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Daddy's poem
 so sad-but it is my favorite poem   
Her hair was up in a pony  tail,  her favorite dress tied with a bow. Today was Daddy's Day at school,  and she couldn't wait to go. But her mommy tried to tell  her,  that she probably should stay home. Why the kids might not understand,  if she went to school alone. But she was not afraid;  she knew just what to say. What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today. But still her mother worried,  for her to face this day alone. And that was why once again,  she tried to keep her daughter home. But the little girl went to school,  eager to tell them all. About a dad she never sees, a dad who never calls. There were daddies along the wall in back, for everyone to meet. Children were squirming impatiently, anxious in their seats. One by one the teacher called, a student from the class, to introduce their daddy. As seconds slowly passed, at last the teacher called her name, every child turned to stare. Each of them was searching, for a man who wasn't there.  "Where's her daddy at?" she heard a boy call out. "She probably doesn't have one," another student dared to shout.   And from somewhere near the back, she heard a daddy say, "Looks like another deadbeat dad, too busy to waste his day. "The words did not offend her, as she smiled up at her Mom. And looked back at her teacher, who told her to go on. And with hands behind her back, slowly she began to speak. And out from the mouth of a child, came words incredibly unique. "My Daddy couldn't be here, because he lives so far away. But I know he wishes he could be, since this is such a special day. And though you cannot meet him,  I wanted you to know. All about my daddy, and how much he loves me so. He loved to tell me stories he taught me to ride my bike. He surprised me with pink roses, and taught me to fly a kite. We used to share fudge sundaes, and ice cream in a cone. And though you cannot see him, I'm not standing here alone. "Cause my daddy's always with me, even though we are apart. I know because he told me, he'll forever be in my heart. " With that, her little hand reached up, and lay across her chest. Feeling her own heartbeat, beneath her favorite dress. And from somewhere in the crowd of dads, her mother stood in tears.  Proudly watching her daughter, who was wise beyond her years. For she stood up for the love of a man not in her life. Doing what was best for her, doing what was right. And when she dropped her hand back down, staring straight into the crowd, she finished with a voice so soft, but its message clear and loud.  "I love my daddy very much, he's my shining star. And if he could, he'd be here,  but heaven's just too far! You see he was a fireman and died just this past year when airplanes hit the towers and taught Americans to fear. "But sometimes when I close my eyes, it's like he never went away." And then she closed her eyes,  and saw him there that day. And to her mother's amazement, she witnessed with surprise, a room full of daddies and children, all starting to close their eyes. Who knows what they saw before them, who knows what they felt inside. Perhaps for merely a second, they saw him at her side. "I know you're with me Daddy," to the silence she called out.  And what happened next made believers, of those once filled with doubt. Not one in that room could explain it, for each of their eyes had been closed. But there on the desk beside her, was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose. And a child was blessed, if only for a moment, by the love of her shining bright star. And given the gift of believing, that heaven is never too far.

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ITS JUST MY FAVORITE POEM♥
SAD THOUGH
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434 faves · 54 comments · May 11, 2009 7:09pm

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mads171 · 1 decade ago
this poem always makes me cryy :'(
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hockeygirl49 · 1 decade ago
crying right now...getting my keyboard wet.
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Duckqueen4712 · 1 decade ago
so sad, but yet inspiraional. made me think different about people without dads, but most importantly, made me cry.
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Saammx3 · 1 decade ago
this is so sad, but i absolutly love it!
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teenie · 1 decade ago
omg i am like balling my eyes out right now
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RainbowEyes25 · 1 decade ago
I hope this is based on a true story, because there isn't enough kids that would be so proud to say those words and not enough faith in a higher power to save us from this endless storm.
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jellyx521 · 1 decade ago
aww; i cried :[
this is beautiful♥
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yeahhitskatiee · 1 decade ago
ahww i cried to, i absolutly love this
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autumnrose815 · 1 decade ago
this made me cry. its beautiful
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pheobe123 · 1 decade ago
this is so sad and sweet it made me cry but i love it its adorable
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dancecheerxoxo · 1 decade ago
omg as i was reading it i couldnt help but cry its just so sweet but sad. omg :'(
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xodancer23xo · 1 decade ago
that is such an amazing poem. im crying as i write this. its beautiful and inspirational to all children who have lost their dads :'(
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smilex4u · 1 decade ago
honestlyyy, even though its so sad i think its the best quote on this site. it shows soo much. i am crying right now but its beautiful.
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xothecullenatorxo · 1 decade ago
awww! that is sooo adorable. i feel like cryingg...
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musicislife2167 · 1 decade ago
oh geez im starting to cryy !
i love the poem though.
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sportschickx30 · 1 decade ago
awwwww this is my fav poemmm!!!!!
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xxswimmerxx · 1 decade ago
thats so sad, my gradmpop died on 9'11
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Smile4fun · 1 decade ago
sadd =...[
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XxJessxisxherexX · 1 decade ago
im cryingg=[ so sad. =[
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swerv · 1 decade ago
awww


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