I AM MUTE
Chapter: 12

"You what?!" i shouted, before I clamped my hands over my mouth.
Dave looked at me and said shocked, 'Did you just.... OH forget it, yes i lost it.!"
"Dave!"
"Sorry!"
"uh guys?" Jackson said.
"What?" I said angry.
Jackson pionted at me. "You gave me the ring for safe keeping."
"I did?"
"Yes."
I smaked my forhead.
"Whoops, Im so stupid."
Sam stepped in front of me.
"Whats all this about a ring?" she asked.
Dave took the ring from Jackson and knelt in front of Sam, who covered her mouth with her hand. Dave looked up at her shyly.
"This didnt really go as palnned, but will you marry me? I Promise-" he didnt get anu farther before Sam threw herself at Dave and kissed him.
"Yes! Of course I'll marry you Dave. I love you."
Dave pulled her close. "I love you too Sam."
JAckson looked at me and i at him. Then we cheered as loud as we could. Dave and Sam turned to looked at us.
"Yay! Im finally getting a brother!" I said. "Thank God you said yes or else you would have been in trouble for all the work we did."
Dave, finally over the shock of getting engaged, said, "You talked."
I nodded shyly, and said, "Yeah, I did."
I hugged them both.
"Congrats you guys. Im so happy for you."
Sam wipped her eyes. "Thanks for this Lyra. Thank you so much."
I hugged her again.
"Your so welcome." i whisperd in her ear.

So i split this up into two parts, didnt have to i just wanted to :p. I want to give a big shout out to hasoxtina and onceuponastory, fo helping me with ideas, these girls are awsome!. Thanks to everyone reading, it means a lot. I love you all (warnin, i cant spell)

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4 faves · 11 comments · May 21, 2013 11:27pm

Christina* · 1 decade ago
Wait is it over??? no.....if it is...you should write a new one
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
no of course its not over I still have to write the wedding and whats gonna happen to lyra and Jackson trust me there is still a lot ot go

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Christina* · 1 decade ago
oh its just that with the conclusion i thought it was over.
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
no I didn't even relize it sounded like that until u pointed it out, other wise I would have made it end differently

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Christina* · 1 decade ago
see i figured you didn't realize that, for further references, remember that not all the problems are gone till the end of the story. So don't make it seem that way...think of it like a volcano eruption..after the volcano explodes it takes awhile fore everything to be resolved. So if you have plenty left and you're not even close to the breaking point then don't make it seem like all the problems are solved. Other than that its pretty good :)
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
there are lots of things ive menchined in the story that haven't been resolved, like Lyra and Jackson, exactly why lyra went mute, what happened to lyras dad, and other things
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Christina* · 1 decade ago
awesome! just remember to do a cliffhanger type things towards the end so people are like "omg what happens next!
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
that's a good idea but if you love cliff hangers you should the ending of my other story major cliff hanger

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Christina* · 1 decade ago
that sounds great! is it here?
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tigersforever · 1 decade ago
no I thought about posting it after I finished this story, but I might post it before I really don't know, ive been debating this

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Christina* · 1 decade ago
oh....i think you should finish the story first. Because i had the same issue, i gotta another idea in my head...but i want to finish Mickey's story first.
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