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My Stories
so far on witty i have finished 2 stories. the first was 'right and wrong' which really got me started on witty. the next was 'through my eyes' which had like 8 different POV's which was kind of confusing. i started i play to win, but it was stupid sooo... i ended it. right now i'm working on welcome to my life. so check it out. (:
  1. writemeastory writemeastory
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    October 2, 2011 4:19pm UTC
    hey witty,
    it's writemeastory
    i decided to come back to writing stories on witty,
    but not on this account.
    thebreakofdawn <---new story account.
    thanks so much for your support on this account,
    you guys are the best <3

  2. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 25, 2011 4:29pm UTC
    welcome to my life
    chapter 2
    I hung out at the shop for a while, and decided to watch the people walk by. "Oh hey, Christy?" Jason yelled from under a car.
    "Hmmm?" I said, staring outside at what I would consider to be a really hot guy.
    "Take the envelope on the counter to the bank. Make sure you go to my friend Dan though, because he knows who you are."
    "Okay." I grabbed the envelope, and hurried out the door. Guess it wasn't the end for me and Mr. hotstuff. I straightened out my clothes, and walked out of the shop. This part of town consisted of a bunch of little shops all lined up in a giant circle. I saw him turn down an alley, and curiously peeked from behind the dumpster. He was sitting, in the corner of the alley, silent tears falling from his eyes. I bit my lip. Should I go talk to him? Should I walk away? It took every ounce of courage I had, but I walked over and sat next to him.
    "Listen, I know you don't know who I am, but I hate to see people cry. Sometimes it's easier to tell a stranger what's wrong then someone you know. Do you want to talk?"
    "You wouldn't understand." He said, staring at the ground, he stopped crying. He lifted his head up to look at me, and I saw gorgeous brown eyes that matched his light brown hair.
    "You never know. Go for it."
    "My whole family was just killed in a car accident." He sniffled, and I swore I was about to cry too.
    "My mother overdosed when I was 2, and my father killed himself when I was 6. I understand." I whispered, the memories coming back to me. A single tear escaped my eye.
    "You don't need to cry, too. I didn't mean to make you upset." He said.
    "I wasn't really planning on it." I laughed. He smiled.
    "Pretty girls don't need to cry." He wiped the tear from my face, all I could do was smile.

  3. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 25, 2011 4:08pm UTC
    welcome to my life
    chapter 1
    I opened my eyes to a lovely saturday morning, and ran outside. It was summer, and I was free to do whatever. Not that my foster parents would care, they hardly have time to even say hi to me. I've never had a parent figure though, so I'm used to it. I ran over to the dock and sat on the edge, dipping my toes into the water. I swung my legs back and forth, water splashing everywhere. I felt the sunshine on my freckled nose, and my blonde hair was lighter than usual, that's just what summer does to it. I stared out over the lake, seeing fish occasionally skim the top of the water. I got up, and went back inside. I got ready, and decided to run up to my brother's shop. He's 27, and he owns a car shop. His name is Jason. He's not my real brother, but I consider him it. I pushed open the shop doors, and walked inside.
    "Ay, Christy! You're here!" Jose, one of his workers, shouted from behind a car.
    "Little sis!" Jason said. "What's up?" He smiled.
    "Nothing, just bored."
    "Oh. How's Sue and Peter treating you?"
    "The same, you know." I looked at the ground and he frowned. Jason was muscular, with brown hair and green eyes.
    "Well you're always welcome to hang out here if you'd like." I smiled that I always had a place to go. All the guys at the shop always had my back.

  4. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 23, 2011 4:40pm UTC
    dear readers,
    ---------------------------------------------------------------
    so i'm not going to leave witty.
    but i am going to stop i play to win.
    it's not as good as i thought it was going to be,
    soo, i'm going to start a new story tonight.
    thanks for readingg <3
    look out for my new story, chapter 1 will be up tonight (:

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    February 21, 2011 2:51pm UTC
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  6. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 20, 2011 12:39pm UTC
    *i decided to finish this story, so here's chapter 6. i'll keep writing. thanks for the support <3
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 6 - *
    I woke up at around 10, and watched T.V. until 11, then I got in the shower. I blowdried my hair, and plugged in the straightener. I turned on some music, and went over to my closet. I flipped through my clothes, saying my decisions out loud.
    "No. No. Maybe. No. No. Maybe. No. No. Definitely not! No. Maybe. PERFECT!" I yelled as I grabbed the cutest dress ever off of it's hanger. It was dark purple, and it complimented my shape. I layed it out on my bed, and went to straighten my hair. By the time I finished it was 1. I still had a lot of time, so I logged onto facebook. Of course. :) I checked my wall, and read a few posts.
    Jinelle Baker
    text me!!
    Chris McBrien
    hey, i'm going to get you earlier. is 4 okay?
    Sarah Pollen
    omgg is is truue that youuu anddddd chriss maade it officiaaal?!? i want the deets!
    I flipped open my phone, and sent 'hey' to Jinelle. Then I wrote back on Chris's wall.
    yeah, that's fine. see you then (:
    I didn't bother to reply to Sarah, she's the annoying girl that adds way too many extra letters to every word she says. I creeped on some people, read through my home page. All the statuses were about the party tonight, so I posted one.
    bentley's party laterr ! soo excited (:
    I checked the clock, it was about 2:45. I got a drink, and went back upstairs to make sure my hair was straightened still. I touched it up, and put on eyeliner and mascara. I checked the clock. 3:15. Why was time passing sooo slow? I slipped on my dress, and picked out cute black heels. I sat down on my bed and listened to music. Finally, it was 4. I heard a honk, and looked out my bedroom window to find Chris. I yelled to my mom that I was leaving, and ran out to get in his car.
    "Ready?" He asked.
    "Of course." I smiled at him. He backed out of my driveway, and we drove over to Bentley's. The party hadn't started, but I saw Jinelle's cute red convertible in the driveway. Chris opened the door for me, and we went inside to find Jinelle and Bentley setting up. Jinelle was filling bowls with chips and what-not, and Chris was setting up the music.
    "AHH! Acelynn your here!!" Jinelle shouted and ran over to hug me. We helped them finish setting up, and people started arriving.
    **next chapter is gonna be what actually happens at the party, sorry guys.

  7. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 14, 2011 7:54pm UTC
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 5 - *
    We woke up, and got ready for school. Usually most parents wouldn't let you have sleepovers on school nights, but Jinelle's parents weren't hardly there. My mom drove us, and dropped us off at the front door. Jinelle saw Bentley, and ran off to talk to him. I went over to my locker, and got my stuff out. I sighed, I didn't feel like being in school. I felt arms around my waist, and heard a whisper in my ear.
    "Hey beautiful." Chris's breath tickled my neck. I giggled and turned around. He walked me to class, and the next few days went the same way. Him doing something super cute, walking me to class, partnering with me for everything. We weren't official yet, I was waiting for him to ask. Finally, it was Friday. The day went as usual, but in study hall Chris was acting more nervous than usual.
    "What's up, Chris? You're acting funny." I told him.
    "Um, Acelynn?"
    "Yeah?"
    "I want to make it official."
    "Make what official?"
    "Us. Will you be my girlfriend?" He pulled a necklace out of his pocket, it was gorgeous. It had a heart pendant dangling from it.
    "Of course, Chris." He put the necklace on, and hugged me.
    "Miss Jonston and Mr McBrien, no PDA. Please take your seats." The teacher said from the back of the room, not even looking at us. We awkwardly sat down. He scribbled on a paper, and slid it to me.
    There's a party this saturday at Bentley's, you up for it?
    I wrote back in my girly handwriting.
    Sure, sounds good.
    He smiled at me, crumpled the note, and tossed it in the trash, it landed perfectly in. We walked hand in hand to my locker.
    "So, what time is this party?" I asked.
    "Um, like 6ish. I'll get you at 5:45."
    "Sounds good."
    "Alright, well I have to go to my locker. See you later, babe." He kissed me on the cheek, and walked away. I got my stuff out of my locker, and turned to see a kid I didn't know leaning against a locker next to me.
    "He's not who you think he is." The kid had a beanie on, and his hair was jet black. He wore skinny jeans, his hands in his pocket.
    "What do you mean?" I asked.
    "Just be careful." He said, and walked away.
    "Wait! Who are you?" I shouted, but he turned a corner and disappeared. I stood there puzzled, but got over it and waited outside for my mom to get me. She drove me home, and I did my homework. I layed on my bed, flipping through the channels on my T.V. I pulled my binder out of my backpack, and saw A + C surrounded by a heart. We had written that in class. I smiled, and put it back in my backpack. I grabbed my guitar, and sung The Best Thing by Relient K. The song made me smile, the words coming out of my mouth. I sung from the heart, I knew I didn't have a good voice, but I didn't care. I put down the guitar, and layed down to go to sleep.
    * sorry the stories been getting boring, the next chapters gonna be better.

  8. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 13, 2011 7:34pm UTC
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 4 - *
    I ran down the steps, my curls bouncing.
    "BYE MOM!!!" I shouted as I opened the door, and saw Chris standing there, his fist lifted like he was about to knock.
    "Wow...you look...really good." He said.
    "Thanks." He took my arm and walked me to the car. He sat in the front with Bentley, and I sat in the back with Jinelle. She flashed me a smile. They played some music, and we arrived at the restaurant. Chris helped me out of the car like a gentleman. We walked in, Jinelle and Bentley leading the way. Chris took me one way, and they went the other.
    "I thought this was a double date?" I asked. He led me to a table on a balcony, with a beautiful view.
    "I thought this would be nicer." He smiled, pulling out my chair for me, and letting me sit down. The waiter came, and we ordered. As soon as the waiter brought us our food, he left us alone.
    "I'm really glad you came, Acelynn."
    "I'm glad too. This is amazing, Chris!"
    "Only the best for you." I got up and went to the edge of the balcony, and he followed me.
    "The view is amazing!" I said.
    "I know." He smiled, but he wasn't looking at the view, he was looking only at me. I turned to face him, and wrapped my arms around his neck to give him a hug. I let go, and stood there. He looked into my eyes, and went in for a kiss. It was passionate, and slow. We pulled back, and went back to the table.
    "This has been the best night ever." I told him. Jinelle and Bentley came in, and I pulled Jinelle aside.
    "Sleepover at my place tonight?" I asked her.
    "Definitely. You have to spill what happened! I know my date was ahh-maaazz-ing."
    "I will, as long as you tell me too!"
    We went back to the boys, and we got in the car. They drove us home, and Jinelle and Bentley stood there, hugging, looking in each other's eyes. It was the most adorable thing ever. Chris turned to face me, and kissed me. I couldn't help but giggle when he pulled back.
    "You have an adorable laugh." He told me. I smiled, and hugged him, staying in his protective, strong arms for a few seconds. The guys left, and Jinelle and I went upstairs to my room.
    "Tell me everything!!" I shouted at her. I layed on my stomach, my hands holding up my head and my legs dangling in the air. She sat in my beanbag.
    "Okay, well he took me to this really nice table. Then he ordered for me, and must I say it was delicious, and then he told me that he had liked me for a while now, and was glad he finally had the courage to ask me out. Then he kissed me, a quick peck on the lips, and he told me how beautiful I looked."
    "AWWWH!" I shouted.
    "Okay, your turn! Spill, girl!" I told her of the entire date, and she told me she was sure that he definitely liked me a lot. We fell asleep giggling about our dates.

  9. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 13, 2011 11:55am UTC
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 3 - *
    I woke up and straightened my bleach blonde hair, and went off to school. I heard someone shout my name, and turned around to see Jinelle.
    "Hey girl." She said, catching up to me.
    "Hey." I said.
    "Guess who asked me on a date?!"
    "Who?"
    "BENTLEY!!"
    "Oh my gosh, you have liked him forever!" She was soo lucky that the guy she liked finally asked her on a date.
    "We should double date." she said.
    "I don't have a date?"
    "Bentley said you might. And guess who's best friends with Bentley?"
    "Chris." I blushed, but smiled. She ran off to her locker, and left me alone trying to open mine. I put in my combintion, but my locker wouldn't open. I pulled on it as hard as I could.
    "Need some help?" I heard a voice from behind me say. I turned around to see Chris, and smiled.
    "Yeah...it's stuck." I told him. He put in my combination, and opened it easily.
    "There you go." He smiled.
    "Thanks."
    "So, Bentley told me he asked out Jinelle?" Here it comes!
    "Yeah, she told me. She's really happy."
    "Well I was wondering if you wanted to go on a double date, you know. It would be you and me, and Chris and Jinelle." I bit my lip. I had been waiting for this since 7th grade.
    "I'd love to!" I said a little more excited than I should have.
    "Great. Well, I got to get to class. I'll see you in World Studies."
    "Yeah...yeah you will." He walked away, and I leaned against my locker, holding in the excitement. I began to walk to class, holding my books in my arm. The last thing I remember is a sharp pain in my head.
    I woke up in the nurses office, confused as anything.
    "Oh good, your up!" The nurse was so cheery, with her cherry lipstick and strawberry blonde pixie haircut. Her smile was always a little too wide.
    "What happened?" I asked.
    "Hun, you got hit in the head with a football." I sat up and saw Chris sitting in one of the waiting chairs.
    "Chris?"
    "I heard you fall, and turned around. I was scared you weren't going to wake up, so I carried you to the nurse."
    The nurse whispered to me, "The boy was just about in tears, worried sick." I nodded with a huge smile on my face. Chris helped me up, and carried my books to my next class for me. I had a bandage on my head, but it wasn't noticable.
    "Did you really carry me?" I asked him. He nodded.
    "So, are you still feeling up to our double date tonight?" He asked.
    "Of course." I smiled. He kissed my cheek and left me at my classroom. I walked in, and the class stared at me. I handed the teacher my nurse's pass, and sat down awkwardly. I heard people whispering my name, whispering Chris's. They must have seen us.
    After class, I went to my locker. People were still whispering about us, but I ignored it. After school, I went home and got ready for my date. I was soooo excited! I curled my hair, and put on natural makeup. I wore a cute flowery sundress, and white sandals. I put on my good luck charm, my necklace my dad gave me when I was 4. I sprayed myself with amazing smelling perfume, and I was ready to go by the time they came to pick me up.

  10. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 12, 2011 6:47pm UTC
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 2 - *
    He sat down next to me.
    "Hey." He said.
    "Oh, hey Chris."
    "So guess we'll be seeing a lot of each other."
    "Yup, I guess we will."
    "Good." He smiled at me. The teacher calmed the class down, and begun to teach. I didn't pay attention. All I could think about was Chris. The bell rang and everyone went out of the room.
    "Acelynn?" Chris nudged me.
    "Oh, oh. Crap. Time for the next class." He laughed at me.
    "Come on." He said, taking my hand and walking out of the room. We had spanish together next. We didn't sit next to each other, Chris was actually next to Kayla. The most popular, pretty girl in school. Just great. But I was next to Jinelle, my bestfriend.
    "ACELYNN!" She smiled.
    "Jinelllllllleee." I laughed.
    "I saw you come in with Chris."
    "Oh..." I giggled.
    "Spill, girl!"
    "It's nothing. He just said he's glad we have classes together."
    "Ooh la la." She laughed.
    "Shut up." I blushed.
    "Acelynn gusta Chris." She said playfully.
    "That doesn't even make sense!" I laughed at her. I glanced over at Chris, he was pretty much ignoring Kayla. Thank god. The bell rang, and I went off to my next class, gym. Chris didn't walk me there, he walked with his friends. I walked with Jinelle.
    "So, gym next. Yuck. Let's hope they don't make us do much, I don't want to get sweaty." She said. She had such a personality.
    "They'll probably just explain rules, we don't even have to change, I don't think." I guessed.
    "True."
    The girls locker room was locked, and the sign said to go to the gym. They had the girls on one side, and boys on the other. The gym teachers explained dress code, locker room rules, gym rules, and everything else. The rest of my classes flew by. The entire duration of study hall consisted of me and Chris exchanging looks from across the room, my smiles, his winks. Everything. It was probably the most adorable thing I had ever done. After that, I went home and everything was pretty much normal from then on. I went to bed, woke up, and got ready for another day of school.

  11. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 12, 2011 5:25pm UTC
    I Play To Win
    * - Chapter 1 - *
    My name is Acelynn. I am a girl version of what you would call a player. I lead boys on, and then crush they're hearts. And this is why.
    --------------------------------------------------
    *6 months earlier*
    "Hey Acelynn." Chris shouted from across the hallway. I waved to him. I had a crush on him since 7th grade, and I couldn't believe he was even talking to me, but I kept my cool. He came over to me.
    "Whatcha got there?" He asked, pointing to my schedule.
    "Oh, just my classes."
    "Let me see. Maybe we'll have some of the same classes." I handed him the paper and he compared my schedule to his.
    "We have...gym, world studies, spanish, and study hall together. Cool." He smiled at me, flipping his blonde skater hair. "Well I gotta go, see you around?"
    "Sure." I said, and he turned to walk away.
    "Yes!" I whispered to myself, and went off to first period. I sat there smiling, oblivious to what the teacher was saying.
    "Acelynn." She called on me, crap.
    "Oh, what?"
    "What is a oxymoron?"
    "Oh, isn't it that thing where you put 2 words together that don't make sense?"
    "Yes." She tipped her glasses and gave me a funny look. "An oxymoron is where you put two antonyms together to make a phrase. Some examples are same difference, alone together, awfully pretty, blind eye..." The bell cut her off, and the students gathered their books.
    "The bell does not dismiss you. I do." She snapped, and everyone sat back in their seats.
    "For homework do pages 13 to 18, all. It will be graded, and will count towards your grade. You may leave. Quietly." Everyone groaned.
    "Homework? On the first day of school?" I heard the boy behind me say.
    "I said quietly! Next noise I hear, that person will have detention." I quietly left the classroom, my parents would kill me if I got detention on the first day. My next class was World Studies, with Chris. I hurried to class, and my teacher pointed me to my seat. I sat down, but most of the class wasn't there yet. Chris walked in casually, and the teacher pointed next to me. Chris was going to sit right next to me? Well, if I was excited before I don't think anything could top this. Besides him asking me out. But that would never happen.

  12. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 12, 2011 4:42pm UTC
    I Play To Win
    new story coming soon!

  13. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 12, 2011 4:01pm UTC
    Through My Eyes - Spring Break
    Chapter 21 - The Conclusion
    2 years later
    Carson's POV
    Jade and I have been together for 2 years now, and we're going to get married when we get out of college. She's the only girl I never messed up with, and I'm going to keep it that way.
    Amber's POV
    Justin and I broke up last year after I cheated on him. He couldn't take that I wasn't faithful, and he left me. Worst. Mistake. Of. My. Life. I'm currently in rehab for alcohol abuse. I started drinking after he broke up with me.
    Austin's POV
    When Christi's Mom passed, I was right there with her, and her mom's last words to Christi were, "He's a keeper." We're still together, and we're going to college together.
    Roxie's POV
    Jake and I are still together, engaged actually, and I'm pregnant. With his twins. I'm going to college online, and he's going to real college to get a job to support our family.
    Kayla's POV
    Me and Dominick are still dating, and we're closer than ever. The colleges we're going to are on separate coasts, but we're planning on keeping a long distance relationship.
    Baylee's POV
    Luke and I never dated, it turns out he already had a girlfriend. I'm living it up single, no ties. College time is party time!!
    THE END :)

  14. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 7, 2011 3:39pm UTC
    Through My Eyes - Spring Break
    Chapter 20 - Cinderella & Prince Charming
    Austin's POV
    Spring break was going to be over in 2 days. I had to find Christi again. No matter how much I looked, I couldn't find her. I went back to the house, and slumped on the couch.
    "Damnit." I growled. Dominick came over and plopped down next to me.
    "You'll find her." He smiled a devious smile, and there was a knock at the door. He ran to get it, and there stood Christi.
    "Christi!" I exclaimed. "Oh, I have your phone." I handed her the bright pink phone.
    "Thanks. So do you wanna go on the boardwalk with me?" She asked.
    "Sure, let's go." We walked along the boardwalk.
    "So, where are you from?" I asked her.
    "Oh, I live here."
    "Oh, that's pretty cool. I'm just on spring break."
    "Aw. That's too bad. Maybe we could've been really good friends."
    "Well, we could. I would just have to come down here and visit you a lot."
    "I would like that." She smiled, and I pulled her in for a kiss. We walked hand in hand, and got lunch.
    "Call me?" She asked as I walked up to her house.
    "Definitely." I beamed, and kissed her goodbye.
    "Ehem." I heard a voice. Her dad stood at the door.
    "Oh hi Mr-"
    "Mr. Smith."
    "Hello Mr. Smith. I'm Austin."
    "Hello Austin. Come on, Christi. We need to go visit your mother." I gave her a puzzled look.
    "Austin, my mom has cancer."
    "Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry."
    "It's okay." She shrugged quietly. I awkwardly turned around and walked home.
    Amber's POV
    I met up with Justin at the pool, and found out he didn't live far from me.
    "Amber, I like you. A lot."
    "Justin-"
    "I know it's only our first date."
    "It is just our first date..."
    "But I have a plan. How about in the time we have left, I take you on as many dates as possible. Crunch in a week's worth of dates in our last 2 days."
    I smiled. "Sounds like a deal." He took me to the movies, the mall, the beach, out to dinner, out to lunch, basically anything you could think of. He took me jet skiing, and we even swam with dolphins.
    "This has been the best two days of my life." I looked into his eyes, and poured the truth out of my heart.
    "Diddo." He joked as he kissed me. Maybe I had found my Prince Charming.
    "Amber?"
    "Yes, Justin?"
    "Will you be my girlfriend?"
    "Of course, Justin."
    Carson's POV
    I went to the boardwalk to try and find yet another girl. Her name was Vicky. I took her home, and we hung out. Which turned into making out. And then that turned into going too far. Of course. Everytime I had a relationship, I ruined it. I yelled at her to get out of my house. What was I doing? What is my life going to be? I ran out to the beach and sat in the sand. A girl sat next to me.
    "Hey, you okay?" She asked me.
    "I guess."
    "Tell me what's going on."
    "Well, I had this amazing girlfriend, Amber. Then I broke up with her and started liking Kayla, who is dating my bestfriend now, and then I accidentally went too far with Alicia, and then I liked Lily, and I went too far with her and sent her away. I did the same thing with Vicky. What is wrong with me?"
    "Everyone has problems." She held my hand and I turned to look at her. She was gorgeous.
    "By the way, I'm Jade."
    "Carson."
    "I like that name." We walked on the beach, and she told me about her problems. Her abusive ex-boyfriend, her dead-beat father, and her sister. Her sister was killed when she was 5. I guess I wasn't the only one with problems.

  15. writemeastory writemeastory
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    February 6, 2011 6:54pm UTC
    Through My Eyes - Spring Break
    Chapter 19 - After The Party
    Amber's POV
    I exchanged numbers with Justin, and we agreed to hang out soon. As the party ended, everyone flooded out the door. Along with Justin. I put his number in my phone. I couldn't wait to see him again. I ran back into my room, and drifted off to sleep thinking about him.
    Carson's POV
    Me and Lily went all the way. Why did I keep doing this? Going too far with every girl? I'm falling apart. I layed there in just my boxers, and Lily was sitting up, getting dressed. I said bye, and she left. She gave me her number. I went back in my room, and sat on my bed.
    "Dude, you look beat." Dominick said as he came in to go to sleep.
    "It's nothing. Goodnight." I lied.
    "Night, bro." He went to bed, and soon enough he was snoring. My phone lit up.
    ' Text message from: Lily ' the screen read. I opened it.
    'Hey, I had fun. Maybe we could hang out again ? Text me back soon.' I bit my lip, and texted back slowly. My fingers hit each key slowly, I knew it wasn't what I should say.
    'Lily, it's not you. It's me. There's nothing between us, sorry.' I hit sent, and threw my phone onto my bed. I paced the room. Well, that relationship is ruined.
    Roxie's POV
    Jake and I came back inside from the beach and layed on the couch together.
    "I'm sorry I ever doubted you." I whispered. He walked me back to my room, and kissed me goodnight. I fell asleep smiling.
    -------------------*The next morning.*----------------------
    I woke up and everybody sat in the kitchen, eating their breakfast.
    "Dude, last night was awesome." Dominick said.
    "Yeah...I guess." Carson sighed.
    "I met this girl Christi, and she gave me her number, but she dropped her phone on the way out. How am I supposed to find her?" Austin groaned.
    "Aww, that's so cute! It's like...Cinderella!" Baylee beamed.
    Jake and I just sat there smiling, listening to everybody. We went out to the beach, and layed on a blanket, holding hands.
    "Jake?" I said.
    "Yeah, Roxie?"
    "Would you ever leave me?"
    "No, Roxie. I would never ever ever leave the girl that I love. Together forever?"
    "Together forever." We sealed our promise with a kiss.
    Austin's POV
    This was a major problem. How was I going to find Christi? I went out to the boardwalk and looked for her, I hung out at the beach, and zip. Nothing. No help whatsoever. I needed to find her, before spring break was over.
    "Dude, you need to chill." John said. I ignored him.
    "You don't understand."
    "I know I'm single, never been in love, but it can't be that crazy, can it?"
    "It can. Trust me, it can." I told him, and ran off to look some more.

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    Through My Eyes - Spring Break
    Chapter 18 - The Party Part 3
    Kayla's POV
    I danced with Dominick for the whole party. He was sooo adorable. He would slow dance with me during the fast songs, and wrap his arms around my waist. I looked into his eyes.
    "Kayla, I love you. I missed you when we stopped being friends. Remember the promise we made each other in 4th grade? Friends forever? Well we broke it. But I'm ready to make a new promise."
    "Are you now?" I giggled.
    "Yes. Kayla, promise me. You'll be mine forever."
    "I promise." I kissed him on the lips as we slow danced.
    Austin's POV
    Since Baylee doesn't like me anymore, I found a new girl. I pulled her out onto the dance floor, and danced with her.
    "Christi. I really like you." I told her.
    "I like you too Austin." I pulled her in for a quick kiss.
    "Oh crap, I have to go!"
    "What, why?"
    "I have a curfew." She grabbed a pen and scribbled her number on my hand, and she ran out. She dropped her phone on her way out, and I picked it up. How was I supposed to call her, when I had her phone?
    Jake's POV
    I ran out of the house and sat on the sand. How could Kayla kiss somebody? I heard someone sit down on the sand next to me, and turned my head.
    "Jake, I'm really sorry. I just can't stand the idea of someone else being with you, and I got jealous. I wanted you to feel the way I felt when Chelsea was flirting with you." I turned to face her. How could I say no to those eyes?
    "Roxie. I love you. I've never felt this way for a girl before. I'm used to being the player, but I feel like you made me hang up my jersey. You're the only girl I want to be with." She grabbed my hand.
    "I'm sorry." She whispered. I leaned against her, and she could tell I forgave her. I kissed her passionately. She bit her lip. I got up, and pulled her behind me. We went for a walk along the beach.

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    Through My Eyes - Spring Break
    Chapter 15 - The Party Invitations
    Dominick's POV
    "Dude, guys! We should throw a huge party!" I suggested.
    "Yeah, dude! But theres only 10 of us." Austin said.
    "We can go to the beach and invite some hot chicks." Carson said.
    "Yeah! Are you girls up for it?" I asked.
    "Only if we can invite some hot guys." smiled Amber. So we all broke up into teams to go invite some people to our party. I was with Carson. We decided to walk the boardwalk.
    "Cute blonde to the left." Carson said.
    "Hey, I'm Dominick." I went right up to her.
    "Oh hey. You're pretty cute. By the way, mines Lily. Who's your friend?" she said.
    "Carson." I replied.
    "You are pretty cute too, Carson." she smiled.
    "Well, we're having a party tonight at our beach house. Wanna come?" I asked her
    "Sounds awesome!"
    "You can invite some friends if you want to, we're looking for people to invite."
    "Okay, I will!" We gave her our address and went to find more people. We invited a guy named Drake and 2 girls named Lexi and Eliza. That makes 4. We went back to the house, our job was about done. Especially if they invited their friends like we said.
    Baylee's POV
    I was with Kayla for the party search. We walked along the beach, and saw some guys playing football. There was at least 5 of them.
    "Hey guys." I yelled out to them. They all stopped playing and turned to face me.
    "Party tonight at my place? By the way I'm Baylee." I put on my cutest smile.
    "Sure." One guy came right up to me. He was tan, with green eyes, and short brown hair. He was really muscular. "By the way, I'm Luke." He said.
    "Well, Luke. You and all your friends can come." He told me all their names. The shortish redhead was Justin, the super tall blonde was Christian, the super muscular black haired one was named Liam, and then there was a brunette with skater hair named Dylan. I gave him the address and waved goodbye flirtatiously.
    "Well that's 5 people down." Kayla laughed.
    "We need some more girls, because we can't have all guys!" I said. We invited 3 girls named Katie, Devin, and Anna. Then, we invited another guy named Mike. We went back to the house, 9 people is a lot.
    Roxie's POV
    Amber came out with me. We hung out at the snack shop, and invited every cool person who came in.
    "Hey, I'm Amber." She said to a guy.
    "I'm Ian." He said. He had dirty blonde hair, and blue eyes.
    "You wanna come to my party tonight?"
    "Sounds cool, can I invite some of my friends?"
    "Totally, go ahead! How many, do you think?"
    "Um, maybe 4?"
    "Cool. See you later, Ian." She flirted with him MAJORLY. He left. That's 5 people down. We invited 2 more guys named Owen and Tommy. Then a girl named Chelsea. That makes 8 people! We went back to the house after that.
    Jake's POV
    Austin went with me, and we invited 6 super hot chicks. Christi, Kathryn, Alyssa, Phoebe, Erica, and Elli. Then 2 dudes named Josh and Wendall. That makes 8, so we went back to the house. Alicia and John invited 3 guys, 3 girls. Our total party amount was 35 people, but if they invite friends, it could be even more. We set up for the party, some regular drinks and I put out some alcoholic beverages. Might as well have fun, right? We locked all of our bedroom doors except the spare ones, and put on some sick music. Before we knew it, people started arriving.

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