problems. "Corey?" my mom called upstairs, "Kailin and her mom are going to leave now." I look over at Kailin, she shrugs and stands up. I follow her downstairs to the front door. "See ya K." She smiled, "Bye Corey." My mom shut the door behind them and quickly turned to face me, "spill" was all she said. I laughed, "Mom, Kailin was just upset cause her and Matt broke up, I knew I never liked that kid, I'll make sure he doesn't make varsity next year!" My mom gave me the 'that's not very nice' look and said "soooo? are you two friends again? anything more?" I could tell her and Kailin's mom were talking about trying to fix us up again. I just shook my head, "No mom. Strictly friends." I walked around her and into the family room to watch TV and I heard my mom cleaning up and calling someone on the phone.
    Kailin's POV:
    I got into the car still smiling, I loved when Corey called me K. It was like my secret nickname, it started a few days after we met, he probably created it to annoy me, but then it just kinda stuck. He hasn't called me K since, well a long time. As soon as we got in the car my mom bombarded me with questions about Corey and I. As I was about to answer, her cell phone rang. Knowing my mom can't drive and talk on the phone at the same time I fish it out of her purse to see Corey's mom calling. "Hello?" "Hi Sue?" I smile, people are always mistaking me for my mom on the phone, "No this is Kailin, my mom's driving." "Oh, well can you just tell her to call me when she gets a chance please?" "Sure thing! Bye!" "Bye Kailin!" I hang up and put the phone back into her purse. "That was Corey's mom, she sounded excited and she said to call you when you get a chance." My mom nods and we pull into the driveway. I get out quickly before my mom has a chance to ask me questions again, since I was lucky and she got distracted with the first set. I walk into my room and lay on my bed. I'm so glad Corey and I talked, I feel better knowing that we're friends, happier, lighter almost. I get up and turn on my TV and start watching Pretty Little Liars. I watch as they are going through Ian's stuff when my phone rings and I jump. I lay there for a second trying to calm my heart beat before I answer my phone.
    *comments?

  17. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 18, 2011 10:11am UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 14
    Corey's POV:
    Once she calmed down Kailin told me what happened. "I-I-I Matt was cheating on his real girlfriend who he's been with for two years! TWO YEARS! he was cheating on her with me!" She paused, "when she found out, she started fighting me, I'm not a fighter you know me." I smiled, I couldn't picture Kailin fighting anyone. She continued, "She started hitting me, slapping me, and pulling my hair. A typical girl fight." She shrugged, "Needless to say, Matt and I-br-bro-broke up." She started crying again, not as heavily as last time just a few tears. I wiped them away for her. It killed me to see her so upset over breaking up with Matt, but I didn't want to tell her how I really feel about her, it'll just make dinner more awkward. We were sitting in silence just looking down, my arm was around her shoulders and she was trying to control her breathing. "Dinner's ready!" my mom said as she walked into the doorway of my room, we didn't even hear her come up. "Oh...sorry...come down whenever you're ready..." she said then went back downstairs. Kailin sat up, wiping her eyes she said, "I guess we should go downstairs..." I took my hand off her shoulders and she stood up, walking into the bathroom to splash water on her face. She came out looking refreshed and she smiled at me, "thanks for listening" she said blushing a little and looking down. I nodded "anytime." I walked over to her and looked into her eyes, I could tell she was a little uneasy and that she didn't want to kiss me, I just smiled and pulled her into a hug.
    Kailin's POV:
    Corey was staring into my eyes. I thought for a second he was going to kiss me. I wasn't ready for this, but in a sense I didn't want to "ruin the moment" so I just stared back into his eyes. Then he just pulled me into a hug. I relaxed and breathed out relived it didn't turn into a kiss. I love when Corey hugs me. I feel like I'm protected from anything in the entire world. His muscular arms around my small body, I felt safe. I didn't want to move. I rested my head on his chest, yes his chest, Corey's a lot taller than me, and I felt him tighten his grip. "Kailin?" he said. Oh god, please don't say I love you. "Yeah?" I replied not moving my head at all. "I know I messed up, but I still love you, I don't know if it's a brother type of love or if it's a relationship type of love. But what I do know, is that I want to be friends again, with zero weirdness between us." He pulled out of the hug, dang it! I wanted to stay there forever. He looked into my eyes, that's kind of how I feel too, at least he had the guts to say it out loud. I smiled and that seemed to relax him a bit. "Corey, that's how I feel too. But for now can we go back to how we were when we were first friends. How we told each other everything?" He smiled "Yeah." I pulled him back into a hug and he laughed. "I love your hugs" I mumbled into his chest, "I feel like nothing can hurt me." He kissed the top of my head, "I won't let anything hurt you. Ever."
    **Sorry it's been so long! I have exams all this week but a snow day today so I had time to write! How do you like the different point of views. I really like reading stories with different POV's so I thought I'd give it a try(: As always, I'm open for feedback and ideas! xo

  18. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 11, 2011 7:50pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 13
    Before the basketball accident happened I was actually talking to Nick, as little as possible, but I was socializing. Now of course, this happened. Now I can't stop thinking about Kailin, again. But we have been making progress, we have been saying hi to each other in the hallways, or smiling if we see each other from a difference. I just wish we could still be friends. You know? Like, even though we broke up, it doesn't mean our friendship is over. Whatever. It is was it is. Unfortunately, our dating created a friendship between our mom's. So every few weeks while we were dating the 4 of us would all have dinner together. They stopped planning these dinners after we broke up so it wouldn't be awkward. But I told my mom we've been saying hi to each other and I guess Kailin's been telling her mom the same thing, so they planned a dinner for tonight, Friday night. I was kind of nervous, we haven't had a real conversation in awhile. We'll see. I was wearing jeans and a t-shirt when the doorbell rang. I was sitting at the breakfast bar in our kitchen and my mom went to get the door. Kailin came in wearing skinny jeans and a baby-doll tank top with her hair in small curls, and her mom following her. We all stood in the kitchen for a few minutes just talking when my mom, of course, had to say "Why don't you guys go upstairs, we'll call you down when dinners ready." I looked at my mom sharply and she smiled innocently. I looked over and Kailin and she was looking at her mom the same way, then she looked at me and we both turned to walk upstairs. We got into my room, and unlike previous dinners, we left my door open. We just sat on my bed for a little just talking about school, and I asked her how Matt was. She hesitated then replied, "He's good" then added quietly "a little too good." I don't think she meant for me to hear it, but I wanted to make sure he wasn't hurting her or anything. "What do you mean a little too good?" I asked her seriously. She shook her head, "nothing nothing." as she started to turn away I grabbed her hand and for the first time since our break-up, we made eye contact with our eyes locked. That's when I noticed it, her face was really red. It was like a blushing sort of pink, it was really red, hid well by makeup. "Kailin? What's wrong? Did Matt hurt you?" She looked like she was about to cry. "Kailin, what happened?" she turned to me and started crying, I took her in my arms and just held her, hugging her. For a good 5 minutes we stayed like that as she cried. She finally pulled away, "sorry." she said, rubbing her eyes. I looked at her, "it's fine," I said softly, "but what happened?"
    *sorry its been such a long time since ive written! ive been sooo busyy!!!
    *THANK YOU XxbubblygirlxX FOR YOUR IDEAS!! YOU'RE AMAZING (: I'm not going to use your idea exactly so that way you're still surprised with what happens but I'm going to use it as an outline!! THANKS AGAIN(:

  19. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 5, 2011 6:01pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 12
    It's been two weeks and Kailin and I still haven't talked. I think she's overreacting, but I guess I could have pulled away sooner. The two classes we have together we don't talk, even 2nd period when we sit next to each other, she just angles her body another way. The most awkward thing is when we pass each other in the hallway and we're like the only 2 people in the hallway, we both pretend not to see each other, but we both know we're trying to trick ourselves. Luckily Lindsey hasn't talked to me, I guess she got the message at that party. My alarm clock started beeping and I rolled over and turned it off. I don't know why I even set it, I hardly sleep anymore, I just replay that night over and over again. I got out of bed and went to take a shower. I put on some jeans, since it's getting colder, and a t-shirt, and with that, I walked downstairs. "Good morning! How did you sleep?" my mom instantly asks. I shrug, "Not much better then any other night." She looks concerned, whatever, it's my life not hers. I grab a breakfast bar and go get my backpacks together. I walk back into the kitchen with my shoes on and backpack all ready to go. My mom looks at me, "Have a good day!" she says cheerfully. I just smirk and walk out to my car. When I arrive at school I see Kailin talking to someone, as I park my car I see that that person is Matt, her ex. It looks like they're getting friendly again. I sigh, grab my backpack, and get out of my car. Unfortunately I have to walk past them to get to first period, so I quickly walk by pretending not to notice. When I get a little farther down I turn around to see her looking at me, crap. We both quickly look away and I walk to first period. I've been kind of a loner since we broke up. I mean I don't have any particular reason not to, it's just that I don't want to. I take my seat in first period next to Nick. "Hey man! Where were you Friday? Claire's party was awesome!" I laugh, "Nick you think every party's awesome." He smiles "Corey, c'mon you haven't done anything since...yeah...you've gone to school, then football practice, then home. Then to school, football practice, then home. You need to get out more! Tonight after football I'm taking you out on a man date." I laugh again, "A man date? Can't we just say we're hanging out?" I smile, Nick shrugs, "Yeah yeah call it what you want." Nick looks towards the door, his eyes widen, then he turns back to me, "So what have you been up to?" he says. I narrow my eyebrows (in a confused way), "what?" I turn to look at the door and Nick pulls on my arm, but it's too late, what I saw was enough. Kailin kissing Matt. I turned back to Nick and looked down, he hit my arm, "Corey, don't let her get to you." he said quietly right before the bell rang for class to start.
    That night Nick and I were going to play basketball at the gym to get ready for try-outs. Which turned out to be a big mistake. As we pulled into a parking lot I saw Kailin getting dropped off and walking into the gym. Nick pretended not to notice so that I wouldn't bring it up. He parked "Ready?" he said. I nodded, we went upstairs to the basketball court and saw Kailin taking 3-pointers on one side of the court. "We'll just stay on this side." Nick said. I looked at him, "Yeah I forgot, Kailin's a big basketball player, everyone thinks she'll make varsity." He nodded then we walked onto the court. We played one on one for awhile. Then, Nick being obnoxious hit the ball really hard on the backboard and it went flying to the other side of the court. Right as Kailin was about to take a shot, it whacked her on the back of her head and she fell to the ground. I glared at Nick then ran over to her. She was conscience thank god, she just got the wind knocked out of her. Her eyes fluttered open and she felt me holding her head up off the ground. She didn't say a word as she tried to get up. "That's not a good idea." I said gently pushing her back down. "Why? I'm fine just leave me alone." She tried to get up again, this time I let her, I didn't want her to me more mad at me then she already was. As soon as she stood up she almost fell but I caught her. She smiled at me then quickly wiped it off her face. HA! I thought, so she was trying to act mad! I helped her walk over to the bench and helped her sit down. "Sorry about that, Nick hates it when I score on him..." Kailin smiled a little then held her head. "Are you sure you're okay? I can call your mom for you." I said taking my phone out of my pocket. She looked up at me and nodded, "thanks." she said quietly. I called her mom and helped Kailin out to the car. Then I went back up to Nick I glared at him, grabbed my things and left. He quickly followed because unfortunately he was my ride home. He dropped me off, I took a shower, then went to bed.
    *sorry it's long a kinda boring...any ideas on what should happen next??

  20. justdance08 justdance08
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    January 4, 2011 7:05pm UTC
    Friend or Sister? Chapter 11
    My first mistake, not realizing what was happening until too late. I felt Kailin trying to let go of my hand, but if there was one thing I could do, it was not to break my promise. I wasn't going to let her walk home alone. I pushed Lindsey off of my "WHAT ARE YOU DOING? WE ARE DONE LINDSEY! D-O-N-E! I'M WITH KAILIN NOW SO JUST STOP!!!" Kailin looked down, "yeah it sure looks like your with me..." I looked at Kailin, I could feel the sorrow on my face, I wish I could just punch Lindsey! Lindsey just smirked and walked away. Kailin tried to let go of my hand again but I grabbed it tighter, she winced, "sorry" I mumbled. "Just let go of me" Kailin said. I looked at her and stared into her eyes, "I know I hurt you by not pulling away soon enough, I wish I realized what was happening sooner but I didn't, but I'm not going to break my promise. I'm going to at least walk you home, even..." I didn't want to say the next line. "Even what?" Kailin said quietly. I looked at her then looked down, "Even if you don't want to talk to me." Kailin didn't say anything after that, and that's when I realized she probably hated me. I walked her home in silence led her up to her door and let go of her hand. It swung down to her side and she walked inside and shut the door. I stood on her porch for a good 5 minutes then walked to my car, I looked up at her window and saw her looking at me but she quickly shut the blinds. I got in my car and drove home.
    The minute I walked in the door my mom came pouncing, "You're home early? Was it fun? Where's Kailin? Did she have fun? Why aren't you answer my questions? You look upset. Is everything okay?" And she kept rambling on for a minute or so before I finally spoke. I took a deep breath "I was talking to Kailin when Lindsey came over, she started making out with me, I didn't realize what was happening until it was too late. I pushed Lindsey away and she smirked and walked away." She looked upset "Aww I'm sorry." I looked at her, "Yeah that's not even the worse part..." My mom looked shocked "What?" she said quietly. I looked down, "I was holding Kailin's hand the whole time, I refused to let go because I promised her I'd walk her home. I didn't want her walking home by herself." My mom smiled a little, "Well...at least you didn't break your promise." I smirked to myself, "Yeah I didn't break my promise, but I bet I broke her heart...and mine too..." I walked upstairs without saying another word. I took out my phone and was about to call Kailin when I realized I already was, I butt dialed her for 20 minutes...since I was standing on her porch. She heard everything. At least she knows its the truth. "Hello?" I said into the phone. No answer, then the line went dead. Crap, she really was mad.
    *feeback?

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