His life is like a tunnel,

Long and dark,

It almost seems never ending.

He contemplates crashing,

Smashing his car into the wall,

Creating his own death,

But he worries of those behind him.

He worries that the tunnel could collapse,

So he holds it up himself,

He worries that it is breaking,

So he takes time to fix every crack.

He holds it up,

As you pass through,

Because he would do anything to have you smiling,

And anything to cause himself pain.

His life is like a tunnel,

Only he's only holding it up for you,

He wants to drop it,

But who can he trust to hold it up,

If he gets tired and has to let go?

His life is like a tunnel,

And he is the beam,

He won't let it hurt you,

He'll let you cause him pain.

His life is like a tunnel,

Long, dark and cold.

His life is like a tunnel,

And his grip is growing weak.

My poem

Fave/comment for more
My original poetry
copyright 2013 justanotherwittyguy18
Ask if you use it
Leave me some comments!

Next Quote >

His life is like a tunnel, Long and dark, It almost seems never

58 faves · 21 comments · Apr 9, 2013 9:12pm

*compassionate soul* · 1 decade ago
This, this is great :) <3 and very inspirational hon :)
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thank you <3333
0 reply

*compassionate soul* · 1 decade ago
You're welcome :3 <333
0 reply

sillymonkey_123 · 1 decade ago
This blew my mind, I had to read it twice just to soak it all in. So inspirational, no joke! (:
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thank you <3
0 reply

barakat* · 1 decade ago
This is amazing omfg
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
thank you <333
0 reply

barakat* · 1 decade ago
No seriously - I'm saving this and cherishing it forever, because this is better than most other poetry, or even writing in general, that I've ever read. Like whoa, why are you not famous?
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Omg you made me blush D: One day hopefully i will be famous :3
0 reply

barakat* · 1 decade ago
Yeah, I think you'll definitely make it. I mean, JK Rowling was turned down by like over 20 publishers or something before anyone signed Harry Potter? So like, if this doesn't become a famous poem, we will have a problem.
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Holy lol i love harry potter D: LOL well hope for me!
0 reply

SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
Sooo so so so so so so so so so happy to see you writing again :) you're writing, in my eyes is flawless and has such raw emotion.... It's beautiful. I wish I had more to say, but I'm kinda speechless❤
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Kimmmmmm you always make me so happy with your comments <3
I love youuuuuu <3
And thank you
0 reply

SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
Love youu too <3 You being happy makes me happy (and que my cheesy powers)
0 reply

sheyannadawn72* · 1 decade ago
asdfghjkl;'
PLEASE GIVE ME THE TALENT TO WRITE LIKE YOU,
ugh.

0 reply

Yo_Im_Ronan_ · 1 decade ago
Ugh
This poem is perfect your writing is perfect
YOU'RE perfect <33
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
LMAO thank you baybay <3
I might publish this one as well :3
I'm not perfect D: thats you!
0 reply

Yo_Im_Ronan_ · 1 decade ago
You should :oo
I would read it everyday and make everybody I know read it >:D
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
AHHHH that's too many XDDD
I'm shyyy D:
0 reply

Yo_Im_Ronan_ · 1 decade ago
I don't know that many people though XD
0 reply

JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
hmmmmm... 10 is too many :o
0 reply

Witty Profiles

His life is like a tunnel, Long and dark, It almost seems never

by

JustAnotherWittyGuy18

tags

death · dark · depression · suicide · poetry · poems · justanotherwittyguy18 · metaphoric