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Remember That Night


No sound. No movement. No breaths. Just nothing. Nothing at all. It was like the world just stopped. Like time just...haulted. Like it was stuck. No one could see one thing. Pitch blackness surrounded everyone. A sharp tang of chills appeared on Kristina's arms and legs, even though it was abuot 85 degrees outside. Emptiness was the new vistor in the basement. Kristina felt dizzy. Was this for real? She became doubtful again. Even though she kept telling herself that this was just another stupid, stupid prank, she had that tiny ounce of doubt in her brain that this was really happening, a real thing. Omg. Please. Get. The. Lights. On. This. Is. Scaring. Me. Please. Just. Turn. Them-
 

Suddenly, it was like someone who just woke up after 20 years of sleeping. Like being blind for your whole life and finally seeing. The lights instantly and sharply turned back on. Heavy breathing now occupied the room. They were all panting and their chests let out a huge breath, like they've been holding it for hours. The tension in the room was released, like someone released their grip on them. They looked around at eachother.


Eyes wandered, scared eyes. Creeped out eyes. Wondering eyes. Confused eyes. Quick eyes. Panicky eyes. Full of doubt, confusion and fear.

Kristina looked around. She was glad the lights were on, but WHAT THE HELL? SHe was about to just close her eyes and thank God all was okay, but she noticed something. Where Jen had been sitting, was now a blank space and incompletion in the circle of friends. Jen...Jen...just here....was...just...here...

"Where's Jen?!"

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Interesting, huh? The suspence has came! I will be writing more soon, keep checking guys! LOVE YOU ALL!
~foreverkristinalynne :P

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Remember That Night No sound. No movement. No breaths. Just nothing.

6 faves · 1 comments · Jul 14, 2012 11:27am

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foreverkristinalynne · 1 decade ago
this is Chapter 7 sorry I never labeled it a chapter!
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