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Forgive Me. I NTRO


"Brielle," My mom says from behind me, in the kitchen. "Light that candle on the table for me, will you?" I grabbed a match, and lit the two candles. Without any notice, my dog, runs underneath my legs, causing me to drop the match. It takes a second for the table cloth to catch fire, but when it starts, it lights up. I scream, and my dog runs out the door. My mom runs over to me, grabs me, and pushes me outside. She goes back into the now roaring flames to rescue my new baby sister. I scream, but nothing comes out. Constant clouds of grey smoke pour from the windows. I fall to the ground, waiting for someone to come get me, but no one does.  I call for help, but no one can hear me. "Mom, please forgive me," I say to myself, it's all my fault.  





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Forgive Me. I NTRO "Brielle," My mom says from behind

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