Amenah · 1 decade ago
Best of luck! xoxo
I'm awful at writing novels. Or rather, I have who-knows-how-many 'starts of novels' lying around. Distraction sucks.
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cujo* · 1 decade ago
It sounds interesting. Do you ever plan on posting it on the internet, someday? 'Cause I really like the way you write.

I know you didn't ask for criticism but I just wanted to point out that you wrote, 'We never-' at the beginning and wrote 'my only-' for the second part, it sounds incorrect and/or incomplete? Maybe I'm wrong and that your following sentences would fulfill that bit of confusion.
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cvnt* · 1 decade ago
I will probably post it on the Internet. But I got advice from a professor at ASU (a state college where I live) to start publishing, so I'm probably gonna see if I can get it published as a Kindle book for $1.99. Thanks for the compliment, by the way.

As for the criticism, it may help if I explained the plot: it's actually a personal narrative of my family and our road trip to Florida. The whole trip sucked for too many reasons (but it's freaking hilarious now). So that's what the sentence is stating and will be explained furher. But I'm not sure if it's incorrect. I'll have to look into that, so thank you!
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