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FREE FALLING

CHAPTER ONE
- H a n n a h ' s  P o i n t  o f  V i e w -

The hot, musty air of William’s High stuck to my skin, making my tan arms and legs shiny from the heat. I took in a deep breath, observing the crowded hallway around me.
People milled by, walking in every direction. Some, binders in hand, walked with friends, talking about the latest gossip. Others clung to their backpacks, heads down as they pushed through the clusters of people, rushing towards their next class.
As I walked, my brown sandals clacking against the marble floor, I could feel people staring, boring holes into the back of my head. My sandy blonde curls bounced on the shoulders of my light purple shrug top, and I could detect the jealous looks from every girl that passed. I hated those looks, but of course Holly loved them.
Holly, Miss Perfect and William’s certified drama queen, was walking beside me, Gucci purse  in hand. Her bleach blonde hair and flawless figure attracted enough attention, but to top it off, she had the brightest blue eyes and straightest white teeth anyone had ever seen. Needless to say, she was the envy of everyone she met.
I was just her studious, quiet sister, who had somehow been sucked into the popularity along with her. Holly and I may be twin sisters, but we are as different as it gets.
Holly, a flirty socialite with ‘passing’ grades and an endless closet of expensive clothes, was a trendsetter, constantly being followed by her group of wannabes.
I, on the other hand, preferred to stay under the radar, as far away from drama as possible. I didn’t need to bother with friends or clothes because Holly did all of that for me, somehow fitting me into her popular group with her rich friends and endless invitations to parties. In truth, I was just a shy, smart girl living in the shadow of her overly talkative, underly disciplined, sister. But of course, that’s not how everyone else saw it.
Ever since my dad got his new job and started making decent money, it seemed like everything had changed. Our townhome became a huge house, my overly stressed and always working mom turned into a housewife, and my run down public high school turned into William’s High, the most prestigious private school in Rhode Island.
Everything seemed to change, except for me. I was still the same nerdy, reserved girl I had been before, but now I had a popular twin sister to help me along.
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I shook any thoughts from my head, concentrating on opening my locker, the one next to Holly’s. I ignored, as I always did, the whistles that she received from countless boys on a day-to-day basis. She pretended that she didn’t notice, even though I knew from the subtle half smile on her face that she was content with the fact that guys noticed her.
I was happy for Holly and her new life. It was where she belonged. Ever since we were little, Holly had always been pushed around, whether it was being bullied on the playground or made fun of for her cheap sneakers or lame lunch box. How she had risen from that to become William’s junior prom queen, I had no idea, but I was glad that she finally got the respect she deserved.
“You ready to go?” Holly asked, just as I closed my locker, looking at it one last time. The shelves were empty, and all that was left was maroon colored paint. The same maroon colored paint that had been there before I had moved into this locker, unchanged by my presence.
As I closed the door, twisting the lock, I realized that my locker wasn’t mine anymore; it was just like all the others. A clone, something that used to be special, but now it was ordinary. It was just a locker, hardly distinguishable aside all of the others. And I was just Hannah, barely noticeable behind the shadow of my sister.



well? i hope you guys like the new story (: tell me what you think, i'm open to suggestions. thanks for reading lovelies ♥
FOR THE RECORD. i was going to wait until tomorrow to post this, but w o r d s o f a g i r l made me post it now. feel special, abby? 
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