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Well...I play soccer, do judo, love my family, love my friends, and love to write. I am writing a story right now called Inherited. Please read it.
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1. wittywriter2
   posted a quote
   November 4, 2012 5:55pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 10 Part 3
   “Well…No, not yet. I left a note. My sister should be getting up soon. She’ll call the police. Here, let me check your cut.”
   I slowly walked over to him and checked the gash in the back of his head. It was doing fine. I sat down in front of him and asked him how he felt. He said fine but didn’t say much else.
   I looked into his dark green eyes and thought I saw something new in them. Not hope, not depression, but…but happiness. His eyes looked happy.
   As I gazed into his eyes, I saw them flicker to my lips, then back to my eyes.
   He leaned forward and closed his eyes. As his lips met mine, I started to pull away but soon kissed him back. In that moment, the world seemed to freeze. The world felt right. I felt like I belonged.
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   If you could, get some pleople to read my story!!!! It would mean so much to me!!!! I loooove you all!!!!!!!!
   Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I've just been really busy. I hope you guys still will read though!!!!!
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2. wittywriter2
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   November 4, 2012 5:52pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 10 Part 2
   Josh stirred and let out a strangled moan. He rolled onto his back and groaned again as his head hit the rock. He lifted his head and sat straight up as he saw me sitting there with him.
   “Why are you here? And why is my head throbbing? And why are we on a rock? And-“
   “Hey,” I cut him off. “Calm down. I’ll answer your questions, just take it easy.”
   “I am here because I was going to jump, just like you. I-“
   “I mean why are you on this rock with me.”
   “Oh….well, you and I fell. I let go of your hand and swam to this rock. I couldn’t see you so I swam to find you. When I did, I swam with you back to the rock and laid you down.
   “Your head hurts because there is a huge cut in the back of it. You must have cut it on a rock, which made you pass out. I cleaned it out the best I could. I can’t see any bone our anything so that’s good. The bleeding has stopped for the most part.
   “I’ve answered the rock part already. Anymore questions?”
   “Yeah. Does anyone know where out here?” ______________________________________________________________________
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3. wittywriter2
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   November 4, 2012 5:47pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 10
   I quickly ripped the end of his shirt just big enough to fit the wound. I dabbed gently at the cut and washed the blood from the fabric. I did this several times till the wound had stopped bleeding for the most part.
   I looked into the wound to see just how far it had cut. Luckily, I could see no bone or anything like that. Small fragments of rock were stuck in the cut. I gently pulled them out.
   I placed my hand on his neck to check his pulse. Still beating, but very slow. I had left my phone at my house, and Josh didn’t seem to have one on him.
   That left me to care for Him until someone noticed that we were gone or saw us down here. Right now, all I could hope for was for Josh to be ok.
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   A couple hours later, the sun began to peak over the edge of the bridge. Lizzy should be up in about 2 more hours for school. Dad will still be asleep and Henry won’t be getting up because he is sick. I had to put all my hope that Lizzy would find that note and call 911.
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   Sorry...Stupid Witty made me make it 2 parts!!!
   Anyways...
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   I hope you guys liked this chapter!!!!!
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4. wittywriter2
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   September 14, 2012 8:59pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 9
   I swam to the surface for more air. Then I dove back under to save Josh.
   As I got level with him, I saw that his leg was caught between two rocks.
   I tried pulling it out but I couldn’t for a while. I finally got his leg out but his jeans were caught on the rock.
   It was no use trying to pull the rock off, it is too heavy. I would have to rip his jeans. I took a sharp piece of coral and cut the jeans till they ripped.
   I grabbed Josh and swam as fast as I could to the surface.
   I swam against the current to the rock and laid him down. He was unconscious.
   I lifted his head but put it back down almost imediently. Something sticky hand my hands.
   I looked at my hands and noticed the stick stuff was red.
   Ohno, I thought. I flipped him over to see a big gash about two fingers wide and from the mid-part of his head about 4 inches long. It was gushing red blood.
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   New fromat!!!!! Hope you like!!!!!! Fave and comment to be notifyed. Shout out to beautifuldisatstergirl (One of my best friends from school who, btw, intruduced me to this site) is writing a story. Please check it out!!!!! Plus, if you could, get some pleople to read my story!!!! It would mean so much to me!!!! I loooove you all!!!!!!!!
   ps- really short chapter. Sorry.......Hopfully the next ones will be bigger.
   pps- I am starting to write my next story but I need you to let me if you like the plot:
   Its called eighteen. Its about a girl whos life is supposed to be really good but goes really bad. It will be really intested.
   What do you think???????? Oh, just bcause I'm writing this story does not mean Inherited is almost over.....I fact its not really that close. Just writing it in advance.
   Haha....the note is almost longer than the story!!!!!
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5. wittywriter2
   posted a quote
   September 3, 2012 12:44pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 8
   I tightened my grip on Josh’s hand. I tried to scream but nothing came out.
   I knew that we were gonna die. I hadn’t even had my first kiss yet. I don’t want to die I thought.
   I looked over at Josh. His eyes were closed, his mouth in a pursed look.
   He’s getting ready to die I thought.
   Just then, I saw a tall rock pass by out of the corner of my eye.
   Huh? I thought confused. I turned my head and saw the rocks about 3 feet away.
   Before I had time to take a breath, the cold water engulfed me and Josh. I was forced to let go of his hand.
   I swam to the surface and gulped for air. I looked around for Josh but couldn’t see him.
   I swam to a nearby rock and pulled myself out of the current. I stood on the flattest part of the rock and looked around.
   I saw bubbles form a couple feet away from me. Josh! I thought jumping back into the frigid water wanting to save the boy who tried to save me.
   I burst to the surface and swam with the current towards the bubbles. I took a big breath and went under. I opened my eyes and looked down towards the bottom. That’s when I saw Josh.
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   New fromat!!!!! Hope you like!!!!!! Fave and comment to be notifyed. Shout out to beautifuldisatstergirl (One of my best friends from school who, btw, intruduced me to this site) is writing a story. Please check it out!!!!! Plus, if you could, get some pleople to read my story!!!! It would mean so much to me!!!! I loooove you all!!!!!!!!
   ps- sorry short chapter. The next few might be shorter than my others sorry!!!!!
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6. wittywriter2
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   August 31, 2012 11:24pm UTC
   Chapter 7
   “Wait, can we hold hands so we know that we both jump?” asked Josh extending his hand.
   “Sure” I responded grabbing his hand.
   “Ready?” I asked.
   “Yes” he responded, tightening his grip on my hand.
   “One……”
   “Two……”
   “THREE!!!” I yelled jumping off the edge of the bridge, still holding onto Josh’s hand.
   I closed my eyes waiting for the rocks to stab into my back sucking the life right out of me.
   I waited and waited but it never happened. I opened my eyes to see Josh standing on the ledge. He was holding me with one hand and the bar with the other. I dangled there 20 feet above the water holding onto his hand.
   “What are you doing!?!?!? Let go!!!!!!!!”
   “No! I decided that I don’t want to die. I knew if you went through with killing yourself, you would regret it too. That’s why I held hands with you.”
   I dangled there thinking this through.
   “This is what I want to do!! I want to follow through!!! Let me!!! Why does it matter to you anyways if I live or not?”
   “Cause I don’t want to watch someone die!!!! And I don’t want people to just kill themselves!” He answered sternly trying to hold my 120 pounds up.
   “If you won’t let go, then I will!!!” I let go of Josh’s wrist and tried to slip my hand out of his Josh tightened his grip on my hand and tightened his grip on the bar.
   His hand on the bar was getting sweaty and kept slipping.
   “Let go of me and you might live.”
   “No.” He answered, letting go of the bar for a second but grabbing it right after. He did this a couple more times.
   Josh was holding tight to both my hand and the bar.
   Suddenly, his hand slipped and before I knew it, we were falling to our death.
   
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7. wittywriter2
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   August 24, 2012 12:20am UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 6, part 2
   I decided to kill myself in three days time. There is a bridge just south of my house. Mabey 1/2 a mile away. It is always full of rushing water with a really strong current. Not only is the current there but there is also really sharp jagged rocks on the bottom. Its probabbly 20 feet in the air. There was no way I could survive. I was gonna jump.
   The next few days flew by. In those last few days of my life, I noticed that the new kid,Josh, was getting picked on alot. I was the only person being nice to him. That was mostly because all I said was "hi".
   My death day soon arrived. I was up late that night. My dad came home about 11 and went to bed. Henry and Lizzy were already asleep.
   I wrote a small goodbye note to my family telling them that I love them and why I was doing what I was.
   I sliped on my coat and walked out into the cold night air. As I walked I thought why I was doing this. I watched as my breath swriled in white blobs in the street lights.
   Eventally, I neard the bridge. As I got closer, I saw someone standing on the edge of the bridge.
   Soon, I noticed it was Josh.
   "What are you doing here" I asked in a quite voice.
   I must have started him becuse he jumped a little cluching the bar on the bridge for support.
   "Whats it look like? I'm about to jump. I could ask the same for you" he amswered in a small, almost scared, voice.
   "I'm here to do the same thing as you, jump" I answered while I climbed under the bar that barcaded people from the ledge.
   "Why" he asked in louder voice. I could tell that he was somewhat consered.
   "Because I lost my mother, my dads never around, and I have no one to talk to."
   "I'm here because no one cares about me. I'm teased at school and I'm raised in a orphange" he said quietly this time.
   "Well then, lets jump together. On three."
   He gave me a small nod.
   "One...."
   "Two...." We both got in a pounching postion and got ready to jump.
   
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8. wittywriter2
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   August 22, 2012 10:48pm UTC
   Inherited
   Chapter 6, Part 1
   (Present Day)
   Thats how I got here. The doctors gave me some medicine that I take everyday. Thats cured me for the most part.
   The past two weeks have been hard on the whole family. Its been hardest on me. My dad goes out all day (he quit his job) and comes home late at night, drunk, smelling of alcohal and some chicks purfume.
   That leaves me to take care of Lizzy and Henry. My friends don't help. I pushed them away after my moms death. They obviously don't want back in my life.
   My grades have droped since my mom died. I used to be a straight-A student. Now I'm a straight-C student.
   I fell like the new kid, always alone. My main objective each day is to get to class and get home.
   To earn extra money, me AND Henry had to get jobs and thats barley enough to live off of.
   We got a new kid in class. I noticed in science because we have it together. His names Josh. He's cute in a dorky sort of way. He wares a T-Shirt and jeans each day. He has those big glasses that make your eyes look big. Short,brown hair, dark, reen eyes that suggest he has a deep, dark secret. He's the kind of boy I would like if I had time for a relationship.
   I would have time, even with the problems at home, but I know how to end my pain, and thats what I'm ganna do. End my pain...end it all.
   I'm ganna kill myself.
   
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9. wittywriter2
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   August 22, 2012 5:35pm UTC
   Inherited
   Announcement
   Chapter 6 is going to be in 2 parts. Part one will be up later tonight.
   Tell your friends to check out my story please!!!!
   
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10. wittywriter2
    posted a quote
    August 21, 2012 3:16pm UTC
    Inheritence
    Chapter 5
    The doctors rush in. One of the nurses grabs me by the sholders and rushes me out of the room. I sit in the chair stund at what I just witnessed.
    20 minutes later, Dr. Horton comes out.
    "Shes safe".
    We all sigh in relief. The privite vists continue. Lizzy goes in, then Hennry, then dad.
    When I get to go in again, i see my moms hooked up to life support. We Talk with her for 2 to 3 more hours. By now its about 7 at night.
    "Dr," my dad asks,"Can we stay the night?"
    The doctor replies yes. I take my sister ans brother to the cafateria and we eat dinner. When we get back to the room, my dad leaves to eat and we talk to my mom.
    My dad got back around 8. At 9 the doctor gives us some pillows and blankets. We all say goodnight. The second my head hits the pillow, I'm out.
    * * *
    Around 2 in the morning, I'm awoken by the doctors. I was told to get out of the room as fast as possiblue. Still dazed, I glance around the room while I get ready to leave.
    I happen to catch a glance of the black-screened haert moniter and notice the flat green line at the bottom of the screen.
    "Oh-no," I groan as I slide out of the room to the waiting area.
    30 minutes later Dr. Horton comes out.
    "We lost her."
    That was the last I heard before I colapsed again.
    
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11. wittywriter2
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    August 20, 2012 11:32pm UTC
    Inherited
    Chapter 4
    Over the next few weeks, I recovered. While I recovered, my mom's condition got worse.
    About one week from the day that changed my life forever, I was able to go home. My mom, however, was having trouble breathing. We visted her after school everyday.
    One day I was taken out of school early by my dad. When I asked him why, he said nothing but drove to Henry and Lizzy's schools and picked them up. Insted of heading towards home, we went the oposet direction.
    Finally, my dad said somthing.
    "Its your mom. Shes....Dying".
    The car was quite all the way to the hospital. When we got there, we asked to see her. They said that the doctors were not letting anyone see her yet.
    We sat down and waited in agonny for an hour. Fanilly, Dr. Horton came out.
    "Go right in".
    We walked in and she was ling on her bed, hooked up to an oxygen mechine. She was really pale and skinny.
    "Mom, how you feelin'", I asked.
    "I'm hangin' in" she said tring to smile.
    She looked so weak, i almost cried but I knew i had to be strong for her. After about an hour, she asked to see each of us seperetly. She wanted to see me first.
    "Honey, I know i'm not going to make it much longer. I want you to know that I love you and your dad and sister and brother very much. When i go, take care of them. You will have to step up and make sure that everyone is fine.".
    "Mom, Mom don't talk like that!!!! You will be fine!!!" I said this while restraining tears.
    "Honey, its ok to cry. I love you so much!!!!!"
    Then her moniter started making less beeping nosies. Mom started coughing and not being able to breath.
    "Doctor! Doctor! Come quick!!!!!"
    
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12. wittywriter2
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    June 2, 2012 6:24pm UTC
    Inherited
    Chapter 3
    *Beep*, *beep*. I woke up in the hospital surrounded by doctors.
    I was immediately bombarded with questions.
    "How do you feel", "Does your head hurt", "What happened". ect. ect. ect.
    I just rolled over not answering anything. I found Lizzy (Elizabeth), Henry, and my dad along with Mrs.Herbert there.
    "Honey, are you ok", my dad asked.
    "I think so. All I remember is getting out of the car. I got dizzy about half-way to the doors. Then, all went black".
    "Out, out, out", a firm but gentle male voice called out.
    I lay there watching as everyone, including all the doctors left.
    "How do you feel", said the same firm voice.
    I turned around to see a tall, black-haired man probably in his late 30s or early 40s.
    "Ok I guess" I responded shyly.
    I tried to sit up but fell down. I tried again and again as the doctor watched. My head started spinning so I just gave up, laying down instead.
    "Why'd you stop", asked the doctor.
    "My head started to spin, so I stopped" I replied lamely.
    "My name is Doctor Horton. I'm the main doctor I charge of you and your mom. We have figured something out."
    "What's that", I ask scared of the answer.
    "Your to young to have a stroke. And asking your mom some questions, she had all the same symptoms as you."
    "So, what does that mean", I asked worried.
    "It means that you and your mother have the same disease. You inherited it".
    
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13. wittywriter2
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    June 1, 2012 6:28pm UTC
    (No Title)
    Chapter 2
    "Ok. Ok. I'll ask Mrs. Herbert if she can drive me. Ok. See you later. Love you".
    As I hung up the phone, I'll I could think about was the news I had just received. I walked over to Mrs. Herbert’s house (who, btw, is our next door neighbor) and asked for a ride to Saint Alexander’s Hospital.
    "Oh, sure, sure. Why do you need to go there"?
    I didn't answer but walked over to the side of the care and got in. Seeing that I was not ready to explain, she just got in and drove away from home.
    For about the first half-hour of the drive, Mrs. Herbert tried to make small talk but I only gave one-word answers so she finally gave up. I sank into deep thought.
    Yesterday, Henry's lacrosse practice had been canceled because of recent rain. He took the bus home. When he got home, he yelled out "Mom, I’m home", only to get no reply.
    Frightened, he went looking for her. He founder on the floor of her office, barley breathing.
    The first thing he did was call 9-1-1, who sent people over. Then he called my dad who left work immediately.
    My dad got there just as they were putting my mom on a stretcher into the ambulance. He went over to a paramedic with a clipboard.
    "Well, it seems your wife had a minor stroke and collapsed on the floor. It’s a good thing your son found her when he did", he said in a gruff voice.
    They all agreed to meet at Saint Alexander’s hospital.
    I thought about this over and over and over throughout the whole ride. About 2 hours later, I drifted off to sleep.
    A little while later, I was awoken by Mrs. Herbert.
    "Dear. Were here".
    I opened my eyes to see the gleaming white building. Once I got out of the car, I sated waling to the doors. That’s where I collapsed.
    
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14. wittywriter2
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    June 1, 2012 5:34pm UTC
    (No Title)
    Prologe
    As I walk slowly through the halls, I wonder how this happened to me. How I got here. How my life was ruined. How my whole world fell apart.
    Chapter one
    My name is Madeline. I am 18 in 12th grade at Bunker High, home of the Billy Goats. A while ago, my life took a turn for the worst.
    It all started about 2 weeks ago. But before I can get to that exact moment, I have to start about a month before that.
    The day started out like any other Friday in the month of October. I Woke up to my alarm, got ready, and went to school.
    The day (being a Friday) seemed to drag on forever. When I finally got home, I threw my bookbag down and went to my room thinking about what the boy I liked, Ryan,had said to me that day. I should have noticed that something was wrong right away, but I was so deep in thought, I didn't notice 'till later that I was alone in my home. No mom. No dad. Nether my younger sister (Elixabeth, 7) or my younger brother (Henry, 12) were home either.
    I understood my sister and brother not being here. Every Friday, Elizabeth has a sleepover, usually at someone else's house. Henry has lacrosse practice every day after school 'till 5. So that was the first thing that came to my mind when I noticed that the music in my sisters room was not on and the TV was not on in Henry's.
    My dad worked at an office, so i thought he was still at work.
    My mom's the one that made me, umm, uncomfortable. She is a police officer that works the night-shift so her absence during the day is unusual. She has only been called in once before, and she was home before I got home from school that day. Plus, today she didn't even leave a note.
    When I got home on this friday in october, I thought 'she probably forgot to leave one because she was in a rush'.
    That wasn't the case.
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    Around 7 o'clock, I started to get worried because no one was home or had called yet. So, I called my dad. He didn't answer. I called my mom. She didn't answer.I called my brother. He didn't answer. I called my sister but she had left her phone at home so it rang in her room.
    Scared and alone, I went downstairs and turned on all the lights. Then I turned them all on upstairs too. I turned on the TV downstairs so loud I couldnt hear myself think.
    That was good.This way I couldn't hear all the bad things my over-scared mind was saying happened.
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    I must have stayed up intill 3 in the morning but fell asleep sometime after that. When I woke around 12 pm, still no one was here.
    I looked at my phone and saw that I had a missed call from my dad. I called him back right away.
    The news I recived wasn't good.
    
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