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Hello. I'm Kayden. My other witty is PaperLung. This is my experimental account. I write stories here. Or at least, attempt to write stories. I've written one prologue. And one story that is three chapters in. Unlike majority of stories here on witty, one chapter is not one single post. It's three posts. Meaning, three long parts. Also, I try to make the plot differ from the usual stories you find all over this website. I'm not dissing anybody's story, by the way. Tell me what you think of them? You don't necessarily have to. I'd just appreciate some constructive criticism. I am too tired to type any more than this. That's it then. Bye.
I'm going to be busy and away from witty for a while, but I will still make time to continue writing my story "I Won't Forget!" So, if you're reading it, don't stop! The story is going to take one of the wildest twists!
the Heart.
  1. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 16, 2011 2:27am UTC
    I Won't Forget!
    Chapter 3: Part 2 of 3
    I now have something to do for the rest of my morning. Time for an itsybitsy investigation. Correction: it isn’t called an “investigation,” but rather a “rampage” since everything in this very room belongs to me. I wouldn’t have to worry about making a mess. The servants will eventually clean up the mess for me, sooner or later. I felt a strike of million of privileges.
    I went berserk all over the place until I stopped at a book, which apparently seems to be a diary. It is time to begin the true stalking of a life that I never had, but now, do. I never enjoyed reading people’s diaries… actually, I love it! But nobody should have to worry about me, because I’ll only let their secrets out if they treat me poorly. It’s wrong, I know, but I will not let anyone misuse me. Enough with all these thoughts, I have some reading to do.
    13 August, 2002
    8:22pm
    dear diarey,
    today was my 8th birthday. as a present my mother gave me a diarey. thats you! i am so happy. you will be my best frend for ver and ever. today was a great day but I’m not happy. Because, for the first time, daddy wasn’t here with the rest of my family. He missed my birthday. Mommy said he wold be back tomorrow. I am exited, i miss daddy! Happy birthday to me! Bye diary I have to go sleep now. mummy said its my bedtime
    xxx I love u
    Well, that was cute diary entry. She was so innocent when she was eight. Don’t we all wish she had stayed that way? I laughed to myself as that thought lingered. I flipped through a few pages until I came across a page that had an ugly hole pierced into it and through, about 4 pages before and after had the same thing. Wow, I’m curious to know what caused this. With that, I traced the page to where it started.
    25 August, 2002
    4:56pm
    dear diarey,
    i am so mad! daddy just came back today from china! he was subosed to come back twelv days ago! i hate daddy! he said he gave poor chienese children many pressies.he got them many dollies and toyz. he only got me a dollie with her own doggie and my name riten on it. im not gona to talk to dada i wont talk to him until he gets me a betta birthday pressie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hav 2 go mummy is calling meee for dinner bai bai
    xxxxxxxxxxxxx i luv u diarey
    I regret calling her innocent. She’s a spoiled and selfish little devil. I traced my fingers over the hole she pierced with her pencil when she had scribbled her signature to the bottom right of the page. I could sense the fact that she was incredibly furious. I wonder where she gets all that anger from. Especially when she was only eight…
    For the next few hours, I had been reading her diary like a story book. Just so you know; if a book is interesting, I tend to read super fast, which is exactly what’s happening right now. From all that I’ve read, I’ve come to learn that she has been bullied at pre-school which left rage soaring up within her like a rocket. I also found out how she had no friends. They all found her ugly and too annoying to befriend. I felt absolutely sorry for her because whatever that happens when you’re young, influences the personality of your future. The beginning of her childhood was tough. For someone her age, it was just plain ghastly.
    ---
    I didn't proof read this one. Sorry!
    Previously; part 1 of chptr 3: www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3839648
    Criticism is highly appreciated. Comment, favorite or follow. (:

  2. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 15, 2011 3:46am UTC
    I was just wondering if anyone is reading
    my story "I Won't Forget!"? Because I put
    a lot of work into it and nobody seems to
    be faving them. I don't do well with silent
    readers. I am self-conscious of my work.

  3. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 14, 2011 5:31am UTC
    I Won't Forget!
    Chapter 3: Part 1 of 3
    Over the past few days, Samantha and the family have been filling me in on my life. They told me about how I have a boyfriend, Ethan, who is too busy to visit... me; his apparent girlfriend. I honestly paid no attention to half the things they said. I paid more attention to the ceiling than what they had been speaking. I also have been spending hours admiring ‘the new me’ in the mirror for the past few mornings. I just can’t deal with the fact that I am so stunning. I don’t know what this girl has done to herself, but I honestly don’t care. I have perfection written all over me now. I just wish her personality was as attractive as her physical appearance. She may attract hungry and desperate boys, but definitely never decent people.
    My first day of school begins tomorrow. Usual ‘first day of school’ only happens after a long holiday. But in my case? After every accident I’ve endured and "somewhat" healed. I don’t know why this keeps happening to me. First days of school are always the worst days for me. Something always magically happens and I get eternally embarrassed. The public mockery never stops.
    I have only a day left with peace and to settle in this body. I have nothing to do right now… mum is out to work again. She gave me a strict warning not to get out of the house until tomorrow. She instructed our servants to make sure I didn’t even get out of my room. Wow, Melanie lives in a cage… I’d be a depressed mental kid if my real dad trapped Eowyn in a cage. Eowyn would have been a useless, desperate wreck that has never seen the sight of beautiful daylight and open air. I can’t imagine that.
    I looked around my “new” room. The walls were golden and white stripes. The curtains were a deep bloody red that complimented the bright colors of the walls. The furniture were made of a high quality mahogany wood. Super impressive, much? The perfectly wooded flooring went well with the intricately designed carpet which apparently, had Melanie’s name sown into. “I’ve never seen anything quite like this! It’s incredible!” I said to myself as I noticed a piece of paper sticking out from it. Curious, I tried to pull it off, just to realize it was attached to the carpet. On it was written:
    “$7,865
    Name of product: Arabian Designer Carpet
    Specially made for Ms. Melanie Abergine
    Contact: xxx-xxx-xxxx or xxx-xxx-xxxx
    Address: Shamalamalalala Street, Badabing
    55555, UAE”
    Wow. That just made me realize how truly rich these people are… I mean, I understood that they were super rich enough to buy two houses and four vacation homes all around the world… But seriously, designer carpets?! Is that even necessary for a 17-year-old teenage girl? You can probably buy a car with that money! But I don’t think they’d need that to buy another car. This house has like… a car for everyone. Even the 15 year old cousin of Melanie’s who can’t even drive. God, this is madness! Eowyn got her car at a secondhand store. And she had to bargain like hell to get it at $2,000. She had to work a whole year with two jobs to pay that off. Not to mention, she had other important things to pay off while she was at it. Like the neighbor’s garage that she destroyed when she ran into it on 15th January, 2011.
    ---
    Note: There is no such place as Shamalamalalala Street, Badabing, 55555, UAE. However there is such a place as UAE. And, as far as I know, they're great at making beautiful carpets!
    Previously; part 3 of chptr 2: www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3807262
    Criticism is highly appreciated. Comment, favorite or follow. (:

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    September 10, 2011 3:35am UTC
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  5. theHeart theHeart
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    September 9, 2011 1:26pm UTC
    I Won't Forget!
    Chapter 2: Part 2 of 3
    Two days passed and I found out my guardian angel yelled at me to press the button. What button? The return button. That means, the old me is dead. Eowyn is gone forever from getting hit by a bus. How did I not see that coming? Why was I so stupid? My guardian angel, Luis, better make this worth it. Or he will pay. I don’t care if he is an angel. If this doesn’t work out, he’s so in trouble. I get discharged today to the home of Samantha, the chestnut haired lady. Well, my home. Turns out, she is my mother. Melanie’s mother… or rather my new mother? This is all too confusing.
    Two hours later, I was making my way out the hospital. Samantha had left to have a few more words with the doctor. Right at that moment I saw Luis. I walked straight to him. Shook his shoulder as hard as I could that he yelped. “What have you done to me?” I said demanding a sensible answer. “I brought you back to life! Isn’t that what every dead person wants? Live forever. Be someone else?” he said as he trembled. What a weakling. God, you sent me a duck? Why couldn’t you have sent me a snail? That is even more entertaining than this thing.
    “Hey, I heard that.” He said looking offended. “What, so you can read minds too? God forbid!” I spoke clearly frustrated. “Well, not reall. Sort of. You were just thinking out loud.” He said, chuckling. How dare he laugh. I opened my mouth, ready to exit a fit of rage, “You think this is funny? Do you-“ I got cut off by my mum. She returned from the doctors and began to question, “Is there a problem here?” Both me and Luis looked at each other. Neither of us knew how to answer that question. I was afraid of what I should say. I clearly could not think of an excuse.
    “No, ma’am, there is no problem at all. I am Melanie’s friend. Luis. Nice to meet you.” He said as he extended his hand to shake hers. Surprised, she shook his hand. She looked at me with widened eyes and said, “Wow Mel, I didn’t know you could make decent friends. How did you guys meet?” Oh, that’s simple. I was dead and gone to heaven and this random guy just suggests me to push the return button. And ka-boom: I am now your daughter!
    Luis grinned and answered, “We met a week before the tragedy, we... um…-“ I cut him off, saying, “We had a science project to do together.” Samantha’s face had magically appeared to have an extremely shocked face. “Melanie, what is going on? I never knew you paid attention in school!” She exclaimed. God, of all people you made me a bimbo. “Nice talking to you Luis. But me and Samantha have to go home now. You can come over later, if you’d like. Is that okay, mum?” I spoke impatiently. The more I stood here, the more awkward and dumb I felt. I know nothing about this Melanie person. I just hope and pray this is temporary.
    ---
    Note to readers: This story is inspired by my favorite television show, Drop Dead Diva. So that explains why it's slightly alike. (:
    Previously; part 1 of chptr 2: www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3800740
    Criticism is highly appreciated. Comment, favorite or follow. (:

  6. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 9, 2011 12:46pm UTC
    I Won't Forget!
    Chapter 2: Part 1 of 3
    I woke up in a strange white place. I heard somebody screaming at me, “Press the button! PRESS THE BUTTON!!” Caught in such a sudden, I quickly looked for a button. I saw one. I reached out to press it… and BOOM. Black out.
    I awoke again, this time in a room full of doctors and nurses hurrying about. What the fu­ck is going on?! Why do I feel so small? Why do I feel so… light? The doctor noticed I had woken up. He smiled and said, “Hello, Melanie.” What? My name is not Melanie. It’s Eowyn. Are you stupid? “How do you feel, Melanie?” he asked. I gave no response.
    I will not respond until he gets my name correct. He then walked off to door. Shortly after, all these strangers rushed into the small room I was in. Who the fu­ck are these people? Am I an overnight celebrity? God.
    That’s when I noticed this extremely hot guy. He had bleach blonde hair and stunning grey eyes. Typical jock, but seriously hot. He came up to my side and spoke, “Hey Mels, I missed you. How ya feelin’?” Missed me? I don’t even know who you are! A woman who had chestnut brown hair interrupted, “Ethan, let her mind process. The doctor said she might’ve some memory loss.” Ethan walked up to the lady and said some things I didn’t quite catch.
    A while later when everyone had left, a nurse came up to me, smiled and said, “You have a short term memory loss. We will give you a brief summary of everyone after you take your medication and a small rest.” I nodded making my blonde hair fall to my face. What?! Blonde? I don’t have blonde hair! Oh my god, what has happened to me!
    Previously; part 3 of chptr 1: www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3800113
    Criticism is highly appreciated. Comment, favorite or follow. (:

  7. theHeart theHeart
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    September 9, 2011 5:34am UTC
    I Won't Forget!
    Chapter 1: Part 3 of 3
    I spent about half an hour texting Cameron while sitting beneath a gigantic tree that looked as if it was protecting me. I loved this tree ever since I moved into this suburb. Camel (yes, I call him a camel.) was telling me about how school was the month before my brother's wedding. Great subject, eh? It actually was. Because I had actually spent that whole month at a hospital. Don't be shocked just yet, I haven't told you the tragedy that had happened to me!
    Here’s how it all happened. It was any ordinary day of school. The weather was being stubbornly hot. Something I despise. What made it worse was all the chirping of a hundred birds. The suburban community just makes it the worst place ever. Anyway, I was in a terrible mood that day. It was 3rd period, in other words the third last period before lunch. I decided to ditch and come back at lunch.
    So there I was off. Sneaking through the hallways, past the teachers, and out to the student parking lot where my lovely car sat. From the corner of my eye, I saw a mysterious figure. I convinced myself that it was either the sun making me see things or some kid who was going to turn me in. I went ahead not caring, until something sharp was violently pushed into the left side of my stomach. Blood began pouring out like a fountain. The pains got uncontrollable and I was starting to black out. I caught a glimpse of this mysterious stabber. A woman with the most frightened look on her face. I have to admit, it’s pretty exciting telling you the story!
    I awoke in the hospital, alive. And life went on. The investigation is still going on to this day. I mean, who could accidently stab a person in an almost-empty parking lot? More importantly: a woman? I have no enemies. Or at least, that’s what I think? I honestly don’t know.
    Me and Camel had texted until he had to leave for his next class. Biology. I didn’t want him to, but he just wasted almost an hour texting me while he was in his English class and that was clearly special to me. He’s the kind of person who is very much concerned about his grades. I’m just about the exact opposite. I do well at school, but I just don’t like it there. It’s boring. I’d probably end up without a job either way.
    I get hungry too fast. I guess it's time for me to get to lunch, even though it’s like, eleven in the morning. I got up from the grass, ready to leave. I made my way out of the park, making sure I stepped only on the large rock path-tiles. It has been a habit of mine since I was a kid.
    I wasn’t paying attention to where I was headed for a moment, I got past the pavement, onto the road and I heard a woman shouting out. I wasn’t sure what she said. I looked to my left and froze… Oh God no.
    Previously; part 2 of chptr 1: www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3778988
    Criticism is highly appreciated. Comment, favorite or follow. (:

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    September 6, 2011 3:14am UTC
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  10. theHeart theHeart
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    September 2, 2011 12:02pm UTC
    Story genre: Comedy and suspense.
    Comfortably Self-centered.
    The Introduction.
    Hello there, I'm Brigh Bryson. I am phenomenal. I am the most beautiful, not to mention, smartest person you would ever meet in your entire existence. Unfortunately, everybody does not agree with me. But I live by truths! And the truths are always what I believe! Let me tell you, I have an excellent personality.
    Nobody can daunt me. Speaking of daunting, I am the Queen of Daunting. Everyone is afraid of me. Everybody is easily intimidated by the marvelous and outstanding person I truly am. All this uplifting makes me giggle with sheer joyfulness!
    Thank you God for making such an amazing creature as me! If only you created others who were worth, at least, half of me. I mean, it's so hard to find someone who is as incredible as I am. Maybe that's why I'm rejected at school. Hah, they definitely do not get to witness my wonders. Oh how I pity them all.
    One day, I will prove to all of them that their rejection of me is their biggest regret. One day, they will work for me. I will rule all of them! Every. single person.
    Okay so, I've been dreaming of writing this story. I will definitely give you something interesting.
    Or at least, Brigh will. So please; favorite, comment or follow for more of this story... or not? (:

  11. theHeart theHeart
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    September 2, 2011 11:32am UTC
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  12. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 2, 2011 10:08am UTC
    I really want to,
    mean more than just that friend who's there for you, whenever.

  13. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 2, 2011 9:44am UTC
    You have the hands that hold my heart.
    So please be gentle.

  14. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 2, 2011 9:31am UTC
    It takes a true idiot,
    to win a beautiful girl's heart and throw it away because he felt like it.

  15. theHeart theHeart
    posted a quote
    September 2, 2011 3:46am UTC
    Close your eyes,
    I will keep you safe through the night.

:)

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