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Fight For Her
chapter one


Jay

I remember standing ourside this building for the first time three years ago.Three years ago, why I was stupid. Three years ago when I made a big mistake. Three years ago when Hunter was still my best friend. 
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It's day one of freshman year. The classroom is still pretty empty and the only light is coming through the windows. It's the first class of the days it's English. I'm not very good at English. Something I'm good at is hurting myself. Accident prone should be my middle name. So I sprained my ankle and get to start the year on crutches. That automatically put me in the first desk right next to the door. I could turn around and talk to the kids in the desk behind me but he's super quiet but there's really no point. Then suddenly, the seat next to me was filled. I glance over and and see a girl with long reddish-brown hair that flows well past her shoulders has filled the desk. She catche's me staring,these peircing green eyes meet mine for the first time, and gives me a smile. Did my stomach just flutter?
"What's your name?" She asked. Huh? Is she talking to me?
"Ja-Jason Vance." Why the hell am I stuttering?
"Hunter Denver. My parents thought they were having a boy and decided to stick wiht the name anyway."
I laughed. We had an instant connection. I knew we were gonna be good friends. Who knew by Feburary I'd screw everything up.
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"Welcome back, Mr. Vance." Our dean, Mr. Trist greeted me in his office. "I trust I don't need someone to show you around the building?"
"Well it has been a few years." I joked. 
"Okay your locked is still the same. Here's the combonation. "
"Thanks, Mr. Trist."
"Glad to have you back." 
I left his off and headed for the second floor. I shoved my stuff in my locker and grabbed what I needed for my first class. I was in such a hurry I barely noticed the once grey lockers were now red. I wanted to find her right away. The sooner the better. Then I heard a voice.
"J.V. ?" 
I knew the voice instantly, my best friend Riker Hudson.
"Dude is this for real?! You're back?!" He basically jumped into my arms.
"Yes, it's real. Yes, I'm back."
"Why aren't you on the team yet?"
He had to be talking about soccer. I did want to play but it wasn't my first priority.

"I got something I gotta do first." I started toward her locker again. If mine was the same, her's had to be too. 
"What?" Riker asked.
"Come with me and find out." I got to the last locker in her row. Thats when I saw her. Se was putting some stuff on the top shelf of her locker. I never understood why she put stuff up there, she could barely reach it. I was always getting the stuff down from there for her. Well, at least I used to. I took her in for a moment before making my move. It was the first time seeing her since freshman year. She was just as pretty, if not prettier than before. Her hair still hung long and she totally pulled off the cliche catholic school girl uniform. Just as I'm about to move forward, Riker grabbed my arm.
"You sure about this? I have a good hunch of what you're about to do."
"I'm sure. I have to do this." I took his hand off my arm. Deep breath Vance, you can do this. I walked over to Hunter's locker, her view was blocked by the door but she spoke immediately. 
"Hey baby."
Baby? Hell, maybe this was going to be easier than I thought. The locker door slammed shut, snapping me out of my thoughts and he tone immedaitely changed.
"Jason?!"

 
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