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Like a soft breeze I feel you there,
Though many can't, I feel you.
I know you'd want me to smile,
So I do my best, 
I know you'd want me to move on,
So that I did. 
I wish I knew,
But I know I can't,
How are you?
What's there after death?
What is it like, 
Up in the sky?
What is it like,
Where the angels fly?
Though days go by,
And you are no longer breathing,
You live in my dreams,
Where you'll always be alive.
Though nights drag on,
And your words no longer come,
They are written on my heart,
And I will never forget them.
Though you no longer say hello,
And I never said goodbye,
Please tell me,
What's it like where the angels fly?



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Written in memory of Alexander Fruk
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Author's note: I do not believe in Heaven or anything like that, but he did. So don't comment on the meanng of "the sky" Thanks.


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71 faves · 35 comments · Jun 1, 2013 5:44pm

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gone · depressed · poetry · angel · heaven · alexander · makingit · daltonspoetry · poems

*compassionate soul* · 1 decade ago
This is gorgeous! I wish I were able to write as wonderfully as you :) this is amazingly great! :)
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
thank you <3333
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*compassionate soul* · 1 decade ago
You're welcome :) <333
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*compassionate soul* · 1 decade ago
You're welcome :) <333
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Hi_Im_Sam · 1 decade ago
Seriously keep reading this and every time it gets to What is it like, Up in the sky?What is it like,Where the angels fly? My eyes turn into little mini waterfalls.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Awhhhhh sammmmmm you make me blush D: Its really not that good, but thank you :)
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Hi_Im_Sam · 1 decade ago
It really is.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Well thank you then :)
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Sapphire101 · 1 decade ago
I'm crying, why? Such a beautiful poem :') xo
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thank you <3
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Sapphire101 · 1 decade ago
No problem, would you mind if I saved this somewhere bc it's just so beautiful and it reminds me of someone I lost? <3
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Of course you can :) Just dont repost it without credit somewhere :3
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Sapphire101 · 1 decade ago
Icouldn't do that, thankb you so much :) x
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The Chosen One* · 1 decade ago
Awwh that's gorgeous :')
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Hi_Im_Sam · 1 decade ago
OMG its beautiful. nope I am not crying....Okay you got me I am
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Awhhh i'm sorry Sam D: but thank you so much <3
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Hi_Im_Sam · 1 decade ago
Wow you are magic with words. Read it again and nope not crying definately not. I just want to write that on my wall and my face and eat it amd just bathe in those words. Okay gone a little bit mad now but wow your words are like magic.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Omfg Sam you make me grin XD my writting is the only thing i like about me at all :3 That makes me happy! Thank you i needed it :)
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Hi_Im_Sam · 1 decade ago
Im glad to make such an inspirational and wonderful guy happy :)
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Awhhh now you've made it happen again D: you're a good guy :) thank you for your sweet comments
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cupcake_lover88 · 1 decade ago
Dalton with your permission I would like to say this at my grandpas furneral. Please.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
OMFG yes that would be amazing
Literally fangirling
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cupcake_lover88 · 1 decade ago
Thanks ill give you credit(:
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wordynerdy · 1 decade ago
absolutely amazing and beautiful. <3
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SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
Dalton ❤❤❤ darling your writing is so hauntingly beautiful I cannot even handle it. Love you, never stop writing
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thank you :)
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Miluiel* · 1 decade ago
Beautiful, like all your poems. Thought provoking and mind-captivating.
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iMakeSence · 1 decade ago
im very impressed ^..^ but all your quotes impress me,you are very out-spoken, creative and have a way with words.keep it up! :)
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
that made me smile :) thank you!
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iMakeSence · 1 decade ago
yay c":
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NightOwl18 · 1 decade ago
That is absolutely amazing.. I almost started crying.. Just thought you should know.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thank you :) im sorry that it made you sad though :cc
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NightOwl18 · 1 decade ago
Its okay :) it was just such a beautiful poem, I don't know your story, but to write something like that, something must have happened in your life, and Im so sorry for that, but if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here..
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
It is written for my ex/brother. He was like my brother, and he recently passed away with no warning really. I never said goodbye, and i know he was afraid to die because he was afraid it would kill me too. I hope hes at peace, i write to him very often :) My mind is a mess, i write to get the feelings straight
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NightOwl18 · 1 decade ago
Well Im happy to see that you have found a way to get your feelings out, I'm trying to work on that.. i guess you could say im a little lost when it comes to my mind.. haha oh well :)
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