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If I told you I loved you
Chapter Three

I lean my head against the window, and close my eyes. When I open them, I hear the faint buzz of the radio, and the truck stop. "We're here, sleepy head." Carter laughs, and hops out of his truck. I look around to see a cabin in front of a lake. He grabs a key from his chain, and unlocks the door. Without any words, we both sit down on the couch, and watch the fireplace crackle before Carter decides to put in a movie. 
He sits back down, and I lean my head on his shoulder, he slides his arm around me, and we both get comfortable. We've decided to put in The Roommate - his favorite movie. It jumps me a few times, but gives me an excuse to hide myself in his arms. 
After the end credits roll through, Carter gives me a look. "Let's go outside," I smile at him, he nods his head, and takes me down to a wooden dock that floats in the water with the tides. 
I let my tanned legs hang off the dock, after I roll up the bottom of my pants. Carter sits beside me and looks at me. "So, what you said back at the field, was that true?" 
"I didn't even know what I was saying back there," I panic. "It was all, just spur of the moment stuff, I swear I didn't mean it." 
"Even the part where you said you liked me for as long as you can remember?" His face blushes with disappointment, and he looks away for a second. 
"I meant that part, of course." I playfully punch his shoulder to get him to laugh. Instead, he playfully pretends to fall. After pretending to fall, a look of shock comes on his face, and he starts to fall in. Quickly, he grabs my hand. We both fall into the still-warm water.
I rush up for air, and pull myself onto the deck. Carter climbs up behind me, with a smirk on his face. He strips down to his pants, and jumps back in. I raise an eyebrow, and hesitate to un-button my flannel, revealing my plain tank-top already soaked. I set down my shirt, and jump into the water. When I  push myself up from the water, I feel the make-up running down my face, and I try to scrub it off. 
"Stop that," Carter pulls my hands away from my face. "You still look gorgeous." 


Author's Note: Well, the last chapter wasn't so popular. Not good. I am asking for at least 16 faves, because it's my 16th birthday today, it'd be a really good present! Love you guys who are actually reading this. 

 
 
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