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a one direction fanfic

  Chapter 1-
"I'm hungry!" Niall whined as we all walked through the door of their hotel room. "Niall mate, that's old news." Said Liam. Louis laughed, as did Zayn. "I'll order a pizza, your hunger will have to wait a few more minutes niall." Harry said, everyone laughed. Harry took out his phone to order a pizza, while me, Gianna, and Natalie sat on a couch with Zayn, Lou, Nialler, and Liam to chat for a bit. "So, how are you lovely ladies?" Lou asked us. "Wonderful, at the moment." Gianna 
answered for all of us. "That's great." Zayn replied. "Pizza's gonna be here in 20." Harry said, walking over and looking down at the couch. "Wow, there's nowhere to sit.." He mumbled. "Maybe if you wanted to sit on my lap.." He started to say, looking at me and smirking. "Of course." I said, trying not to giggle, getting up and letting him sit down. He pat his leg, so i sat down on his lap. This had to be the best moment of my life so far, hands down. "HE'S MINE!" Lou yelled from
the other end of the couch. I laughed so hard, i thought i was going to die. "No booobear, no one can replace you..!" He said, emphasizing the o on boobear. I giggled a bit more, and Haz smiled at me. "God, when the hell is the pizza gonna get here? I'm starvin'!" complained Niall. "Shutup." Yelled Louis. Natalie laughed along with Niall, and i caught them looking into eachother's eyes for a slight moment. I smiled at them, hoping noone saw. How could this be happening
to us right now? We have to be the luckiest girls in the entire world.. The doorbell interrupted my thoughts. "PIIIIZZZAAAA!" Niall yelled. i laughed along with Natalie. "Niall calm down mate." Liam told him, smiling a little. Niall ran to answer the door, paying the pizza man and slamming the door, walking back to us. He sat down, opened the box and started shoving pizza in his mouth. "Care for some pizza, ladies?" Liam asked us. "Sure." We all agreed. I took a piece, and started
to take off the pepperoni. "What, you don't like pepperoni?!" Harry nearly yelled. "I'm a vegetarian, Harry." I said, laughing a little bit. "Oh, I'll eat that." Niall said, carefully taking the pepperoni out of my hand. "How could you deal with that? There's probably barely anything you can eat" Harry said. "I've gotten used to it.." I exclaimed. We finished eating the pizza, and Lou, Liam, Niall, and Natalie went in Lou's room to play xbox while Zayn, Gianna, Harry and I stayed in 
the main room, watching the tellie and eating popcorn. 
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Because i love your everything. a one direction fanfic♥

19 faves · 2 comments · Jun 30, 2012 12:02am

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Amanda721 · 1 decade ago
i like it :)
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Zane74 · 1 decade ago
Your writing only to get the story out, not to emote the reader , you need to go back & add detail & the story becomes heaps better I'm not a fan of one direction , but I suppose for fan fiction its not bad writing , if you want to have a look at what I mean theirs story's on my account -Ashlyn Larkin. AshlynMareeMuse is my witty. x
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