Witty Profiles
hauntingly beautiful
Chapter 4
"You can drop me off here." I
whispered.
Hunter gently pressed on the break, as we pulled over to the side
of the empty road.
"We're a block away from school, though."
I sucked on my lower lip, trying to avoid staring into his sea
blue eyes.
"People will see us, though." I paused.
"Together."
Hunter threw his head back in laughter, as his he swiftly swept
his black hair from his eyes.
"You're really funny, Hayden." he chuckled
lightly.
I figured Hunter wasn't going to let me go, since he began to
drive again.
As we pulled up to the school's parking lot, a swarm of
people surrounded Hunter's parking space, waiting for his
arrival.
I tried to hide my face by covering it with my curtain of
hair.
I peeked up, as I saw people giving Hunter and I curious glances
through the window.
Hunter cut off his engine, as he nudged my elbow lightly.
"Come on, we're here."
I flinched at his touch, but hesitantly staggered out of the
car.
I could feel people's eyes staring intently at me, as I
appeared out from the passenger seat.
"What was she doing in Hunter's car?" an
envious red head asked, srunching her nose in disgust as I walked
by her.
Hunter suddenly appeared over my shoulder, giving me a pitiful
smile. "Ignore them, okay?"
As if I haven't been for the past year at this school
already.
"You should stop following me, Hunter." I muttered.
I didn't know how to put it in a nicer way.
Having Hunter befriending me was only going to make everyone else
tease me even further.
They would all think that I'm pathetic for trying to become
friends with someone so popular like him.
The bell suddenly rang, as I sped up to be on time for class.
Hunter cringed, as he stopped me from walking by putting a hand
on my shoulder.
I immediately shrugged him off, still not used to his touch.
"What's wrong, Hayden?" he softly asked, taking a
step closer to me.
Everyone was no longer in the halls, as Hunter trapped me in a
corner.
"Nothing." I breathed heavily, trying to think of a way
to escape his closure towards me.
He was hovering over me, as his chest barely touched mine.
He was so close to me, too close for my liking.
I guess it was entirely his fault, since he didn't know about
my past.
If he did, I was sure he would back off immediately, but he
didn't.
Hunter's warm fingers brushed the strands of hair from my
face, tucking it behind my ear.
"If anything is bothering you, you can tell me." he
said, as his cool breath trickled down my neck.
I shivered, as I remained quiet.
"Is it my friends? Are they bothering you? I could tell them
to lay off." he spoke.
I shook my head.
Hunter telling his friends to stop irritating me would only make
things worst, guarenteed.
"What is it, Hayden? You're killing me here." he
said, sounding desperate.
I closed my eyes, biting on my lip nervously.
"C-could you please get off of me?" I begged.
I felt Hunter's body heat being removed, as my eyes peered
open.
Hunter was standing a good feet away from me, frowning.
"T-thanks." I stuttered, quickling scramming to class
before he confronted me with anymore questions.
Hunter's Point of View
I watched Hayden as she ran down the hall frantically.
Her long brown hair swooshed behind her, as she disappeared in
the halls.
I leaned agaisnt the wall, taking in a deep breath.
I licked my lips, pressing my hand agaisnt my forehead.
There was something so mysterious about her.
It was as if she had a dark secret that she wasn't willing to
tell anyone.
It was almost hauntingly beautiful.
A small smirk appeared across my lips, as I removed myself off
the wall.
I was going to find out Hayden's secret, no matter
what.
743 faves · 47 comments · Jan 21, 2012 5:11pm
xissah
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1 decade ago
So what if it's like Twilight? I love twilight. I already love this story! ♥
I NEEEED MOOOORE. ;D
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smartysydney333
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1 decade ago
You are gonna have to come up with a reason why Hunter likes her all of the sudden. If you don't, it will be like (as someone already stated) another Twilight creepy stalkerish thing.
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McDreamy
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1 decade ago
I don't particularly understand why Hunter is so interested in Hayden all of a sudden. Its weird. Like, he talks to her once, drives her home, then picks her up for school in the morning? talk about creepy. Its weird to follow cause its kind of like a Twilight thing but not and also like A Walk to Remember. I think things between them were rushed into way too early because its making Hunter seem like a stalker, or a rapist or something. idk, just an opinion. I like the plot line though, besides the whole Hunter thing.
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micha136
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1 decade ago
mooooorreee!
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wittyquotesgurl
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1 decade ago
OMG I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. AND I LOVE HOW SOMEONE SO POPULAR LIKE HAYDEN! CONTINUE PLEASE! I AM SO LOVING THIS! <3
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masher33
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1 decade ago
I don't really like Hunter to be honest. He just makes things so much more awkward and rushes into things way too quick. The last line makes him seem like a jerk. Harry in Catch Me if You Can was too, but he was just so lovable you just couldn't hate him. xD And I also have a feeling the story is gonna be like he's only making Hayden seem like he likes her just to get her secret out so he can humiliate her, as much of a low blow it is, but actually starts falling for her and stops himself from doing that or something. Just a guess. x) But, I do love this. A lot. Keep up the writing, you're really talented!
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ThePerryFan
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1 decade ago
Hi. hauntingly beautiful is amazing. I like all your other stories but I love, love, love this one! please continue :)
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Lilkashmoney
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1 decade ago
More
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monkeydancer98
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1 decade ago
i love this :)
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Courtney_Shera
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1 decade ago
I already commented, but I'm commenting again(: lol. WRITE MORE SOON OR I'LL DIE!! No pressure or anything..(;
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forever_behind_the_book
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1 decade ago
This is so good that when I read it I litteraly thought. It was a real book. Published and all. This is just amazing
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lauren1023
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1 decade ago
you should like become an author!
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coolio124
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1 decade ago
You should get characters!!!! Love the story do far :D
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elise2161
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1 decade ago
Is this a book.
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sarahjh55555
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1 decade ago
i thought hunter just had like love at first sight with hayden, but he really just wants to know her secret! jerk! she's just gonna feel more uncomfortable.
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lovergirl1111
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1 decade ago
OMG love it <3! Please make moree!(:
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Xoxoshannonxoxo
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1 decade ago
MOREEE! POST MOREEEEEE PLZZZ IM OBSESSED! HEHE
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livelaughlove274
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1 decade ago
A-mah-zing!
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sesslerdancer720
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1 decade ago
you have a true gift for writing. Pursue it. You could go far<3
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whats the name of the author of this?!