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TheMascaraSeries
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June 28, 2012 3:25pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 13.
““You like nice sweetie.” My mom complimented my strapless black dress.
“Thanks.” I said, adjusting my crutches. “I have a date tonight.”
“Excuse me, I thought we agreed on dinner tonight?” My mom crossed her arms, waiting for an explanation.
“Sh//t.” I mumbled under my breath. “Mom, I’m sorry, I totally forgot. But this is really important. Like, you have no idea.”
“Something is always more important than your family, isn’t it?” She asked, tears brewing in her eyes.
“Mom, come on. It’s just one night, don’t get all emotional.” I rolled my eyes.
“Fine, have a nice time with your friends.” She answered sternly, proceeding to her bedroom.
“Whatever.” I scoffed, limping out to the driveway where Collin was waiting for me in his mustang. I couldn’t wait until I was 16, and could drive wherever I wanted.
“You look nice.” He smiled as I made myself comfortable in the front seat.
“Yeah.” I laughed sarcastically. “The crutches really complete the outfit right?”
Collin laughed. “So, who are we double dating with?”
“Well, uhm.” I laughed unsurely. “Zoe and-“
“Zoe?!” He shot me an almost angry expression.
I gave him an innocent smile, hoping he wouldn’t be mad. After all, Zoe is his ex-girlfriend.
“Oh come on.” I lightly punched his shoulder. “It won’t be that bad.”
“I guess you’re right.” He shrugged his shoulders.
“Oh yeah, one more thing.” I said hesitantly, knowing that the whole Zoe thing was already a lot to take in.
“What?” He asked nervously.
“You have to make my ex-boyfriend jealous.” I said slowly, trying not to make eye contact. “That’s who Zoe’s date is.”
“Really?” he asked surprised. “Okay.”
“Seriously? You spaz over a double date with Zoe, but you’re okay with me just telling you that you have to act like my boyfriend?”
“Yeah.” He winked at me.
I smiled, rolling my eyes at his immaturity.
“So, do I have to like, kiss you and stuff?” He asked hopefully.
“If you’re okay with that.” I giggled.
“I think I’ll manage.” He said happily, as we pulled up to the beach.
“Okay.” I sighed. “You ready?”
He nodded, helping me out of the car. Collin slipped his arm around me as we walked towards Zoe and Jake, who were standing next to a game on the pier. I had to admit, the look on Zoe’s face was priceless when she saw me with Collin.
That’s right sweetheart, I thought to myself.
Paybacks's a b//tch.
For all of you who left comments in the last chapter, thank you ♥ You are all amazing, and really made me feel better. You guys are right, I shouldn't let that kind of stuff get to me. &for those of you who were wondering, I wasn't considering the hate as people who pointed out my mistakes. Some girl wrote me this big long paragraph on how my story sucked and that I was stupid. I'm working on chapter 14 right now, should be up soon ♥

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kenzie_98
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June 27, 2012 6:45pm UTC

Honestly,
My biggest fear is growing up

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TheMascaraSeries
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June 27, 2012 3:26pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 12.
“So, what were you going to tell me?” Zoe said happily.
“Oh.” I said, remembering Jake and I’s kiss. “It was nothing, really.”
“Are you sure?” Zoe asked suspiciously, raising one eyebrow. “You seemed pretty excited before.”
“Yeah, but it was no big deal, I promise.” I lied right through my teeth, giving her an award winning fake smile.
“But I really should be getting back home now, my mom said dinner would be ready soon.”
“Already? But you just got here?” Zoe whined.
“Sorry.” I shrugged my shoulders. “Mother’s orders.”
“Okay, whatever.” She brushed it off. “I have to call Jake anyways, you know, to see if he wants to go out sometime or something.”
“Have fun.” I gave a sarcastic smile, rushing back down the steps to leave.
P!ssed off didn’t even begin to describe my emotions towards Zoe right now. Jake was mine. I mean, not like ‘we’re dating’ mine, but I had dibs! Zoe dating him was completely against the girl code.
I stormed through the front door of the house, making my ways up stairs.
“Back so soon?” My mother asked, holding a freshly brewed cup of coffee.
“Mhm.” I sneered, slamming the door to my room.
I knew that it was wrong to take it out on people who had nothing to do with it, but I couldn’t help it. I had to let my anger out somehow. I threw my phone against the wall, hoping that maybe it’d break, and I’d have an excuse to never text Zoe again. Suddenly, my phone began to vibrate.
“Speak of the devil.” I scoffed, seeing one new text message from Zoe appear on my screen.
“We’re going out tomorrow night!(: “ The text read.
I rolled my eyes, why would Jake go out with Zoe? Did that kiss mean nothing to him?
“Oh hey, what a coincidence!” I sent back. “An old guy friend and I are going out tomorrow night too.(: Double date?”
“Of course!” Zoe replied. “I’ll text you the detes later.(:”
I gave a devious smile, looking up a number in my phone.
“Hey Collin!” I said sweetly into the phone. “I haven’t talked to you in forever!”
We began making small talk about Maine, and how I was back for good now.
“Yeah, we should totally go out sometime!” I exclaimed. “How about tomorrow? Two of my friends are going out too, so it’ll be a double date.”
“Sounds great.” He laughed.
“Perfect.” I said, examining my freshly done nails. “See you tomorrow.”
I then hung up, leaving a guilty smile on my face.
Going out to eat with my ex-boyfriend?
Two can play that game
Okay, so I made a few mistakes last chapter. Josh was supposed to say Jake, (I used to write a story with a Josh in it ) &Dad, was supposed to say step dad. I was really tired when I wrote that..I'm so sorry. I've been getting a lot of hate lately, and I realize my stories arn't that great. I don't need to be reminded. When I'm finished with this story, i'm probably just going to stop writing. Okay, that's all..
-Hint-
“So, do I have to like, kiss you and stuff?” He asked hopefully.
“If you’re okay with that.” I giggled.
-Bree's POV-

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TheMascaraSeries
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June 20, 2012 8:37pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 8.
-Jake's POV-
“Someone page Doctor Rene, stat!” A nurse yelled to a few by standard employee’s."
“Bree, I’m so sorry.” I gripped her hand, squeezing my eyes shut tightly to avoid the tears.
“Can any of you tell me what happened to her?” The nurse asked, observing Bree’s shattered leg.
“S-she was on the jetski.” I muttered. “And we were about to hit a tree, so I pulled her off, and she hit the prop, and, and.”
I broke down, how could I have been so stupid? I could have just pulled her off a little further to the left, and we wouldn’t be in this situation.
“Hey, this isn’t your fault.” The nurse comforted me, patting me softly on the back. “The way I see it, you may have saved her life. Do you know what could’ve happened if she hit that tree?”
“Well, n-“
“She could’ve died.” The nurse cut me off. “But you saved her. And now, with the proper treatment, she’ll be fine again in no time.”
“Bring her in!” A doctor yelled anxiously.
Bree’s hand released from mine, and a few of the hospital employees cautiously rushed her to the operating room.
I sat down in one of the waiting room chairs, burrying my face into my hands.
-2 HOURS LATER-
-Bree’s POV-
“Where am I?” I asked tiredly, slowly opening my eyes.
I instantly felt a throbbing pain in my right leg, causing me to scream.
“Bree, calm down. You’re going to be fine. We just finished stitching up your leg, so it’s going to hurt a little.” A nurse explained to me.
As I reached to grasp my leg, but the nurse’s hand quickly restrained me from doing so.
“That’s another thing.” She added. “Don’t touch it, we wouldn’t want the stitches coming open.”
I rolled my eyes, resting my head back on my pillow.
“What exactly happened to me? I mean, how did I get here?” I asked curiously.
The nurse examined her clip board, looking for some type of identification.
“Well.” She started. “It says here that a man named Jake Taylor brought you in. Do you know him?”
I paused for a second, suddenly remembering everything that had gone down. The jet ski, the tree, Jake yelling. I should have listened when he told me to slow down.
“Y-yes.” I said reluctantly. “I know him.”
“Excuse me, nurse?” A lady poked her head through the door to my room. “Is she ready for visitors?”
The nurse looked at me with wondrous eyes. I nodded my head slightly, letting her know I was ready. The woman then left the room, and shortly after, I was greeted by all of my friends.
Everyone gave me hugs, telling me they were so scared, and glad that I was going to be okay, except Jake. He approached me slowly, with pain filled eyes.
“Bree..” He whispered, hugging me softly.
"I'm so sorry."
You guys are so amazing, thank you for all the feedback (: Characters are up on my profile (:
The number to reach for next chapter is 555 [:
-Hint-
“So, it’s a date?” Jake asked hesitantly.
I felt butterflies quickly enter the pit of my stomach. Even though this was all just meant to be a game of revenge, I couldn’t help but feel excited.
-Bree's POV-

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TheMascaraSeries
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June 19, 2012 7:50pm UTC

Girls Like me .
Chapter 7.
“You tell him girl.” Zoe gave me an approving wink.
I smiled back at her, pleased with Jake’s reaction.
“Hey, look at that!” Jaycie pointed.
We all look towards where she had pointed, seeing a jet ski rental place.
“Anyone got 50 bucks?” Ryan asked, seeing the rental fees.
I pulled out two twenties and a ten from my bag, handing them to Ryan.
“It’s the least I can do.” I smiled.
We paid for the Jet Ski’s, then placed our things in the rental lockers.
“Who’s riding with who?” Zoe asked. “We only had enough to rent 3 Jet Ski’s for 2 hours.”
Jaycie quickly clung to Noah, making it pretty clear who she would be riding with. Jaycie stepped over to Ryan’s side, which only left me with Jake. He gave me a small smile, and it only felt right to give him one in return. I didn’t want to make this anymore awkward than it had to be.
“That settles that.” Ryan said, giving us each a Jet Ski key. “Let’s go!”
We all rushed down to the jet skis, claiming the one we wanted. I picked out a bright neon green one, and being that Jake was a guy, he didn’t really mind the color.
“Do you know how to work this?” I giggled, trying to put the key into the ignition.
Sure, I was being a bit of a flirt, but it was all part of the plan, right? Jake laughed; helping me put the key in the correct way. I then climbed onto the Jet Ski, and Jake climbed on right behind me. His body was pressed up tight against mine, even though there was clearly enough room on the set.
“Better hold on.” I turned around, smiling at him. Our lips nearly touched. “I’m a crazy driver.”
“Whatever you say.” He teased, wrapping his arms around my toned waist.
The gentle touch of his strong hands gave an instant flashback of all those memories 2 years ago. All the summer nights I had tried so hard to forget. No Bree, stop it. Just drive.
I twisted the throttle, and the Jet Ski took off. We instantly became soaked as I made sharp turns and hit rapid speeds.
“Slow down Bree!” Jake said in an almost serious tone.
“Why?” I laughed. “You scared?”
“Slow down!” Jake said more sternly.
“Oh settle dow-"
“Bree, lookout!” Jake screamed.
As I looked ahead, the image of a large half broken tree trunk came into view. I tried to swerve, but I couldn’t. It was too late. Jake held my waist tightly, trying to pull me off of the Jet Ski, and save me from the collision.
As he pulled me off of the slippery black leather seat, we plunged into the cold ocean water.
I could taste the salty flavoring seep into my taste buds, and the sharp metal Jet Ski propeller,
piercing into my leg.
Yay, new chapter already :D haha, feedback? What do you guys think is going to happen? (: I always hate when people end chapters with cliff hangers..but i'm one of those people, sorry. (; Alao, I don't know how many times i'm going to have to repeat this:p , I WILL NOT give you notifications if you werent already on the list. i no longer do witty notifications.:p
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---Hint---
I broke down, how could I have been so stupid? I could have just pulled her off a little further to the left, and we wouldn’t be in this situation.
-----Jake's POV----
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SkyOfBrightStarrs_
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June 20, 2012 3:24pm UTC

I Wonder,
How dissapointed Walt Disney would be if
he
saw what Disney Channel has become.

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xemilystevex
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June 19, 2012 3:20pm UTC

Dancing around your room singing into your hairbrush, not caring what you look like, having fun while you can♥
then you see your mum there watching you. awks.

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