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Chapter 16.
Jessica's POV.

Nate walked into my room with a look of concern on his face. I stood up and walked towards him. I hadn't seen him since the wedding. We only invited him because Tia wanted him to come. I crossed my arms over my chest.
"Hi." I said, guarding my expression.
"Hey, Jessington." He smiled. I remembered when he gave me that nickname. We had been fooling around one day and I called him Natington. He called me Jessington. It just stuck.
"How have you been?" I asked. It felt like we were distant friends. And that's what we were. It felt like we were meeting after years and years. And we were... 2 years later.
"I've been good." He awkwardly put his hands in his pockets and looked around the room.
"Well, we should g-"
"Listen, Jessica." He said, coming closer to me. "The truth is, I haven't been 'good.' I've nearly pulled my hair out missing you. I've always wanted to be your one and only. And the truth is, you being with Justin made my heart shatter. I always wanted to marry you. What do you think I was waiting for? Why do you think I stuck around you when you always cried to me? That's all I wanted. I was waiting until we were older. But Justin took my place. And it doesn't seem fair to me. He swoops you off your feet just because he's a super star or whatever."
"Nate, that's not how I want you to feel. Justin and I are happy together. Why can't you just let us be-"
He took my face in his hands and kissed me. My eyes were wide open. I couldn't process this whole thing. I tried pulling away, but he had my head. I tried to make a noise. It came out louder than I expected. I looked into Nate's eyes. His eyes pleaded for me to stay on his lips. It seemed as if he wanted me to stay there. But I couldn't. I heard footsteps.
"Jessica, more people are coming now." Justin said as he came up the stairs. "It's time-"
"What the hell is this!?" Justin charged into the room and pulled Nate off of me.
"Get out." Justin snapped at Nate.
"Just-" I started. Justin put his hand up to stop me.
"We'll talk later." He said and looked at me. He looked like he wanted me to stick up for him.
"Nate, I think you should go now." I said quietly. Nate looked at me in a sad way and slumped his head. He slowly walked out of the room out of sight.
"What was that!?" Justin asked, turning back to me. He looked mad.
"Justin, I didn't do it. I swear." He didn't look like he believed me. "He was just telling me how he was jealous." I started crying and shaking. "And I didn't know what to do. He held my face so I couldn't get out. Justin, Please believe me. I didn't do it. I would never do that." I was shaking more and my voice quivered with every word. "Please." I whispered. Justin pulled me in to hug me and kissed my hair.
"It's okay, baby. I believe you. Shhh. I believe you."
I looked up at him. His thumb swiped my face, gracefully wiping the tears off my face. I looked in the mirror. I looked the same, thank God there was no makeup running down my face.
"Now, boo. We have a party to get to."

*and i know that he knows im unfaithful and hit kills him inside to know that i am  happy with some other guy... i can see him dying.

that is like...the perfect song for this chapter. sort of :p tehe. don't worry. this story will be over soon and you can stop being so bored. -.-
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just the beginning Chapter 16. Jessica's POV. Nate walked

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xxJordynxx · 1 decade ago
what song is thatt?
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_Rhi_ · 1 decade ago
I KNEW I COULDN'T TRUST HIM! stupid nate.

& i love the story!!! it's not boring!!! :D
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dark_fantasy · 1 decade ago
usually when i see stories i skip over them but i actually read this nd found it very interesting(: ur an amazing writer(; keep up the good work !!!!!!! ;3
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bekahbop · 1 decade ago
NATE DID NOT. Guuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrl, My gosh, my gosh.
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you_know_you_love_me · 1 decade ago
intense chapter! & i can never be bored with these stories!
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x3scrubydoox3 · 1 decade ago
no nonononononononooonoonoonononononono!! were not bored O:!!!
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StaleMilk · 1 decade ago
Honestly, I think it's good that she stops the story. Every story has an end, right? Especially with a story like this, where she describes how they meet, their relationship, the fights, the marriage, the babies.... I mean, she's running out of ideas, and I don't blame her. It's got to end sometime, or it'll get uninteresting. I know that some of her readers aren't bored, but if you think about it, SHE might be bored of writing this. And by stopping this story, it does not mean that she's done as a writer. Writers can write multiple stories, guys. :)
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OpinionatedWriter · 1 decade ago
CALLED IT lol. and really, don't stop. if writing's what you love to do, then write. if you feel that all your stories are the same, spice it up a bit. write about a haunted house, or a pirate story. a murder, or a kidnapping not all of it has to have the theme of love. it can be friendship or family. or whatever you want it to be. keep writing lovely (:
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jessica_bieber69 · 1 decade ago
i love this story!!!! im not bored at all!!!!(:
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sportygirlhelen · 1 decade ago
soo nott boreeeddd!!
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Celeste_xoxx · 1 decade ago
ur stories ain't boring, stop saying that. we larve ur stories espesh me :) x
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Maryummy · 1 decade ago
ohh snapppp. nate did NOT just do that;o xD
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irishkell96 · 1 decade ago
hey i just wanted to let you know that i started reading your stories like 3 days ago and i was obsessed and now im refreshing like every hour to see if a new chapter is up...thanks for giving me a life ahaha :]
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HannahGrawey · 1 decade ago
Do not stop writing thus story! I love this story! I've been reading it since the beginning I love love it!
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xomarisxo715 · 1 decade ago
funny, im not actually bored!! so stop sayiinng so after every chapter! :)

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ejw10 · 1 decade ago
dont stop!!!
i like this chapter - more drama! :D
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purpleninja · 1 decade ago
PLEASE DONT STOP! I've just started reading your stories like aweek ago. I spent hours reading all of them. I'm not bored. I love your stories! Please Don't Stop! I will cry if you do
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littlewriter723 · 1 decade ago
you are making people bored with all the sad comments. you cant always have hundreds of people liking your stories they are still good and people still like them! we arent bored!
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nannnyxox4 · 1 decade ago
i dont even know why you would consider stopping, just because a few people get to you. your stories are amazing! dont cut this one short! you go girlll :)
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notaplasticprincess · 1 decade ago
ok, your stories are amzing. Dont listen tpo the haters. cause i mean, haters gunna hate, thats whatever, this story is AMAZING and you are such a great writer. please please dont stop. Everytime i log on to witty, i go to your page to see if you have a new chapter. you have so many people following this story! please dont stop <3
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