All My Secrets 13

     I shot up, to the shock of my guests. "Charlene!" Dad cried as I blinked rapidly, trying to shake off the overwhelming rush. Mom and Grandma steadied me as I laid back down. I tried to get back up, but they held me down.
     "What has gotten into you?" Mom exclaimed. "Char, don't hurt yourself!"
      "Cause it could get so much worse than this." I said sarcastically. Mom looked hurt, and I bit my lip. "Sorry." I mumbled. I looked down, then back up and into Mom's eyes.
     "Where are they?"
     For a minute, she was quiet. I tried to read her expression, but she had on her poker face. "Charlene..." She started quietly.
      "God dammit, just tell me!" I screamed. Grandma stepped back, and I breathed heavily, scrunching my forehead. A wave of pain had passed through my body, and I made a mental note: no more sudden movements.
     Mom and Dad exchanged a look, and I fell back, frustrated. Tears stung my eyes as I stared at the empty ceiling. I felt someone moving closer to me, and I glimpsed a purple fabric out of the corner out of my eye.
     Mom tentatively placed a hand on my shoulder. "Sweetie, look at me." She whispered. I stayed perfectly still, and she sighed. Finally, she took my chin and gently turned my head towards her.
     "Kara's okay." She whispered. A wave of relief washed through me, but it was quickly replaced with nausea. Kara. KaraKaraKara.Mom must've read the fear in my face, because she quickly started talking again.
     "She just had a few bruises, luckily her car seat kept her safe." The words barely registered in my mind.
     "Kara's okay." I repeated. She nodded, and took my hand.
     "Honey-" She began. I shook my head, bringing on another bout of pain.
     "And Natalie-" She continued. I couldn't talk. If I tried, I would throw up for sure.
     So instead, I listened.

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All My Secrets 13 I shot up, to the shock of my guests. "Charlene!"

12 faves · 6 comments · Apr 7, 2011 6:02pm

penguinluv · 1 decade ago
I LOVE your story! Great suspense, you're probably one of the best writers on Witty!!
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overgettingold · 1 decade ago
omigoshh.. keep writing? please?
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bby_gurl13 · 1 decade ago
AHH!!!! PLEASE LET NATALIE BE OKAY!!
Love the story :)
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laughitupp · 1 decade ago
AHHHHHHHHHHHW AAAAAAAHW AHW I HOPE SHES OKAY!
YAYA THE OTHER ONES OKAAY!
THIS IS AHHMASING.(:
MOREEEMOREEEMOREEE(:
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xpeacexluvxparty · 1 decade ago
just read your entire story and its amazing! keep going!
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CloudsyDinysawr · 1 decade ago
I REALLY HOPE that Natalie's okay, :(
Great story by the way :)
And amazing cliffhangers!
I love suspense:)

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