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  1. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    December 26, 2011 6:24pm UTC
    so i wanna write a story but idk what it should be about ? suggestions PLEASE!

  2. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    December 26, 2011 6:23pm UTC
    so i wanna write a story but idk what it should be about ? suggestions PLEASE!

  3. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    December 26, 2011 6:18pm UTC
    so i wanna write a story but idk what it should be about ? suggestions PLEASE!

  4. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    October 15, 2011 11:39am UTC
    at some point you have to realize that he doesn't care and maybe youre missing out on someone who does...

  5. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    October 12, 2011 3:49pm UTC
    Untitled
    chapter 3
    I then replied.
    Me: Who is this ?
    I waited for a reply. I never got one.
    I then stood around and continued to talk with my friends. A group of guys then came over to us, one being scott.
    Me and him had a conversation and he agreeed hed text me later, he then gave me a hug and me and Ashley left.
    Ashley then dropped me off at my house and I passed out, the next morning I got a text/
    1-666-457-0000- hey its scott
    Me: Hey !
    Scott: What ya doing tonight ?
    me : nothing I dont think whhy?
    Scott- do you wanna go to a bonfire ?
    me : sure !
    scott- you can bring a friend if ya wanna,
    me- alright where is it,
    scott- my boy toms house.
    me- oh i know him , ! what time?
    scott- 7
    me- alright ill see ya then !
    I then looked at the clock and it was 10. I then called my friend jules and she agreed to go to the bonfire with me,
    at 5 oclock she came over and we got ready, I put a hoodie on jeans and uggs and so did she and we went to the bonfire and thats where it began......
    3 Years later
    There i sat on my bed looking at the positive sign on the test with tears coming out of my eyes. My life was officially ruined I didn't know who to tell and what to do. I quickly threw on glasses and put a victoria secret hoodie and jeans and uggs on. I threw the test in my purse and grabbed my phone and purse and I ran downstairs.
    " Mom " I yelled.
    " Yes honey " She replied.
    " I need you to take me to Scotts he will bring me home " I said back.
    Scott got his license two months ago in September and I wasn't getting mine till February. Me and Scott have been together since freshmen year, it marked our 3 years on October 1. Hes my best friend and I couldn't ask for a better boyfriend.
    Me and my mom got in the car and she drove me to his house.
    I opened the front door without even knocking and went right up to his room and shut his door he was sitting on his bed watching TV. I stood there in front of his door looking at him and that was when the tears came out more, he got off his bed and walked over and held me so tight.
    " Why are you crying babe ? " He asked.
    I then took out the test,
    " Ew what smells like urine" he said.
    I showed him the test .
    His eyes didn't move from it for about 5 minutes, he kept in the same position and went and sat on his bed and looked straight at the wall, and I went over and sat right next to him and threw the test back in my purse.
    " Babe ...... " He said.
    " Yes " I replied.
    " Were going do this together, no ifs ands or butts . " He said " This obviously was a mistake but I can see us together for the rest of our lives , I knew it when I first looked into your eyes that you'd be mine, Don't think im gonna leave you and this Child because I will never do that , your my world and so is this child " He continued.
    I cried more and he put my arm around me and kissed my head. We then layed next to eachother and i fell asleep with my head on his chest. I woke up at 7 , I slept for 3 years. Scott was watching tv.
    " Hey beautiful wanna go get something to eat ? " he asked.
    I nodded and we walked downstairs hand in hand, We went to a local diner and talked.
    " So " I said.
    " How we gonna tell them ? " He asked.
    " I dont know" I replied " I was hoping you would know the answer to that ."
    " Hmm,well we'd only have to worry about your dad when he comes home from his in august and sees, but what about your mom ? " He asked.
    " Well have to tell her tonight " I said.
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  6. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    October 10, 2011 5:02pm UTC
    Untitled
    Chapter 2
    title suggestions ?
    We walked through the freshmen hall doors and went to the table in the center to get our ticket for the dance , there were two lines. As we were waiting in the one line I all of a sudden heard guys come in back of us I didn't feell the need to turn around to see who it was though. I was minding my own business when all of a sudden I heard out of one of the guys mouths " Yo Scott" . My heart suddenly dropped.
    " What " I heard scott replied.
    " Ya see any cute girls around here " The kid asked.
    " Only one " Scott said.
    " Yo let me get her name " The kid said
    " Lauren " He said.
    All of a sudden my stomach flipped and Ashley started dying of laughter.
    " Oh my god" I mumbled under my breath.
    All of a sudden Ashley turned around.
    " Oh hey scott " Ashley said to him.
    I quickled nudged her.
    " Hi ? " He said confused.
    " You dont know me but I'm ashley, " She said introducing herself.
    " Oh alright hey , how do you know my name ? " He asked.
    " How dont i know your name... " Ashley then paused and continued " lol just kidding bud , i heard it out of your friends mouth just now " She continued.
    "Oh alright" he said.
    " And you must know my friend lauren " She said turning me around.
    I quickly pushed her, Scott just started at me.
    " Awkward" I said.
    " Dont you ? " Ashley continued.
    " UH uh yeah " he stuttered.
    " Scott do me a favor and get out your phone " Ashley said.
    " Uhm" I said turning to ashley.
    Scott then took out his phone.
    " Put this in your phone. 1-980-555-8888." Ashley said " Now thats Laurens number hit her up budd "
    " Ashley" I said pushing her. We then bought our tickets and went into the cafeteria and met up with a group of our frineds, As we were chittchatting my phone lit up...
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  7. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    October 9, 2011 8:05pm UTC
    Untitled
    suggestions
    chapter 1
    "Lauren" Ashley said to me.
    " What Ash? " I asked
    " That guys staring at you " She said.
    " What" I replied.
    We were at our highschool football game. Ashley pointed to the guy who had been staring at me , he quickly looked away , his name was Scott. He had blonde hair and brown eyes, he was on the freshmen football team. We only talked once. I then looked away.
    " He can come to me if he wants to talk to me" I said to Ashley. We then went and talked to other people. We then went and sat in the bleachers and watched the game.
    The next day at school we were in homeroom. I quickly sat down,
    " Hey Lauren" said a voice.
    I looked to the right and saw that it was scott.
    " Oh hey" I said.
    " You were at the game last night right ?" He asked.
    " Sure was" I replied.
    " Nice are you going to the dance tonight ?" He asked.
    " Im planning on it " I replied.
    " Cool " He said.
    The School day seemed to go by quick. After school Ashley came over. I jumped in the shower and then got out and blowdryed my hair I then straightened it and curled it and Ashley straightend hers. I then put my makeup on and we left .We got to the School and walked in and thats where it all began...
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  8. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    July 11, 2011 2:58pm UTC
    I slid down the stairway railing into the living room , I could still here Ashley crying. I walked into the kitchen, the crying then got louder.
    " Ashley stop crying obviously he's not worth it " I said to my 14 year old sister.
    " But he loved me and I loved him " She said.
    " Well if he loved you he wouldn't of cheated on you " I said under my breath
    " What did you say Kara ? " Ashley asked .
    " Nothing " I said.
    I cut myself up an apple and went and sat on the couch with my sister and watched MTV with her. All of a sudden my obnoxious mother walked into the house. Oh great I thought.
    " GUESS WHAT ! " She yelled.
    " What" me and my sister said rolling our eyes at each other.
    " Were moving ! " She said
    " Cute mom " I said.
    " Fine then don't believe me " She said
    " Mom , can you just not joke about that I'm already not in the mood " My sister said
    " Psh whats up your butt ? " She asked Ashley
    My sister then didn't say anything .
    " Yeah thats what I thought " My mom said
    " Maybe you should start caring how your kids feel for once mom " I said walking by my mom going upstairs.
    " Excuse me ? " My mom repeated.
    " You heard , " I said going into my room and shutting it.
    I then looked outside to see a for sale sign being put on my lawn .
    " WHAT THE " I Screamed, I ran out of my room and slammed the door.
    " MOM ! YOU CAN NOT BE DOING THIS" I Screamed.
    " Kara chill , shes in her room what are you even screaming about " Ashley asked.
    " Look outside , " I said running back upstairs into my moms room.
    " ARE YOU SERIOUS ? " Ashley screamed and followed me.
    I slammed open my moms door.
    " How dare you " I said to her.
    " How dare I what ? " My mom replied.
    " Make us move, where ever we are moving to , I just got a job , I have an amazing boyfriend and friends , I grew up here , do you know how me and Ashley feel ? " I asked.
    " Do you think i really care , its not your choice its mine, and oh were moving to Mississippi , " She said.
    " I'm not going " I said
    " Oh yes you are both of you are whether you like it or not, and ya know I'm not gonna come home from a good day of work and get my night ruined by you girls , I'm going out for a couple drinks with my friends " My mom said
    " You do that " I replied.
    I walked out of her room into mine furious and fell back to sleep for another hour and a half. I woke up at like 5:45 ish and turned the TV on . I was getting ready to hang out with my friend Katie, I turned the news on and went into my bathroom and got my straighter I plugged it into the electric socket next to my vanity and started to brush my hair , The house phone then rang.
    " Hello " I said.
    " Hi is this Kara Brown ? " The lady asked on the phone .
    " Yes this is she ... " I said suspicious.
    " You might want to come down to the hospital " The lady said
    " I would... if I know what for and if I could drive... "I said.
    " Well I can't tell you why until you get here , ill send a police car to pick you up " The lady said .
    " Uh okay " I replied.
    I clicked off and turned around to see breaking news on the TV, there on the screen was my moms car , flipped over.
    " AH " I screamed, I started crying, Ashley ran up into my room, she took one look at the TV and broke down, Although my mom didn't seem to care about us , we still cared about her and loved her. Me and my sister stood in an embrace crying for ten minutes, I looked up to see a police officer standing in my doorway,
    " Hi I'm guess you are Kara Brown and Ashley right ? " The women police officer said.
    " Yes " I replied.
    " Okay , Well I'm officer Diane and my partner Mike is in the car, I can't tell you anything , all I can tell you is you will find out whatever you need to be told at the Hospital, " She said
    " Okay, let me get situated and well be down " I said.
    My mom was pretty much the only family we had her family lived on the northeast and we lived in Washington state, my dad and her divorced when I was 8 and my sister was 6. We only saw him certain times of the year , he was in the military up until I was ten. He then moved to Canada with my aunts two kids , unfortunately she died in 9/11. My dads family lived all over though. I quickly texted my dad.
    Me : : (
    Dad : you okay honey,
    Me : No , something happen to mom , she was on the news for breaking news, I think shes dead : (.
    I then quickly threw my hair in a bun and put some sweatpants on and a sweatshirt and grabbed my phone and charger and went outside with my sister into the car. We drove to the hospital to be told my mom wasn't doing well , she was in icu and they werent sure she was going to make it.
    " Kara , do you have any other family , we can contact " Officer Diane asked.
    " Uh , I don't know they live on the other side of the US and my dad lives in Canada. " I said.
    She then walked away.
    Me and my sister fell asleep in the waiting room. Suddenly I felt a tap on my shoulder.
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  9. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    April 30, 2011 4:00pm UTC
    Truth
    Chapter 2
    I got home and I saw my dad out side with his face in his hands.
    " Dad you okay ? " I asked.
    "No " He replied upset.
    "What's wrong ? "I asked
    "I think your mom left us " He said
    "Wait... what ? What do you mean ? " I asked.
    "She left after Jas left school " He said " She left letters on your beds but I didnt open either of them. She removed her phone from our plan. She packed everything and left " He said
    I then broke down me and him hugged. I couldn't believe it , I was so upset to know tjhat my mother left me and my sister and my dad.
    " Go pick up Jas from School and let her know " He said
    "Are you sure you don't want to tell her ? " I asked
    " No .. I can't " He said
    "Okay " I replied.
    I then went and got in the car and wiped my tears and redid my makeup and picked up Jasmine. She saw my car and looked surprised.
    " Why are you here ? " She asked getting in the car.
    " Lets go get ice cream " I said changing the topic.
    " Uhm okay " She said
    We got to the Ice cream place. I went up to the counter with her adn there he was Anthony.
    " Hey Stranger " He said
    " Uh hi " I replied
    " Whos this " He asked pointing to Jasmine.
    " My sister " I replied.
    " Oh hey " He said introducing himself
    I then got a twist cone and Jasmine got mint chocolate chip . I then took her over to the table .
    "Something happened didn't it ? " She said
    I then sighed .
    " Yeah " I said responding
    " Do tell " She said
    " Now this will probably be hard , but you and me have to stay strong " I said
    " Okay" She said
    " You know that Dad and Mom Love you and me right and they care so much for us ? " I asked
    "Yeah " She replied.
    " Well I got home this afternoon to Dad looking pretty upset... Something must be going on with mom because she went away for a while " I said
    My sister started to get upset.
    I hugged her.
    " You mean she left us ? "She asked
    " Thats what we think " I said
    We then started getting upset more.
    " Is dad ok? " She asked
    " I dont know , Probably not , Its his wife of 20 years" I said
    " But Jasmine we are going to have to stick together ok ? "
    " Yeah " She said
    We then finished our ice cream I waved bye to Anthony and we got in the car and went home. Me and Jasmine Ddint go to school the next week we were too upset. I ignored all texts and spent time with my dad and Jas . Jas slept in my bed everynight. On Sunday I heard a knock on the door. It was me and Jas home alone my dad went grocery shopping.
    " Coming " I yelled.
    I opened the door and Anthony was there.
    " Uhm hi ?" I said suprised.
    " Hey " He said
    " Hold on " I said
    " Jas Ill be right back " I yelled
    I then closed the door.
    " Why are you here ? " I asked
    " Where have you been ? " he asked
    " My mom left " I said
    " Your kidding " He said
    " Nope how do you know where I live ? " I asked.
    " Believe it or not I live two houses down and I saw you getting the mail the other day " He said
    " Seriously " I asked
    " Dead serious " He said
    " Oh " I said .
    " Well let me text you later before she gets all worried " I said
    " Haha okay , bye " He said hugging me .
    I then hugged him back.
    " Ill be praying " He said walking away
    "Thanks !
    I then walked back into my house.
    I then got a text from Anthony later on
    Anthony : Hey Liz wanna hang out tommorow after school ?
    Me : Sure
    Anthony : : D yay ! see ya tommorow
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  10. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    April 29, 2011 11:04pm UTC
    Truth
    Chapter 1
    It was the first day of school. Me , My dad, and my mom and younger sister Jasmine just moved from California to Nevada. My sister Jasmine was in 8th grade. She came to me about everything. By the way I'm Liz Brown short for the Elizabeth obviously. I got the long brown hair with blue eyes. I'm almost 5"8. I'm a Christian. This was the first time I ever moved and to be honest it was hard leaving a house I grew up in. No my life is not perfect and Yes I have been through hell and back. But I always put a smile on my face and live life to the fullest. It was August 29th 7 am in the morning it was a Thursday. My parents were arguing for some reason. I walked into my sisters room to see If she was ok. Our parents had been fighting alot. I think moving had been causing them fights. My sister was crying.
    " Liz , Mom has been acting weird this morning" said Jasmine.
    "What do you mean ? " I asked
    " She keeps telling me she loves me and shes going to be sorry " She said
    " Hmm " I said
    " Also to look over dad " She continued.
    My dad then walked into my sisters room.
    "Dad is mom ok ? " I asked
    " I hope , shes been acting different , somethings definitely wrong with her " He said " But go get ready its your first day you don't want to be late"
    I was so nervous about going to school . I was hoping to meet a friend. I straightened my hair and put it in a braided pony tail to the side. I then put on a Love is the answer shirt with Light denim skinny Jeans and Roxy Flip flops. I grabbed my cell phone and ran downstairs and grabbed a water bottle and jumped into my car and drove to school. I walked into homeroom and sat down next to this kid. I then looked over to look at him. He was so cute. He had blue eyes that shined and shaggy brown hair.
    " hey " He said
    " Hi " I replied
    " What's your name? " He asked
    " Liz , you ? " I replied
    " Anthony " He responded.
    "Cool " I answered
    " I'm guessing your new ? " He asked
    " Yeah " I replied
    "Cool , ya look nervous " He said
    " Do I really ? "I asked
    " Nah , I'm just messing " He said " Let me see your schedule"
    I handed him my schedule .
    " Dude, We have the same classes " He said
    " Oh this should be interesting" I said
    " Oh don't worry it will be " He said
    The homeroom bell rang. I went to first period and got sat next to Anthony again.
    I rolled my eyes when I saw him sitting next to my seat.
    " Don't worry Liz , this is how its going to be for every class , alphabetical order get hype " He said
    I laughed.
    During first period he kept handing me notes asking me about myself me and him seemed to have alot of things in common we both like All time low and never shout never and bands like that , We each had one sibling , and both liked Chinese food there were more things to that we had in common. I decided to drop my lunch period since school ended at 1:30. In 7th period the last period of the day Anthony asked for my number I gave it to him. I seemed to have a good day. I then went to my locker and put my books in my locker and left school. On the way home I had a weird feeling something was going to happen.
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  11. bratgrl430 bratgrl430
    posted a quote
    April 29, 2011 9:47pm UTC
    Hey Witty <3
    So I want to write a story but ya know
    I got stupid writers block
    any idea/suggestions.
    Ill dedicate the story to you ?
    Please <3
    I have nothing else to do on this boring
    Friday night
    <3
    bratgrl430

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