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Stepping Out
Chapter 24
Final Chapter
 
            His lips pressed against mine. I didn't, couldn't, react at first. Then I pulled back fast and closed my eyes. That did not just happen.
            "What the heck are you thinking? I have a boyfriend." He stared at me for a second and then replied.
            "I'm sorry...I just...I don't...I'm sorry." He offered.
            "That's all you can say is 'I'm sorry'. You can't just go around kissing people that have boyfriends." He looked at me with pain in his eyes. I started to stand to leave.
            "Wait, Aven. Just let me have five minutes. I need you to hear this." He looked at me, pleading with his eyes. I was fuming about what he just did. Walking out seemed like what I should do. But I sat down.
             "Your hands stay on the table, butt stays in the seat. If I even see you move an inch I'm gone." He nodded at me saying he understood and that he wouldn't.
             "Look,Aven, I just wanted to tell you that what I did was wrong. You didn't deserve how I treated you at all. I was wrong to do what I did. I just hope you don't hate me. I was being a huge jerk when I blew you off. Being popular got to me and my buddies were...wait. I'm not gonna make any excuses. Basically, I just wanted to make sure that you knew I was sorry, for everything. I guess I'll see you around sometime." He stood up to leave. 
              "Thank you." I stood to look him in the eye as he left. He was at the door when he spoke again. It probably took a lot to apologize.
              "And Aven," I looked up from the tile floor. "Thank you. You've made me see that being popular isn't all that important." Then he turned and faced the door. His brother was standing in front of him. They had a short conversation and embraced for almost a minute. Then Seth left. His brother walked towards me. When he got to me, Greyson enveloped me in a hug and kissed my forehead.
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last chapter guys!
what do you guys think?
i want honest opinions...did you like the story overall, dislike it?
please be honest....things you did and didn't like
it will help me make my next story better
yes there will be another story
not a sequel though
i shall post the prolouge maybe later tonight
thanks so much for reading!
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Stepping Out Chapter 24 Final Chapter His lips pressed against

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mariahg99 · 1 decade ago
Was Greyson Seth's brother? Im a bit confused... Because you said his brother walked towards her and then greyson gave her a hug. Was Greyson seth's brother? Or was he just there?
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aislinn325 · 1 decade ago
yes Greyson was Seth's brother
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mariahg99 · 1 decade ago
Oh my goodness! What a plot twist! That seriously surprised me alot
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aislinn325 · 1 decade ago
i may write an epilogue if i can find the time
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DⒶYϟ ◊F DIϟⒶϟTE®* · 1 decade ago
Personally, I liked it. And you said "i shall post the prolouge maybe later tonight". Do you mean the epilogue? The end chapter?
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aislinn325 · 1 decade ago
no this was the final chapter. I have a new story now
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DⒶYϟ ◊F DIϟⒶϟTE®* · 1 decade ago
Ahh, got it.
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aislinn325 · 1 decade ago
i may write an epilogue if i can find the time
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