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FISH FRIEND
chapter  five
 


It's 12am. I'm not asleep. Oh look a text!
'Hey, that hug was pretty good. I know it's a little late tonight (12am), but I couldn't wait any longer. Wanna go out, beautiful? xxxx:)
-James
'
He made me speechless as always. I couldn't say no could I? I mean, there's nothing wrong with him, no exceptions, nothing stopping me so, I guess, yes?
'Oh my word yes! xxxx' I replied and as soon as I hit that send button, I nearly screamed. I was officially going out with James Girvan. 
Never in my entire school life, did I think we would ever go out. I always thought he was that 'guy-I-would-always-have-a-crush-on' sort of guy. But no. We are a couple. We are a match. We are a pair. We are partners. We are boyfriend and girlfriend.
'That's great babe. Meet me tomorrow, 6pm, at the seaside. xxx' replied James in a new text.
'Okay, gonna go 2 sleep now. Talk to u tomorrow xxxLoveu:)
'
I sent that text, once again speechless.
I had trouble sleeping. It kept me awake. It was the best feeling ever knowing that some guy actually loves me, actually has feelings for me. Well I can't say that just yet, because I don't know what will happen.
I woke up, 9am. 
"Dad, you will never guess what just happened?!?"
"What, tell me, tell me, tell me" He mimicked my voice (all high pitched at this exhilarating moment in time).
"Daaad!" I groaned, "James Girvan asked me out!"
"OMG NO WAY GIRLFRIEND?!" He said trying to act like a teenager... but failing. 
"Shut up," I said trying not to giggle. "You know the boy I always told you about?"
"Yea, I do pet! That's great!" Dad exclaimed, back to his original self.
I ran up to my room to grab my phone and text Jessie all about it. She was thrilled. She was single, and not jealous. I was surprised! She was actually happy for me!
We talked all about it until 5pm. I switched off my phone to avoid temptation of more texts, and to focus on getting ready for my first date ever.
I put on my makeup carefully and neatly. I wore, foundation, concealer, blusher, eyeliner, mascara, light eye shadow and a dab of glitter! I then got out my outfit, black short pencil skirt with a turquoise and black cropped t-shirt, showing a bit of my belly. My shoes where turquoise also and had a slight heel to make me look taller, and the same size as James. 
My dad gave me a lift to the seaside so I wouldn't get muddy and dirty. He dropped me off and looked around the seaside, from the car window watching what was happening for like 1minute.
"Hey Annie, babe." said James scanning up and down me. "You look a bit fancy for the seaside, but don't worry, it's sexy and I like it."
I've never heard James talk like that before, but I liked it. 
"Hi! Awwk thanks, James!" I walked over to him.
1 minute was up, dad drove off.
I hugged him so tight, to remember the feeling. It soon turned into a kiss. Which turned into a snog. Which turned into more. By more I mean a feel. No more. We couldn't go any further than that. We are only 14. 
The kiss was magical, it was my first. In fact, it was pretty much my first for everything that night apart from a few things which 14 year old girls .... can't do because.. they aren't allowed.
The snog was unreal. His lips felt so lush and pure. He then moved his hands a bit higher than my waist and moved them round to... my..... pineapples. My juicy pineapples... My developed pineapples. Fully grown.  I'm laughing so hard now that I think about it. Anyway, he then made his way back down to my waist. I didn't do a thing, just kissed, and snogged, and hugged and did my best to impress. And he was. 
We both reached for a final breath and stopped.
"Wow you've got skill!" He exclaimed after the love moment.
"Thanks, it was my first time, so I'm not very experienced. Though you have true passion and mean it!" I giggled, James giggled. We looked around the seaside, and near road, to check if anyone saw that true delightful love moment....
And we saw someone. They dashed off as soon as we saw them. The person looked familiar, sort of like...
Jessie.

Thanks so much if you read that. Please give me feedback on the comments. If you would like reminders of when a new chapter comes out them please comment that, THANKS. Hope you enjoyed it! Because of the delay of last chapter, I thought I would treat yous to another one today to show I'm sorry!♥
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FISH FRIEND chapter five It's 12am. I'm not asleep. Oh

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loveonedirectionsomuch123 · 1 decade ago
Love it! Keep going! It's AMAZING! I can't wait to see wht happens next! Pineapples?? :P x
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Laura001 · 1 decade ago
Thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciated:D♥
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lizardgirl2000 · 1 decade ago
W.O.W
Sorry I haven't been on Witty lately so I couldn't comment/fav as much as I would like to. That chapter was awesome! I'm not sure waht to think, I don't know if Jessie's secrety jealous (soz if i spelt anything wrong!) or if she's just keeping an eye on her friend. I really amm HOOKED! I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! xx
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storiesaremoviesinyourhead · 1 decade ago
That was really good! Pinapples! LOL! I can't wait for the next chapter! Reminder please! :) x
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