hi guys, i just wrote this poem today and i want some feedback thnx :3
crushed and confused
only for you to be amused
you tear through the walls I've built to protect my self from your lies
but the pain and the torture you put me through is what keeps me by your side
im breaking away
im finally fighting back
im moving on from your bullshit
and I'm never gonna say i wish i hadn't
You worked me til my hands and feet couldnt stand the touch
til my heart felt not only broken but incapable of love
now he comes and tells me he loves me, but all i can hear is you screaming dont let them touch me
but now im losing my mind because i cant hear a compliment
because im afraid its followed up with all the nasty words you've said
so i cant accept his love, when you have burned into my mind, my eyes, my soul, that im incapable of causing anyone one to love me so
i just wake in the same old bed, crying from the nightmares you've brought to my head..
its never over with you, its never done
but you havent completely won
im still fighting......