DRUNKEN DADDY
mine...please dont take?

You sit in your room,
Trying not to make a sound.
Daddy’s just downstairs,
And mommy’s not around.

You’ve smelt it all night,
His Bud Wiser beer.
That smell has defined your whole life,
And has made you live in fear.

You hear a creak,
And then a thump.
Then a pound on your door,
Makes you jump.

You pull your legs close,
And quick leap to the bed.
You’re supposed to be asleep,
If he catches you awake your dead.

You shut your eyes,
Just as the door flies open.
The light flashes on,
And all that’s left is hoping.

Maybe he won’t see that fact,
That though you’re slowly breathing.
The rise and fall of your chest,
Is incredibly uneven.

You can hear the shuffle,
Of his disoriented feet.
You hear him stumble,
And feel him grab your sheet.

He pulls it down,
As he crashes to the floor.
You hear him mutter something,
About how he’s going to be sore.

You keep your breath soft,
And keep your eyes shut tight.
Your body tenses up,
And your lip you bite.

Daddy stand up,
And grabs your arm.
You hope he’s not drunk enough,
To do much harm.

Your stomach sinks,
As he picks you up.
He throws you across the room,
The wall makes you stop so abrupt.

You land to the floor,
With a soft thud.
You lift your head,
And you can see all the blood.

Daddy smiles,
And takes a step towards you.
You flinch and he grins,
You don’t know what he’ll do.

The blood just keeps spilling,
As you two stare.
Your life is slipping away,
Of this you’re aware.

Then he lunges,
His hands reaching for your throat.
He squeezes his finger tightly,
And you begin to choke.

Blood trickles down your forehead,
And onto our dad.
He wipes up the blood,
And now he’s mad.

“You ruin everything,
You little punk.
You’re just like your mother,
That little c*nt.

Your just fricken like her,
You have no clue.
Both of you little b*tches,
Make me want to puke.”

He removes his hand,
Then his fist comes down hard.
It connect with your nose,
Leaving your face scarred.

More blood pours out,
And you feel your limbs go weak.
But you hold on to your life,
And clear your throat to speak.

“Daddy, oh daddy,
What did I ever do to you?
And what about Sister?
What did she do?

We don’t deserve this,
No matter what you say.
Killing her,
Didn’t make your problems go away.

It just made things worse,
And now look at you.
Your killing rate soon,
Will be up to 2.

Just put your hand down daddy,
And I know what we’ll do.
We’ll clean this mess up daddy,
Because I still love you.

Even after every hit,
You’ve ever given me.
I still love you,
Very much Daddy.

So let’s clean up this mess,
And clean up your act.
Because frankly I'm fed up.
With getting smacked.

Sister had spoken out,
But she was right.
Now let right now,
Be the last night.

No more drinking,
And no more swears.
Let’s become a family again,
One that’s loving and cares.”

Daddy laughs,
And shakes his head.
“Your sister is gone little one,
She’s beyond dead.

Your believing a dream,
Which will never come true.
It’s your time now baby,
To get what’s coming to you.”

And me and you,
Were reunited that night.
And I’ll hold you forever,
In this endless light.

Daddy can’t hurt you,
And in a few years past.
Maybe mommy,
Will join us at last.

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DRUNKEN DADDY mine...please dont take? You sit in your room,

94 faves · 62 comments · Jun 13, 2013 8:03pm

aCRYINGsmile · 1 decade ago
omg this is amazing and im literally crying my eyes out :'(
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Nooo no crying!
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chelsearay6545 · 1 decade ago
Awh, wow. This is really amazing(:
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thanks!![:
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chelsearay6545 · 1 decade ago
You are very welcome(:
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jooyjooy · 1 decade ago
This is really good. Please keep writing!
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thanks and will do[:
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Breeze · 1 decade ago
Wow, Shennon the art maker. I remember you saying that writing was your art form. Well done. I just can't-
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
aha thanks[:
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Leslie and Alli * · 1 decade ago
omfg that is so sad!!!!:'( omg!!!
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*Caraphernelia* · 1 decade ago
Why did I read this in the middle of class? Really bad idea, now I'm crying.
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ForeverStronger · 1 decade ago
Aaaand now I'm crying
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Dont cry!
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ForeverStronger · 1 decade ago
It's tragically sad, but It's also beautifully written. Keep writing, you're talented!
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thank you so much!!!! [:
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_Angiee_ · 1 decade ago
That escalated quickly -
This is so sad /.\
</3 this is heart breaking
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
sorrry o.O
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Gryffindor123 · 1 decade ago
This is just...ohmygod
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illuminations · 1 decade ago
that dad's an :(
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
yeah... ]':
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illuminations · 1 decade ago
I cried, at this.
Did they both die in the end?
It's beautiful.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
The main speaker is the little girls older sister and she was already dead, now the girl in the poem is dead. and thanks aha
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xAngelDemonx · 1 decade ago
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thanks[:
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TheeRunawaay · 1 decade ago
This is so beautifully written.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thank you[:
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blue4453 · 1 decade ago
omg thank u for writing this poem..my brother walked in on me reading this and he was like: WOW! u have emotions?!jk
haha ure a really good poet
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
thanks aha[:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
That's deep, but very good.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thanks, alot[:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
You're welcome! [: got anymore poems? I'd love to read'em ^.^
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
I've uploaded a lot on here if you wanted to take a look. I have alot that i haven't uploaded but unfortunately i haven't typed them up yet so i can't post them]:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Awwh): But i'll check out the other ones!(: I have a big notebook of all mine i'm just to lazy to put some up lol.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Exactly the same thing with me XD
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Hahaha woo! Go lazyness! lol You know i'm really startin to like you as a friend:D woo we're soooo gunna be buddies\^.^/
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Sounds good XD For the record, SOME (only a few) of the poems are from a friends point of veiw, like the Razor one you liked aha.
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
WOO!! ooh well I still like it:D some of them I can relate to, but they are amazingggg
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Thank you[:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Welcome[: hey do you have a Skype? I think it'd be really cool to talk to you even though I just met you lol.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
i do not]: its my moms laptop i use and im not allowed to download anything she doesn't know how to use XD which is pretty much everything XD
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
bahaha that's awesome xD But darn wish you did, oh well. I'm Steph by the way :D \^.^/
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Hello there Steph, I'm Shennon aha
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Hi there Shennon!! :D Nice to meet you^.^
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Likewise :P
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Just a warning i'm very random lol
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
I am too it's all good, although i might be getting kicked off soon
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Yay random person!! and awwh okay):
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
in fact im getting kicked off not, i'll reply next time im on[:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Okay, [: Loved talking to you!!
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Hello
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Hey!:D
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Aha isn't there an easier way we can chat? XD
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
Yeah on chat or on our profiles lol. But chat would be easier.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Well when we both decide to be on at the same time again we shall chat XD
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
hahah okay! Hopefully soon:D
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
hopefully[:
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musicmarchinglife · 1 decade ago
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
go on chat XD
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Gemini1999 · 1 decade ago
I'm crying. That is. I can't even.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
sorry/: didn't mean to make you cry!
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Gemini1999 · 1 decade ago
Its okay! Its just I don't even. To think there are people like this out there.
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PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
Yeah.../:
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