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  1. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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  3. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 28, 2012 2:00am UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 13
    Avalaya
    ''Are you ready, Ava?'' Carson asked, softly. He was smiling, showing his pearly whites. I nodded. He put something in his pocket and took my hand. Today he was going to teach me how to ride the horses. We walked into a huge shed, and then in it were a bunch of stalls and horses. ''This is Star,'' he told me pointing to a large brown horse. ''It's my mum and dads horse.'' He briefly touched a dark coloured horse, ''This is Ashes.'' Thinking about it, Ashes colour fur did look like ash. ''He's mine.'' I pointed to the white horse, who was right at the back. ''Nobody named her, she didn't like anybody and refused to let any one touch her.'' I walked to her and opened the stall. She immediately came to me and I grinned as she let me pat her. ''She's letting you touch her.'' Carson's voice was of pure shock. I smiled and nodded. ''Well then, I have no idea how long you're staying with us but - she can be yours. What do you want to name her?'' I shrugged and then a name came to mind. I bent down to the dirt outside of the stall, my horse was in and wrote 'Lacy'. ''That's a nice name, so she is now called Lacy.'' He got the horses ready, putting the saddles and everything on them. ''Okay, so this is how you get on.'' After Carson showed me how to get on he spoke, ''To ride Lacy, just tap your left foot on her belly gently to make her go and twice to make her stop. With your right foot you tap her once to slow down and twice to speed up.'' I nodded, taking in all the information. ''Hold onto her mane until you feel balanced,'' Carson instructed. I nodded, he continued showing me how to ride and finally I got the hang of it. ''Now that you've got it, c'mon, I want to show you something.'' I rode the horse beside Carson and we went through the bushes. I tried not to think about what happened last time I went somewhere secluded. After riding Lacy for about 10 minutes we got to an opening. ''Stop her,'' he said. I used my left foot to my her stop. We stayed on the horses and I looked at where we were, we were on a cliff. We could see everything from here, it was amazing. ''I come here sometimes to think,'' Carson said quietly. ''So, lets play twenty question,'' he chirped. From his pocket he got out a small notepad and pen, handing it to me. ''You don't mind, right?'' I shook my head. ''Okay, I'll start. Favourite colour?''
    I quickly wrote, 'purple' on the paper and then 'Favourite animal?'
    ''Definitely horses. Favourite movie?''
    As cliche as it sounds, I wrote down, 'the notebook'. 'Your favourite colour?' I wrote.
    ''My favourite colour was green but then I saw your eyes. Blue. Thats my favourite colour, exactly the same shade as your eyes.'' I felt myself blushing. Nobody had ever said anything that sweet to me. ''You know you're beautiful… I don't even think that word does you any justice. You are perfect, completely flawless.'' I blushed once again. Then Carson leaned closer to me, his lips coming close to mine. Suddenly his lips where on mine and one of his hands on my cheek. My hands where still on the horse, trying to balance myself. His tongue swept my bottom lip and he gently nibbled on my lip as well. I had no idea what to do, I had been kissed before- not by chose though. The men, when I was ten forced me to kiss them. I shook those thoughts away as his tongue entered my mouth, tickling me. I forgot everything, my name, the reason I was mute, how my parents couldn't deal with me- I forgot everything just for that little moment.
    It then registered, Carson was kissing me and I was kissing him back.
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    What do you thinks gonna happen next?
    Teaser: I was paying attention to the handsome guy who had his arms wrapped around me.

  4. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 27, 2012 4:23am UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 12
    Avalaya
    The next morning I woke up, thoughts of last night flooding in my mind. Carson was asleep on the side of my bed, one leg dangling over the side and his hand interlocked with mine. A sly grin crept onto my face. Carson's eyes fluttered open, ''Good morning.'' He glanced at our hands. ''How'd you sleep?'' I put both my thumbs up. ''Okay, cool… I need to be somewhere today, we'll go to the horses tomorrow?'' I nodded.
    ''Carson, where are you?'' Mrs Roberts yelled. Carson walked into the bathroom.
    ''In the bathroom,'' I heard his muffled yell. I tried to forget the dream from yesterday but that was really hard. I had this feeling, I had a feeling that they wouldn't just let it slide like that. There was a soft knock at my door and then it opened to reveal Mrs Roberts.
    ''I hope I didn't wake you, it's just, I was wondering what you were doing today?" she asked. I shook my head, hopefully she'd understand that meant 'nothing'. ''You're free?'' I nodded. ''Would you like to go shopping with me then? We're having a dinner, it's not dressy or whatever but its next week and most of our family should be there.'' I nodded. ''Alright, cool, after you're reading tell me and we'll go.'' I looked out my window to see Carson going into one of the sheds, probably feeding some sort of animal. Right then, he looked like a proper country boy. I smiled. After getting ready I walked down stairs. Mrs Roberts and I spent the rest of day shopping and it felt amazing to not have an adult judge me because I didn't talk- like my mum.
    ''That look's amazing on you,'' the shop assistance said. I looked down to see the plain white dress and brown belt on me. I shrugged, it was nothing special.
    ''It does Avalaya, but I think you should go for more colour. Colour suits you,'' Mrs Roberts told me. I nodded, agreeing with her would be best. I didn't know 'fashion' to well. All I knew is what Emilee told me.
    ''Okay, what about this?'' At the end both me and Mrs Roberts found something to wear, with shoes and accessories. Mrs Roberts had a pair of jeans and nice top and I had a dress.
    ''I'm just going to go get milk from the corner shop, Caleb's home, you won't be alone,'' Mrs Roberts said. Mr Roberts was sat on the couch, a newspaper in his hands.
    ''Oh, hello Avalaya,'' Mr Roberts greeted me. ''Come, take a seat.'' I took a seat opposite of him. ''So, I heard you stopped talking when you where ten. Any particular reason?'' I shook my head. ''Avalaya, I find that hard to believe. You know, when you became mute I was in the area- I was going camping, with some friends. You didn't happen to be in the woods, did you?'' He paused, studding my face. ''Oh, what a lovely locket! I swear I've seen it before!'' There was something that wasn't right about Mr Roberts… He couldn't possibly be the guy from the forest.
    I'd recognise him if I saw the guy from the forest, wouldn't I?
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    I hope you like it! (: I'm just going to come out and say it, Avalaya will not be talking for a while. It'd ruin the story because it's supposed to be about Avalaya being mute. There is going to be a sequel! (: I think it's going to be called 'I'll say, ''I love you.'' ' but that's not very original... so any suggestions? Coommmeeennntt! ;) My uploads aren't going everyday because I've got heaps of tests and things coming up (: Sooorrryy!
    Teaser: ''You know you're beautiful... I don't even think that word does you any justice. You are perfect, completly flawless.''

  5. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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  7. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 23, 2012 3:47am UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 9
    Avalaya
    I traced the picture, gulping. It was defiantly her. I wondered why her picture was on one of the walls. How did Conner, or his family know this poor, poor girl whom saved my life. I know I wouldn't be alive if it wasn't for Maddison and the thought was constantly in my mind. I always felt guilty, it was my fault Maddison was dead. She was dead for coming to me. She was dead for not listening to him. I shuddered, remembering her death. I remembered when I started running, I stopped when I saw a loud scream.
    *flashback* I was running, as fast as I could when I heard a piercing scream. I wondered if the people at the camp site could hear. I stopped suddenly and turned around, I could still see the girl and that man.
    ''Please, please, I'm sorry,'' Maddison whimpered.
    ''That girl got away, you wh/re!'' the man growled. ''She got away because of you,'' he bellowed.
    ''You're horrible!'' Maddison spat. There was a loud slap and a cry of pain.
    ''You're a b/tch! I hope you go to hell!'' I could see, I could see what he did. First, he put his arms around her neck and after when she was nearly dead, he got out a knife and sliced her head. I shivered at the thought, I still could remember her panicked scream. I couldn't move and I watched as he chucked Maddison's dead body into the hole. *end of flashback*
    The door opened, it was Conner. ''What are you doing in here?'' he asked. I shook my head. ''Avalaya, right?'' I nodded. ''Just get out.'' I looked over to the desk, grabbing some paper and a pen.
    'Who's the girl in the picture?' I wrote.
    ''Y-you know h-her?'' he stuttered.
    'Who is she?'
    ''Avalaya, leave,'' Conner said.
    'No, tell me who she is.'
    ''Avalaya, this is private. Do you know her, if you say yes or no then I'll tell you how I know her…'' should I lie? ''Why do you have her locket?!'' he cried. I clutched the necklace.
    'It's mine,' I wrote.
    ''No- no it's not. It say Maddison and if you open it up it'll have a photo of both of us and our parents,'' he told me.
    'Our parents?' I quickly wrote.
    ''Maddison's my sister,'' Conner replied.
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    I hope you like it! (: Two chapters up in one day! Woo Hoo!
    Teaser: If either of us moved, we'd be kissing.

  8. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 23, 2012 3:02am UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 8
    Avalaya
    The door bell ran and I glanced nervously at myself in the mirror. Was I over dressed? Under dressed? I had no idea. ''Ava, the doors for you!'' Mrs Roberts shouted from down stairs.
    ''Oi, Ava, where are you going?'' Carson asked when I stepped out of my room. I was dressed in a purple, tight strapless top and black jeans. I was wearing black heels as well. I waved him off and walked down stairs. David smirked at me. We had met up twice over the week and I fought this guy. 'Death' his name was. I won, much to 'death's' disbelief.
    ''Hey Ava,'' he said. I waved. There was foot steps behind me and there stood Carson.
    ''Who the hell are you?'' Carson spat hatefully.
    ''A friend of Ava's. We've got to get going, we're meeting someone there,'' David said.
    ''Where are you going?'' Carson asked.
    ''A party…'' David's voice trailed off.
    ''Ava is not going to a party,'' Carson said. I swear he was bi-polar. His attitude towards me always changes!
    ''Carson, Avalaya can go wherever she likes. Have fun, sweetie,'' Mrs Roberts said.
    ''Fine,'' Carson muttered. He walked out of sight. Once we got into the car, David started driving to the party. ''Guess who's going to be there?'' he asked. I shrugged my shoulders, ''Josh.'' I grinned. ''I tried to get your best friend Emilee… is that her name?'' I nodded. ''Yeah, anyway, she couldn't come. She said she'd visit you thought. She also said she's sorry that she hasn't texted you and that she lost her phone.'' Soon enough we were at the party and we met up with Josh. I was really close with Josh, he understood me and never ever judged me.
    ''Ava! I missed you, beautiful,'' Josh said once we saw him. He wrapped his arms around me. ''C'mon, let's go inside,'' he said. We walked inside and their were all very familiar faces. I got out my phone, typing in 'Who's house is this?' and showing it to both of the boys.
    ''I think his name is Conner…'' Could it be Conner, Carson's best friend? I saw some photos on the wall, Conner was in most of them. Sh*t it was. ''You want a drink?'' David asked.
    ''Okay,'' I replied. David went to get drinks and I saw Carson, his lips locked with some girls. I felt a pang of jealousy. They broke apart and then his eyes met mine. Josh said he'd go help David and I wondered around, ending up in a room. The music wasn't blaring anymore and I saw a picture of a smiling girl. She was at the beach, a locket around her neck. The very locket that I was wearing right now.
    The little girl was Maddison.
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    Avalaya's outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=53719794
    Teaser: I couldn't move and I watched as he chucked Maddison's dead body in the hole.

  9. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 21, 2012 9:38pm UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 7
    Avalaya
    The next morning, school went quickly. Nobody noticed me; nobody said anything about me being mute. Carson didn't talk to me at school and when I woke up he was already gone for school. After he apologised last night, I left the bathroom. I didn't know what had got into him. I drove to the address Josh had gave me and got out. It was an old warehouse. I didn't know if this was the place. I walked inside to hear noises and saw a guy punching a punching bag. ''Avalaya?'' he questioned. I nodded my head. ''Yes, Josh has told me all about you. I'm David.'' He had dark brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. He looked around my age, maybe a few years older. ''So, laya, show me what you got,'' he smirked. In a moment I had him against the wall. ''You are good, I didn't believe you where Laya.''
    ''David, where do you wa-'' a guys voice stopped abruptly. I turned to see an older guy standing at the door.
    ''This is Laya,'' David said, hoarsely.
    ''Laya? No way… she's so little,'' the guy said and I glared at him.
    ''Anyway, Laya, you can let go of me now.'' I let go of him and he got his breathe. I got my phone out, curious of one thing.
    I typed, 'why aren't there any people here?'
    ''Oh, nobody usually comes on Tuesdays,'' he said. ''Josh just thought you'd like to come and check the place out.'' I looked around the place, it looked a lot like the old place I used to do MMA at. I was tempted to start punching one of the punching bags but realised I had came straight after school and was in my school uniform. ''Say, theres a party at my cousins house on Friday. Do you want to go? You're new, right, so you could meet heaps of new people.'' I nodded my head. ''So that's a yes?'' I nodded once again. ''Okay, give me your number and I'll text you the details later on. I'll come and pick you up, kay?'' I gave him my number. This would be my first party, Emilee had tried to get me to go to parties back at home but I had never wanted to. Honestly, I felt like if I went to the party, it may impress Carson. It may tell him that I'm a normal person except I don't talk.
    Soon after I left and went to the place that was now my 'home'. ''Where have you been?'' Carson asked as soon as I walked into the house. I furrowed my eyebrows. He got a paper from the table and a pen, handing it to me. ''Write.'' I shook my head.
    I write, 'no.'
    ''Why not?'' Carson asked.
    'I don't need to tell you,' I wrote. Carson obviously didn't like that answer.
    ''Just, just tell me… I was worried.'' That alone made me want to tell him, that also made me want to kiss him.
    'I went to visit someone.'
    ''Who?'' I shook my head. I wasn't telling him that. He smiled. ''Okay, fine. I was just worried. I thought something happened to you, Ava.'' 'Ava,' he called me Ava!
    I knew from that moment that I was falling fast and hard for this arrogant jerk.
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    I hope you like it! :D
    Teaser: I saw a picture of a smiling girl. She was at the beach, a locket around her neck. The very locket that I was wearing right now.

  10. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 21, 2012 12:07am UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 6
    Avalaya
    ''I can't believe you know Mr Peet. You're so lucky, isn't he just lush?'' Jo asked me whilst giggling. We were sitting in Mr Peet's class and I couldn't help the shivers running down my spine, remembering when they took my innocence. I was only ten, that shouldn't happen to any ten year old. When the bell rung I hurried out of class.
    ''Okay, have a good day,'' Aaron said. I waved and quickly walked out of the building. I wondered if Carson would take me back to his house, or would he be embarrassed going home with me?
    ''Avalaya, let's go,'' Carson's voice boomed. ''Hurry up.'' I quickly got into his car and he drove off. He was embarrassed. I felt my heart sinking and felt tears brim my eyes. I was a freak. I only had a crush on Carson. How would I have a crush on Carson? I've known him for 3 days and we didn't talk all the much! ''How was school?'' Carson asked, softly. What? Was this guy bi-polar or something? ''Oh right, I forgot you couldn't speak.'' He sighed, ''Why can't you speak? Was their an accident or something?'' I nodded. ''An accident or something?'' I put two fingers up, indicating I meant the second one. ''Something? Like what?'' I shook my head, looking out the window. ''I'm trying here, it'd make my mum happy if I tried. How 'bout on the weekend I teach you how to ride the horses?'' he asked. I grinned and nodded my head enthusiastically. We got 'home' soon enough and we both got out of the car at the same time and entered the house.
    ''How was school, Avalaya?'' Mrs Roberts asked once I had entered the house. I nodded my head, smiled and put my thumb up. I noticed the man sitting on the couch, that must be Mr Roberts.
    ''Oh my, Avalaya, haven't you grown into a beautiful young woman. I've been told you were beautiful but wow. You look just like your mother when she was your age.''
    ''Uh, dad, she doesn't know who you are…'' Carson's voice trailed off.
    ''Oh, my bad. I'm Caleb Roberts, Carson's father.''
    ''Dad, mum, we've got homework…''
    ''Okay, well go do your homework. Oh and Avalaya, your parents said your car should arrive later on tonight.'' I smiled but couldn't help but be a little disappointed that Carson wouldn't be taking me to school. 'Ava, he's a jerk and you've only been in the car with him once!' that little voice in the back of my mind told me.
    After dinner my car came and then around ten I went to my room to go to sleep.
    I was running, I was running away from him. He had killed so many people and I was next on his list. He caught up to me, he put his hands around my neck. ''Stop, stop!'' I cried out.
    ''But you know the little secret, we can't have that happening can we?'' he asked, smirking.
    ''No! No! P-please d-'' it was to late, the knife was already piercing through my skin.
    I woke up, shooting right up in mirror. I walked into the bathroom and washed my face. Carson entered the bathroom, ''Oh hey.'' I went to walk out of the bathroom but heard Carson.
    ''Avalaya?'' I turned around. ''I'm sorry I was such a jerk.''
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    Mr Peet is the guy from Avalaya's flashback. He is NOT the guy from the forest, she doesn't reconise the guy from the forest. I hope that helps! (:
    Teaser: Honestly, I felt like if I went to the party it may impress Carson.

  11. sugarfreak sugarfreak
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    July 15, 2012 9:14pm UTC
    I'll mouth, ''I love you.''
    Chapter 2
    Part one
    Avalaya
    That dreaded day came, the day that I'd be sent away. I felt like I had done something illegal to make my parents want to send me away. ''I am going to miss you so much! Text me and I'll come and visit when I can,'' Emilee said, hoarsely. I smiled and kissed her cheek, waving to her and getting into the car. My father was sitting in the drivers seat and my mother in the passenger seat. I slid into the seat and looked out the window. My parents didn't say a word for the whole drive which was about two to three hours. Once we got there my mother knocked on the door. The house was two story and white, it had picket fences but the nearest neighbour was a kilometre away. The land around it was huge.
    ''Oh, Zoey! I haven't seen you in a while,'' the lady who opened the door gushed.
    ''I know, Sophia, I know. Avalaya this is Sophia Roberts. I don't know if you remember her, we haven't seen each other in ten years!''
    ''Ah, Avalaya, you've grown into such a beautiful girl,'' Mrs Roberts said. I smiled, weakly.
    ''Zoey! We have got to go,'' my dad huffed. It was obvious he didn't want to be there.
    ''Oh, you can't stay for dinner?'' Mrs Roberts asked.
    ''No, I'm afraid not. Bye Sophia, it was nice seeing you again. Avalaya, please be good. We'll come and see you in a month or so. Don't forget your father and I love you very much but we just can't handle this!'' Oh, the things I would say if I wasn't mute!
    ''Bye Avalaya,'' my dad spoke. I waved as they started walking, leaving me with at a strangers house, my bags at my feat.
    ''Come in, sweetie. I've got a son, your age. When you go to school, you'll be in the same year and I'm sure you'll get along very well. He was supposed to be home 20 minutes ago to meet you… I don't know where he'd be… probably with one of those skanks- oh my sorry about my language,'' she rambled. ''Come with me,'' she instructed. I followed Mrs Roberts up to a room. She opened the door to reveal a room with one purple wall and the rest where a creamy colour. The bed spread was grey and there were heaps of different types of pillows. There was a desk against one of the cream walls and a mirror on the other side of the room. There was a walk in cupboard and another door, I wasn't sure what it was for. ''Thats the bathroom,'' she opened the door. There was another door at the other end. ''That's my sons room, I hope you do not mind sharing a bathroom with him? You can lock the door of course.'' I shook my head and hopefully she'd understand that I didn't mind. There was a loud noise down stairs and Mrs Roberts hurried down. I followed after her.

  12. timraandnicole timraandnicole
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  13. Melrose* Melrose*
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    September 20, 2012 7:52pm UTC
    yes. i do make a 'funny face' in alot of pictures.
    its better to look ugly on purpose
    than to try and look pretty. and look stupid.

  14. Bravosierra* Bravosierra*
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    September 24, 2012 5:04pm UTC
    Suicide doesn't end the pain
    It just gives it to someone else.

  15. LaceyyLee21 LaceyyLee21
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    July 27, 2012 11:18am UTC
    Remember when you were a child & getting the straw in your Capri Sun was the biggest struggle.

  16. softballchica15 softballchica15
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    July 27, 2012 10:05am UTC
    You know how when you get your period you say it's like having Niagara Falls in your pants?
    Yeah, I got mine. AT NIAGARA FALLS.

  17. fiesty1 fiesty1
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    July 25, 2012 4:30pm UTC
    A stranger stabs you in the front; a friend stabs you in the back; a boyfriend stabs you in the heart, but best friends only poke each other with straws.
    - Unknown

  18. wishicouldfindyou wishicouldfindyou
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    July 25, 2012 6:31pm UTC
    Waitress: What would you like to drink?
    Me: Do you have Dr. Pepper?
    Waitress: Yes
    Me: Okay, I'll have a coke
    tumblr

  19. _to_the_kids_who _to_the_kids_who
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    July 25, 2012 8:46pm UTC
    Here's to the kids who
    refuse to listen to music unless their headphones' cord is untangled
    and the earbuds are in the correct ear.
    -♥-
    That's me(:

  20. Erinbaybee Erinbaybee
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    July 25, 2012 9:20pm UTC
    He Broke Up With Me
    He broke up with me because I wouldn't stop
    talking to my best-guyfriend. I stood my ground
    & said that I wouldn't be controled and that I'd
    speak to my best guy friend whenever I wanted to.
    Then he dumped me.
    I did the right thing.... Right?

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