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Blood ridden tears running down my wrists.
Lie after lie i can't resist.
A word left unspoken,
A whisper of care,
Alone just like always,
Because you can't be there.
A scream left unheard,
A plea for your help,
A blade forced in deeper,
A gun to my head.
If your there tell me now,
before it is too late.
Help me i plea,
Save me i cry,
And all you do is say goodbye.
 

My poem.
It's how i feel right this moment.
I cut, whoops.
I took pills, whoops.
Bye. Yay.
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Blood ridden tears running down my wrists. Lie after lie i can't

76 faves · 22 comments · Feb 4, 2013 6:24pm

JustAnotherWittyGuy18

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suicide · poems · deppression

24601* · 1 decade ago
:'( but you're supposed to NOT die, that's why you live.
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hockeyprincess11 · 1 decade ago
Lol this was kinda a good/inspirational quote until the whole. "I cut, whoops. I took pills, whoops." part. cutting isn't a joke. I hope you learn that.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Thats okay i dont try to be good/inspirational, im real, i cut and i took pills, i think i know it isnt a joke XD ask the gashes on my body. They know why they are there.
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Bitaparadise · 1 decade ago
I really hope you're okay. Just try to remember the positives in life, you may think there are none but you're not fooling anyone. You are a beautiful human being and many people out there would do anything for you. I have a friend who comitted suicide, we weren't that close but we had a few classes together after she comitted suicide 3 other people at my school did also, you're not only ending your life you're ending the lifes of many many others! If you ever just need a friend or someone to talk to kik me - Katelyn_Pollard
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
I know, but maybe i'm holding those people in this life we call "Hell" so maybe that would help them. Its okay less than 48 hours now... don worry im okay.
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SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
Dalton... Talk to me for real. I know life isn't looking up right now, but think of Alex okay, and your son, and maybe even me? I think I can say we all care about you, a lot ❤ And I know telling someone to "stay strong" doesn't usually help...so I won't say that. But at least just try and smile for me okay?
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Alex is partially brain dead >.< as in he can't talk well or move well, he cant chew. I'm scared that i will lose him.
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SparksFly34 · 1 decade ago
We just have to keep him in our hearts and pray to whatever beings we can think of ❤
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Yeah.. thank you
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RadioCatastrophe · 1 decade ago
is there a title?
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Hmmmm... The lost want to be found
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Bestfriendforever · 1 decade ago
I know we haven't talked before...... BUT,,,
Stay Strong :)
- Selena.....
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RadioCatastrophe · 1 decade ago
once again i find myself asking if i can save that in my notebook...may i?
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
yes you can :)
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LoveYourOwnWay · 1 decade ago
Hang in there. Everything gets bettet
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Miluiel* · 1 decade ago
Please live.
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bunnylover43 · 1 decade ago
Hang in there
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SpoonfulOfSugar · 1 decade ago
late and head are the two non rhyming in pattern words. just saying. and try to look on the good side of life. i know it's really really hard when you are in that spot, but try.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
it wasnt rhyming it wasnt even going to be a poem lol i was trying to say i cut again, but i decided not to just say it for id be called an attention wh0re again. nah im done. whatever happens happens.
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SpoonfulOfSugar · 1 decade ago
the first 5 lines flow beautifully... sorry for being an english nerd :) i just thought you should know. i could give you the full explication, but i decided to refrain for your sake ;) and i like it. very expressive.
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JustAnotherWittyGuy18 · 1 decade ago
Its okay, please critique me. I like it XD i didnt add that on this one because as i said i wasnt planning on writting a poem XD So yeah i always love feedback
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darkeyeangel · 1 decade ago
Hang in there
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