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sugarfreak
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July 19, 2012 2:59am UTC

I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
Chapter 5
Avalaya
''So what's your last class?'' Jo asked, smiling. I showed her my schedule and she nodded. Honestly I hated the feeling of being mute, I didn't have an opinion when it came to most things. ''Oh cool, I've got english as well! The teacher is Mr Peet. He's awesome and super hot.'' I followed them to the english room.
''Hey, Mr Peet, this is the new girl Avalaya,'' Aaron said. My eyes widened in fear as I saw who Mr Peet was. I should've known that there would be nobody else with the last name 'Peet'.
*flashback* I was running around in my backyard, trying to get the nasty image of the human remains in that hole out of my mind. It had been exactly one day since I got home from the camping trip. After I arrived back at the camp site we continued the game of truth or dare. I continued playing around and accidentally got the ball I had been kicking over the next door neighbours fence. ''Mummy, I got the ball over the fence,'' I told her.
''Go ask Mrs Peet for it.'' I walked outside and went to my next door neighbour and knocked on the door. Mrs Peet was a really nice lady with a kid who was ten years older then me. The door opened not to reveal a plum old lady but a young man. Her son. He was the total opposite to the nice lady, he was ruthless and was in jail every month!
''Hello Avalaya,'' he said.
''H-how do you know my name?'' I demanded.
''Avalaya, we've been next door neighbours for five years, of course I know your name.''
''Can I get my ball?''
''Sure, come in.'' I followed him out into the backyard and got my ball. Before I left he grabbed hold of my wrist. I tried to wriggle out of his tight grip but he had me against the wall. ''S-stop, you're hurting me,'' I said when he put his hand around my neck.
''Say Avalaya, what did you see on that camping trip?'' he asked, a smirk playing on his face.
''Nothing,'' I lied.
''I know you saw what was in that hole and I know you know the little secret but Avalaya you're not going to say a word ever again are you?''
''N-no…''
''I will be back for you, if you ever talk again.'' I ran home. *end of flashback*
Being the stupid ten year old I was, I talked. I told my mum what he had done to me and then the next day, they came for me. They came to kill me. I looked up to the man who was one of the faces, haunting my past. ''Avalaya! What are you doing here? I never thought I'd see you again!''
''You know her?'' Aaron asked.
''Old family friend, take your seat, I want to have a word with Avalaya.'' Aaron told him I was mute and when we were alone, he smirked. ''Well haven't you been such a good girl, I'm sure he'll be proud…'' I didn't say anything; I couldn't say anything.
''That wasn't the end,'' he whispered. ''We'll be back for you.''
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Teaser: ''How was school?'' Carson asked, softly.

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sugarfreak
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July 17, 2012 4:07am UTC

I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
Chapter 4
Part two
Avalaya
''Who's this?'' the brunette questioned.
''This is the new girl, Ava, she's mute.'' He paused, looking at me. ''I hope you don't mind me saying that…'' his voice trailed off. I shook my head, waving him off.
''Hey Ava! I'm Jo,'' she chirped. I noticed the girl next to her walking away. Carson started walking past us, he looked like a model. Even though he was an arrogant jerk, there was something about him and I didn't even know him that well! ''Oh my gosh, I hate him so much,'' Jo said glaring holes into Carson's back.
''Come on, let's go to home room.'' I followed Aaron to home room.
''Ah, you must be the new student! I'm Mrs Griffens. Stay here so you can tell the class about yourself…''
''Miss, she doesn't talk,'' Aaron told her. Mrs Griffens eyes widened and she gasped a little.
''Oh my, I'm so sorry!'' Once all the class came in, Mrs Griffens introduced me. I noticed Carson in this class. ''Okay, everybody, this is Avalaya. Please make her feel welcome.'' Somebody whistled… they wouldn't be whistling if they knew I didn't speak. My phone vibrated in my pocket when I took a seat. After home room was done, I went to the bathroom and looked at the text. It was from Josh, he was a friend of mine. I had met him at MMA (Mixed Martial Arts). I had decided to take classes when I turned 16… nobody knew.
Josh: 17 Roger Road. I know the guy, go to him tomorrow night. He'll be waiting for you.
Mixed Martial Arts made me feel safer, it made me feel stronger and I was the unbeatable 'Laya'.
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Okay, sorry for the boring chapter, it was kinda a filler chapter (is that what they're called?) Anyway, I just want to say a big thank you to all my followers because I have now got over 1000 followers. Again, I'm sorry it is in two parts but I didn't want to delete anything off this chapter. Hopefully there won't be two short parts- like this, again.
Teaser: Being the stupid ten year old I was, I talked. I told my mum what he had done to me and then the next day , they came for me. They came to kill me.

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sugarfreak
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July 15, 2012 9:18pm UTC

I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
Chapter 2
Part two
Avalaya
''Carson, man, why the f/ck did you say no to her? She was hot,'' a guys voice said. I wonder if that Mrs Roberts son. The guy who had said that had blonde hair and bright blue eyes. He was very attractive but the next to him was even more attractive. He had brown hair, in a messy look and chocolate brown eyes that would make any girls knees feel like jelly.
''I know but if Lucy found out… she'd got off…'' another guys voice trailed off.
''Carson Flinn Roberts!'' Mrs Roberts bellowed.
''What?'' The guy with brown hair snapped.
''I ask you to do one simple thing, come home early today and you can't do that?!''
''Woah, mum, relax.''
The other guy looked at me, ''who's she?''
''Avalaya, funny, this is my son Carson,'' she pointed to the guy with brown hair, ''and this is his best friend, Conner.'' Conner looked very familiar.
''Avalaya? Who the f/cks this, mum?'' Carson looked at me in disgust.
''This is the beautiful young woman who will be staying with us, Carson. I expect you to behave and please do not use that language in my house.''
''Avalaya?'' Carson asked. Mrs Roberts nodded.
''At least she's hot,'' Conner said.
''Why won't she say anything?'' Carson asked.
''She's mute, darling,'' Mrs Roberts said.
''M-mute,'' Carson stuttered.
''Cars-''
''Freak,'' Carson spat before walking out of the room.
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Thanks to all my lovely readers for all the feedback (: Now if you want to see the characters links for this story, go to my profile and scroll all the way to the bottom on the 'about me' thingy. I may add new characters as the story goes on but for now that's all. xx Oh && Maddison (from the prologue) id not the main character, it's going to explain everything like why Avalaya is mute in a chapter but towards the end of the story (: Sorry it's in two parts, witty wouldn't let me upload it all together.
Teaser: His words stung, real bad.

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sugarfreak
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July 14, 2012 1:17am UTC

I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
Prologue
Avalaya lay in bed, staring up at the ceiling. In her mind was only one thing, those horrific events which occurred in the spring of 2004. She was only 10 and her parents had been very hesitant about letting her go on that camping trip but after Avalaya begged and begged, they let her. She never did anything wrong, she was always a good girl in hope that her parents might be proud of her. Growing up, Avalaya never was a quiet child, she would chit and chat all the time. Sometimes the most random of subjects would come out of her mouth.
At this camping trip, most of the students played a game of truth or dare while the teachers talked at the side. There destination was a camping site, only a half hour away from Avalaya's home in Sydney.
''Truth or dare?'' Jennifer Roq asked Avalaya. Avalaya had looked around. 'I'll look better if I say dare,' she thought.
''Dare.'' Jennifer had a smirk on her face.
''Okay, I dare you to go out into the woods and stay there for five minutes.''
''B-but we aren't allowed to,'' Avalaya said.
''You're a chicken!'' Jennifer declared.
''F-fine, I-I'll go.'' Jennifer smiled, satisfied. Avalaya stood up. She walked off into the woods, there was still some light but it was getting late. Avalaya hadn't planned on going far but her curiosity got the best of her and she wandered through the trees and stopped abruptly at a huge hole. Avalaya had only been walking for a few minutes. She looked into the hole and gasped when she saw what was in it. Human remains. On the other side of the hole there was a man was with a girl, she had blonde hair and big blue eyes.
''Now, now, you'll enjoy this,'' the man said. The man looked to be forty but the girl was only Avalayas age. The girl gaped when she saw Avalaya. ''You see Maddison, I've kept you around for this long because you're the best out of them all. That and you haven't said anything to anybody,'' the man laughed. Maddison Stark. She was 10 and saw this man every week. Maddison pointed to the tree, signalling to the man that she needed to go bathroom. ''Okay,'' he told her. ''Don't be long, I'm going to get some things. I expect you to be back soon!'' he growled at the last bit. The man walked to get some rope, just in case Maddison didn't co-operate this time. Maddison hurried to the Avalaya.
''Are you okay?'' Avalaya asked.
''Y-yes,'' Maddison answered. They were the first words she had uttered in six months. She put something in Avalaya's hand, it was a necklace. ''Keep this, I'm going to die soon anyway… he hasn't seen you yet, you better run. Good luck,'' Maddison told her.
''Why are there-there-'' she couldn't finish just pointed to the hole.
''Don't worry… don't tell anybody you saw this, you-you have to go.'' It was too late.
''Get over here, both of you!'' the man bellowed. Maddison did but Avalaya didn't, she ran. ''I will get you, I will!'' he yelled.
Nothing, nothing could prepare Avalaya what happened a few days after. Those few events led Avalaya to be mute and she realised that she just may have to mouth, ''I love you.''
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New story! WOO HOO! I hope you like it... i love comments *hint-hint* ;) Thanks a bunch to all you beautiful people for all the feedback from my last story. I hope it isn't confusing, if you've got any questions, ask!
Teaser: ''But we can't do this anymore,'' my mum finished.

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July 12, 2012 10:40pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Now that I have your attention...
“One of our amazing wittian's, is considering to not write anymore, because of some school drama. That witty writer, is Kara. AKA TheMascaraSeries. Now, I know she is a popular writer on here and thats why I'm doing this. Not because out of selfishness, but of kindness. Apparently she's ugly <--- that's far from the truth. She's the most beautifullest girl I have ever know. She's not talented <--- One of the best writers I have ever seen. I love how her stories have twists, and school drama that you could see happening in real life. She's Stupid <--- If she was so stupid, why would we all love her so da*n much? If she was stupid, why wasn't she casted as patrick? She should die of cancer <--- Die of cancer my a$$! If I found out she died of cancer, I'd catch a plane to Iowa so I could see her. And I know a lot of you would too! So with that being said, We all love Kara, and Witty wouldnt be the same if we lost someone. I mean, look how much its already changed! Now, I know a lot of people hate the 'fave this quote to...' bitt, but I'm asking you to fave this quote. not for popularity, but so Kara can see this and stay on witty. And last but not least, something to Kara: Kara, what I commented on chapter 19 of girls like me, was true. It wasnt just a suck up act to keep you on. It was the truth, all put into that comment! Now, after my little vent, please, please, please, if you love TheMascaraSeries's stories as much as I do, please fave. To keep her on :)
From: All your witty fans

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July 8, 2012 4:55pm UTC

The Virgin Series.
Testing Fate
Chapter 1
"Hurry Belle. You're going to be late." My mom yelled at me.
"Okay." I yelled back.
I adjusted my hair and outfit and smiled.
'Perfect.' I thought to myself.
My newly dyed, white-blonde hair was in loose curls around my face, a tight french braid in the back.
My black dress hugged my curves tight and perfect.
My white jean jacket was crisp and clean and made my tan skin stand out.
I slipped on some jewelry and a pair of sparkly TOMs before leaving my room.
"Awe. Look at my senior." My mom said when I came downstairs.
"My little sister all grown up." My brother Kevin said. "Looser. I remember when you used to eat your boogers."
I gave him a fake laugh, "HAHAHA. When are you going back to college?" I asked him rolling my eyes.
Everyone laughed, "Next Monday. But don't deny it, you're going to miss me."
I put my hand on my heart, "More than anything."
He laughed.
"Okay guys. I'm going to be late." I said.
"WAIT. Pictures Belle." My mom said.
"Ughhh." I moaned.
We took pictures as a family before I noticed the time.
"SH/T! GUYS! I'M SERIOUSLY GOING TO BE LATE." I said.
"Wait. Breakfast." My mom said to me.
I grabbed a granola bar and a water before leaving the door.
"Have a good day baby." My mom said as I got into my door.
I waved good-bye and quickly sped off.
When I got to school and got out of my car I suddenly heard the talk.
"OMG. Belle. You look so cute."
"Damn. She gets better looking every year."
"Hey beautiful. What's your number?"
I smiled and waved at everyone as my friends converged on me.
I hugged them all and smiled, "Hey guys."
Before anyone said anything, Allie spoke.
"Hey there's Jonah."
I smiled and waved at him, "Hey Jonah."
He smiled at me, "Hey Belle."
"JONAAAH." A girl screamed walking up to us.
I looked and saw a tall blonde girl with a cute smile coming towards us.
She kissed him on the lips and smiled.
"Belle." Jonah said.
"This is my girlfriend."
Awe. I love the feedback from my first chapter o:)
I'm gonna do hints for this story.
So, 200+ faves. & I'll give you guys a hint.
First 100 people to ask for notifications will get them. <3
Loove you all ;
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July 7, 2012 5:48pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 17.
“Yeah, we’ll take a large popcorn and 2 small cokes.” Jake ordered for us.
“Diet.” I whispered.
“Make one of those diet.” Jake smiled at the clerk, playfully rolling his eyes at me.
“What?!” I giggled. “Diet tastes better anyways.”
“Since when? You always used to hate diet?” Jake asked curiously.
“Since it doesn’t matter.” I stuck my tongue out at him, blowing him off by walking over to the condiment station to add butter to our popcorn.
I watched the greasy butter pour onto our bucket of popcorn. Part of me wanted to just let Jake eat the popcorn, I mean, it was so unhealthy. However, I let it slip just this once, because I hadn’t had movie theater popcorn in forever.
“Got enough butter?” A voice laughed from behind me.
“What?” I said, snapping back into reality. “Oh sh//t!”
Our tub of popcorn was nearly drowning in butter. I pulled my hand of off the machine button, taking a few napkins from the dispenser, trying to scoop the excess butter out.
“You can never have too much butter.” I laughed uneasily, clearly embarrassed.
I then turned around, seeing my ex-boyfriend. The one before Jake.
“Just on time.” I smiled, checking the time on my phone.
“Bree? Who’s this?” Jake questioned, carrying our drinks over.
“Oh, this Chaz.” I smiled up at him, then looking back towards Jake. “Chaz needed something to do today, so I invited him too.”
“Oh, okay.” Jake gave an uncomfortable smile, nodding his head. “So, how do you two know each other?”
“I’m her ex-boyfriend.” Chaz spoke up before I could.
I had a feeling this was about to get awkward.
“Oh, me too.” Jake responded, avoiding eye contact.
A long silence was taken.
“Okaaay, movie time!” I smiled sweetly, leading them both to the theater.
We scanned all of the isle’s, choosing the very top row of theater seats.
“You can sit in the middle.” Jake said, making sure he didn’t end up not sitting by me at all.
“Okay?” I said, acting like I was totally oblivious to his reasoning.
I took a seat in between the two, silencing my cell phone.
We watched the previews, and the whole theater was silent. I don’t mean just Jake and Chaz, I mean everyone in the theater, which only added to the awkwardness. Normally, I hated when people were loud while doing anything in the theater. But honestly? I would have been fine if a herd of elephants came stomping through right about now.
Both guys sat next to me, and now, it was only matter of time before someone made the first move.
This was no longer a game,
it was a competition.
Yeah,,I was craving popcorn when I wrote this..anyone wanna go to a movie with me?♥ Hope you all had a great 4th of July.(: Sorry this took so long, just been having a busy week, my cousins from Colorado are back ♥ Thanks for being patient, everyone (: Hope you all liked it (:

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July 3, 2012 2:15pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 16.
I woke up the next morning in the same clothes I had been in last night. It seemed too late to shower when I had gotten home.
I slowly got out of bed, testing how it felt to put weight on my foot. Today was supposed to be the day I got rid of my crutches. My mom had already helped me take the stitches out a few days ago.
I let out a sigh of relief, feeling only a little pain when I stepped out of bed. I then threw my crutches to the ground, heading over to my bathroom to take a shower.
I let the refreshing warm water rinse through my somewhat greasy hair, from not being washed in a day. It felt good to be clean again. I put on a pair of denim shorts and a loose pink halter top.
I hadn’t really made any plans yet, but I’m sure I could think of something that would totally screw with Jake’s emotions. After getting dressed, I ran the blow dryer through my hair, letting it keep it’s natural wave, instead of straightening it.
“Bree! You have a visitor!” My mom shouted up the steps.
“Uh, okay! Send them up!” I said confused, wondering who would come here without giving me any heads up.
I finished up my makeup, waiting for the anonymous visitor to make it up to my room.
“Hey Bree.” Jake smiled, opening up the door to my bedroom.
“Uh, hi Jake.” I smiled, shocked at the fact that he would just show up. “W-what are you doing here?”
“Well, I just thought that I’d see if you wanted to do something today? You know because of that kiss, and all..”
“Oh, yeah yeah, right.” I said, jogging my memory. Clearly I hadn’t forgotten about it, but I knew that it hurt Jake to know that I hadn’t been thinking about it like he had been.
“We don’t have to if you don’t want to, I just thou-“
“No, of course I want to.” I smiled sweetly, grabbing my satchel. “So, where are we going?”
“Well, I was thinking the movies?” Jake asked, showing me 2 movie tickets, as we headed out to his car.
“Sure.” I said calmly, sliding open my phone, preparing to send a message.
“Who could you possibly be texting?” Jake laughed, opening my car door for me.
“Oh, you know, just Jaycie and Zoe.” I lied, scrolling through my contact list.
“You’re still talking to Zoe after last night?” Jake gave me a questioning look.
I nodded, too involved in the message I was sending to form words.
“Hey! I’m back in town.(: Movie in 20 minutes?” I typed, then clicked the send button on my phone.
I smiled deviously to myself, crossing my arms.
Little did Jake know,
this would be more than a movie for two.
boring chapter..sorrry. Next one will be better (: Fireworks tonight, so excited♥ Happy 3rd of July everyone ( : haha. Character link is up on my profile, for those of you who were wondering. I love you all, thanks for reading. ♥

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June 30, 2012 8:29pm UTC

He Loves Me not.
Chapter 2
*Rachel's POV*
"Rachel you look hot!,"Abby shouted out her car window.
I smirked, "Back at you girl!", even though I could barely see her outfit.
I hopped in the car and we were on our way.
"I plan on getting hammered tonight so you might have to step up and be the DD," Abby trailed off.
"Haha", I shrugged her off. If she wanted to drink I had nothing against being the designated driver. As long as Abby didn't completely ditch me for the night.
It was about a half an hour drive and being the designated driver became a little less appetizing. I told myself to relax. Breathe in and out.
Finally we arrived. I could hear the music blaring from about a mile away. Abby parked and we walked right in.
Everyone was screaming over the booming sound system. Out of nowhere I heard someone scream,
"Rachel Bollinger! At a high school party!"
It was Nina. The little wh//re who was always all over Luke in the pictures. She was also Abby's friend. She staggered over to us obviously drunk. I don't think she even would have talked to us if she was sober. Trying to stay balanced with one hand and the other holding a bottle of Skinny Girl margarita.
"Oh hey Neen!" Abby shouted.
"Hi Nina." I smiled as she handed me a red plastic cup and poured some of the bottle into it even though it spilled slightly on my hand.
"Here’s to the new Rachel" I thought to myself.
"Well, come on!" Abby tugged me through all the people.
We passed around 10 couples making out, a beer pong table, and about 3 girls from out school completely wasted with bongs. "We are one classy Catholic school" I thought not realizing I was still sipping on my Skinny Girl.
"Keg coming through" yelled some boys.
I turned to see 2 pretty attractive guys walking in. Then it became relevant, Abby was no longer next to me. Sh//t. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my a//ss. I whizzed around to a boy I had never seen before.
"Do you mind?" I asked.
"No, do you?" he smirked.
Well if I'm going to be a wh//re...I pondered.
"Hey, how bout you get me a drink and then we can talk." I flirted like the tease I wanted to be.
He spoke seriously, "Deal."
We both grabbed a seat on the couch and we were talking. He was about to be a senior and as far as he knew so was I. Before I knew what was going on, we were making out, and he was trying to get his hand down my shorts. I don't know how but somehow I got him off me. I walked back into the crowd and was handed a third drink by someone. My memory was getting a little fuzzy and before I knew it I had passed out. I only remember three things: a ping pong ball smack the table, my drink hit the floor, and a familiar voice shouting,
"Rachel Bollinger! Is that you?!"
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