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Its a Broken World
Chapter 36:
Courtney woke up in the hospital. Her eyelashes fluttered, she couldnt move, but she saw her family standing at the edge of her bed. She teared up, and fell back asleep. 

Courtney's Dream

She was in a meadow. It was green, blossomed and beautiful. She was thin, and in a white flowy dress. She saw someone. She walked to him. It was him the only guy she's liked for years now. He leaned in and kissed her. 

She woke up and stared at her family. The doctor came by to talk to her. 

Doctor: "Hello, we're speaking again, i had a feeling you'd be back"

Courtney:"I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, i just dont want to be fat." She started to cry.

Doctor: "Its okay everyone has fears. Just rest we'll have you healthy again, because sweetie your only 98 pounds, your 22 pounds under weight." She stared Courtney in the eyes.

Courtney: " Ive been thin for so long? but i could never see it?" The doctor nodded. 

Doctor: "Go to sleep, dont worry about it now." Courtney fell back to sleep. 

~

Ariana woke up in a basement. She looked up to find Natalia right next to her. She wanted to scream but her mouth was taped too. Natalia looked at her weak and sad she already lost all hope. Katrina's father walked back into the basement. Ariana tried to kick, but her legs werent strong enough to break handcuffs or even the chair. Her hands were close enough to her butt pocket to get her phone. She waited for him to leave.

Katrina's Father: " I told you, you wouldnt be alone for long." He pointed at Natalia. " And you're not going to be here for long. " Pointing at Ariana. He started to laugh. " Oh and Natalia, Ariana, the only reason i found you guys was because of one fine man right here." He pointed to a far shadow. Ariana and Natalia both looked to see Natalia's Father. Natalia struggled to scream. 

Natalia's Father: " Now, now i escaped expecting to find you at home, but i met Mr. Angelis along the way and we both had a desire, we needed to teach our disrespectful daughters a lesson. " He smiled and grabbed Natalia's hair and yanked it. "Look at what you make me do! You'll be the brat rotting in hell!" She stared crying, her nightmare was coming back.

~

Katrina walked up to an abandoned house, a couple houses  down. It was number 24, her father's amount of kills, what a coincidence. She sat behind a near by bush for any clues to confirm he was there. She sat for an hour thinking of any possible places Natalia could be if they weren't here. Finally she saw him walk out of the house to his car. He drove off. She walked over to a window and looked inside. She went all around the house and then she saw the small basement window. Ariana and Natalia were under it facing the other direction. It was so cold out. She cracked open the window and climbed down, when she landed she made a thud noise. Ariana and Natalia looked at her so happily. Katrina took off the tape. 

Ariana: " You have to hurry, he'll come back soon!"

Katrina:" Dont worry i'll get you guys out i promise. Plus i saw him leave" She undid the rope on Ariana and Natalia's arms.

Natalia:" Wait my father is here too did you see--" They heard someone clapping. Natalia's Father stood right there, Katrina turned around, and pulled out her gun.

NF: "Well, well, well. You must be his daughter. " 

Ariana:"Your dad is the other guy?"

Katrina:"Im sorry i didnt tell you, i am, im sorry. " She pointed the gun to him. " I'll shoot. I dont care, i'll do it remember i have my father's blood." Natalia's father smiled. "Do you have the keys for their handcuffs?" Katrina said calmly.

NF: "Of course, but you'd have to kill me first. "

Katrina: " Okay fine. " She readied the gun.

 
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ilybm123 · 1 decade ago
OH!!!! I can't wait!!! I am sooooo excited!!!! It is soooooo Intense!!!
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