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Just A Feeling
Chapter Seven

Tears streamed down Jordan's pure white cheeks. She was shivering, even in the arms of Shawn, wearing his sweatshirt, and wrapped in a blanket. Shawn held Jordan tight, rubbing her arms, trying to keep her warm.
"All I want is you!" A voice said. The source was unknown to anyone and nobody recognized the voice. It was like a whisper, which sent chills down everyone's spines. Of course, they knew the girl was referring to Shawn. "The other guys aren't like you, Shawn." The girl's voice whispered.
Shawn was freaking out. It knew his name. "Mhm, I know your name. I've been here with you this entire time." The voice whispered. It was terrifyingly clear and crisp. "Shawn, you're the sweetest. You're the nicest. You're the cutest." The voice taunted. "And Jordan doesn't deserve you." She said. "I'm going to keep playing with her unless you let go, now. And let me have you." She whispered.
"Okay, you're just creepy!" Emily managed to yell at the unknown voice.
"Hahahahahaha!" The girl laughed and in the middle of the living room, a white mist appeared and twisted and spun, exerting a cold breeze.
A girl appeared, a ghost. She smiled and waved as all of us.
She looked to be about 16 years old and she wore a short dress that flowed down to her knees. "Thank you, Emily. I appreciate that compliment." Then she turned back to Shawn. "Come with me, Shawn. I will give you everything you want. Miranda will wake up, Sammi will gladly join you as herself,  Annie and the unnappealing boys will be brought back to your friends. Jordan will not be harmed any further. Take back your sweat shirt and she will be warm. Let go of her, and she will be warm. Without you, she will be happier, even if it's just because she's warmer. Pretty soon, she will become very sick and could die. I can kill her, Shawn. Because if I can't have you, nobody can." Shawn gulped as he stared at the ghostly figure ahead of him.
"Shawn, don't listen to her! Don't go!" Jordan cried. As the tear drop manuvered down her cheek, it froze in place. "You don't need to go with that b****! You don't!"
Shawn looked at Jordan and stood up. He removed her blanket and took back his sweatshirt. He looked at her with tears in his eyes and watched the color return to her skin and the tear continue to fall down.
"Yes, I do Jordan. I do. But before I go..." He said, and was cut off.
"Nothing!" The ghost yelled. And they both disappeared.
Miranda awoke, breathing heavily. Annie and Sammi came back up from the basement, looking very scared, and all three boys came back from upstairs.
"Annie!" Todd burst, and ran toward her to embrace her.
"Todd." Annie said with a smile on her face.
Tears ran down Jordan's face. "No." She whispered, over and over.

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xwefoundlovex · 1 decade ago
omg!!!!! im freaking out right now! i gasped and my brother looked at me like i was crazy hahaha oh well this is amazing!!
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SingSong63 · 1 decade ago
This is creepy!
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shawn_the_man · 1 decade ago
WHOAAAA!!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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yousacutiee6969 · 1 decade ago
Aww...poor Shawn:(
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ToddWasHere · 1 decade ago
Woaaaah! Dramatic! :D
I'm back!
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