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Hey guys! If i was to write a story would anyone read it? Below are some options. Please comment letting me know which one you prefer. Thanks! :) xx
 
California Nightmare
I could hear the garage door opening.  "Daddy's home!" shouted my sister from the bottom of the staircase. "i'm coming" i replied, walking down the stairs. Suprisingly my dad had the massivest grin that i had ever seen, since my mother's death. "April, Jenny guess what!" he said excitedly. "what?!" we both replied in unision.
After finding out that we were moving to California, i was disappointed but still a little excited. Dad had said the job had a better pay, and plus this house had too many memories of mum. I couldn't wait to make new friends, and meet new guys. Little did i know, what was coming my way was karma at it's worst..
 
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The New Me
I'm going to a new school after the coming summer break. Why? Because of the endless bullying i've been through for as long as i can remember. My whole school life so far has been a misery; insults, teasing, death threats; you name it. I don't think there's actually ever been a day that i came home from school smiling, but after the first two years you eventually get used to it. You learn to ignore the nasty comments and the pushing and shoving. My name is addison, and this is my story. 

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Hey guys! If i was to write a story would anyone read it? Below

0 faves · 4 comments · Dec 26, 2012 3:07am

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isabeltheosm · 1 decade ago
I like the first one :)
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dahtssome101 · 1 decade ago
thanks :) i'll most likely write that one next, because i've already started writing The New Me. :)
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broken3 · 1 decade ago
they're both great, but the new me :)
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dahtssome101 · 1 decade ago
thanks :) i'll start writing it today, and hopefully post a chapter by tomorrow
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