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The Lonely One
[Chorus]
You're borken, waiting for someone to help you be fixed
You're lonely, waiting for someone to hold you through this
You sit up late at night
When everyone's asleep, you just wonder why

There will always be one better
So why not like her
Always second choice
Always insecure

There are bags under your eyes
From a late night full of cries
There are fears under your laugh
From all the pain in the past

[Chorus]

The last one picked
The first left behind
You think you'll never be more
You just keep saying you're fine

You don't bother others
With this lonely story of yours
They don't want to hear about
Your inner wars

[Chorus]

Why are you the one they don't accept
You're so abandoned, left with only neglect
The last to be invited, if you ever even are
You've given up, you've wished on a few too many stars

When everything is all said and done
You're still left behind, you're still the lonely one

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