Witty Profiles
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Torn in Between
Chapter 5:
Trevor's POV:
"She just doesn't understand", I mumbled to myself, as I stuck four quarters in the coke machine. The machine made a loud rumbling noise and out came my coke. I took a sip and headed to the beach. I sat in the sand and watched as the waves lapped against the sandy surface. "If only I could tell her..", I said. "God, Why can't I tell her? She's in her room right now probably worried I'm some kind of killer...", I mumbled.
"You have a once in a lifetime chance.. Why not tell her? Well, she'll think I'm an idiot, trying to tick her off, or just making fun of her..", I said, answering my own question.
"I just wish there were some way for me to prove it to her..", I said. "I know how", said a voice behind me. I turned around and there stood Kassidy. "Tell me. Now. Im right here. Be a man Mr. Parker", she said smiling. She sat down beside me and laid her head on my shoulder.
Dont mess this up. "Look, I know exactly what you're gonna do when I tell you this. You have to promise me something before I let it all out", I said. "Anything", she said, putting her hand in mine. "You have to promise that if you get mad, that it won't be for long", I said. "Promise", she replied.
"I will go as far as I have to, to make you fall in love with me again", I said. "What are you talking about?", she asked, looking at me puzzled. "Kassidy.. I am David", I said. I fealt like a huge weight had been lifted off my chest for a moment, but it came right back to me when she said nothing for a little while.
Then, she got up, and began to cry. Her face turned red, and she exploded into so many curse words. "You really think you're David huh? Do you think this crap is funny Trevor? I come to hang out with you and tell me this crap? All because you and Blake both want me, huh?", she said. I sighed.
"Kass, please let me explain", I said. "Do not ever call me Kass.. That was mine and David's thing, and you have no right to call me by that", she said. "Kass.." I began, but it was too late. She had already ran. I needed to prove it to her, and fast.
17 faves · 14 comments · Nov 21, 2012 8:56pm
MrsKoolaid
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1 decade ago
haha:)
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Fathima
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1 decade ago
Hi . can i get notified for chapter 6
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MrsKoolaid
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1 decade ago
This was actually chapter 6. I accidentally wrote 5._. haha. So I'll tell you when 7 is up:)
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marebearj
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1 decade ago
I KNEW IT !! I SO KINEW IT!!! I TOLLLLLD YOU
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cheezbunni540
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1 decade ago
I KNEW IT!!
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Erica_213
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1 decade ago
i knew it! i thought that trevor had a different idenity and its kinda true! trevor is david!
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HARRYPOTTERforlifex95
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1 decade ago
OMG. So I love this story!!!!!! and on chapter 4 (I think), you left a comment for a girl to guess what the secret was and I replied to your comment that Trevor had something to do with David BUT STUPID WITTY TOLD ME MY COMMENT COULDN'T BE POSTED AND I HAD TO SLOW DOWN but I had to leave. So yeah. Hahahah I feel special. Okay keep writing love, it's amazing! :)
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MrsKoolaid
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1 decade ago
thanks gal! :) Everyone who is supporting me is making me so happy. Y'all do not understand how happy I am :)
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lisalacrosse97
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1 decade ago
woah that was...wut lolol
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MrsKoolaid
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1 decade ago
did you read the whole story?
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lisalacrosse97
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1 decade ago
yep haha it's good
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taylorstories
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1 decade ago
I am so obsessed with this story. Please keep writing! :)
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MrsKoolaid
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1 decade ago
:) thanks! and I will:)
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Gimmeafive · 1 decade ago
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yES! i WAS RIGHT!!!