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Golden Boy
chapter one

Brooklyn 
 
*Flashback Freshman Year*
He stood out to me immediately. The dark hair and dark eyes. He was tan, a sweet golden brown, that truly showed his spent his summer outside. His dress shirt sleeves were rolled up to his elbow. His shirt was black and his tie was was a nice blue. How had I not seen this guy before? The freshman class wasn't that big?  Did we have a class together and I just never notice? But how could I not notice him? He was too cute. Suddenly he looked right at me. Oh no he caught me staring at him. Wait what was he doing? He broke away from the group of guys he was with. Was he coming over here? Oh.my.god. he was! 
"Hey." He said. His voice was already deep. 
"Hi." I barely squeaked out and actually looked down and played with the hem of my dress. 
"You're Brooklyn right? I think your in my lunch and science class." 
"Yeah I am." Lunch and science. Two times a day and I had no idea who this guy was. I really have to pay attention more. Well might as well go the honesty route. "I'm sorry, I can't remember your name."
"Vinny Carlson."
Vinny? Vinny Carlson? The kid who's absent all the time?
"Your the kid who the teacher is constantly calling absent."
He laughed, thank god. 
"Yeah. I've been playing a lot of fall baseball tournaments."
"Ahh your a baseball player."
"Yeah. You like baseball?"
"Yeah."
As soon as I said yeah he was talking a mile a minute, but I didn't mind. I wanted to hear everything he had to say. He was telling me all about his summer ball team and all the cool places they went for tournaments. The dance was going on behind us. I don't know how many girls spend their freshman homecoming against a wall chatting with a guy all night but I didn't have a single complaint. The fast paced music that was blasting throughout the room slowed down. 
"Hey, wanna dance?" Vinny asked holding out a hand to me. I couldn't think of  the right words so I just took his hand. He led me out to the gym floor where some of the crowd had dispersed because of the slow song. He slipped his arms around my waist and brought me close to him. I swear a shiver ran down my back. After a bit of silent swaying, Vinny spoke again.
"Man, I should of asked you to be my date. Then I would have gotten to hold you this close all night and not just for one slow song."
"You can hold me this close whenever you want." I smiled at him.
Umm excuse me, who said that cause I know I would never have the confidence to say that. 
"Sounds like a plan to me." 
And that's where our relationship began. And throughout the year everything was perfect. Freshman year was perfect.
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It the first day of school. My first period class is american government. One of the perks of the first day is being able to sit wherever you want because most of the teachers don't care or have more important stuff to talk about. The teacher is okay, but he's also the baseball coach. From my seat I hear him say. "Well, well, well. If it isn't the Golden Boy?"
Oh you gotta be kidding me. It's my senior year now and I hate baseball. Well actually I hate my high school baseball team. If we're going to be exact I hate my ex.
I hate the Golden Boy.

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Golden Boy chapter one Brooklyn *Flashback Freshman Year* He

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Brainy_Barbie · 1 decade ago
this is sounding really good so far
get the next chapter out soon PLEASE!!!
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ArtLover · 1 decade ago
Dude you soo have to continue this story, it sounds exciting to know what happened!!! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASEEEEEEEEE...
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dapz95 · 1 decade ago
please continue with this! i really like where its heading :0 and yeah, notify me too!
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BreeeFayy* · 1 decade ago
you're a really good writer! i write too; i want to finish my first novel by the end of the summer. Anyways, can you notify me? I really like this
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