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Forever mine ♥ chapter 5; a fan-fiction of 1D
part two of forever young.

The next day Niall, Harry, and I go out to buy some roses for Bayley. Harry had the amazing idea that we could make a line leading to Niall singing. Each person hands her a rose and says one word to "Will you marry me?"
I'm pretty excited. We walk into the flower shop and buy 4 seperate roses and 1 large bouqet.
The florist is a tall blonde. She has incredibly beautiful gray eyes. She looks like she's 27. She ignores Niall and I. She rushes straight up to Harry. Niall just shakes his head and laughs. I roll my eyes and go stand next to Niall. Harry gives the florist an autograph and takes a couple of pictures with her. Finally, she allows us to purchase the roses and get out of there.
We pick up some food for everyone and head home. Niall is pretty nervous for tonight.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Bayley's point of view

Niall texts me to meet him at the Hudson River. Me, Rosie, Natalie, and Heather are all home. Natalie drives us to the Hudson. Everyone is smiling at me.
"What?" I ask as we pull into a parking space.
"Nothing." Rosie chuckles.
We walk down to the pier. I see Liam in front of me holding a single rose.
"Will." Liam smiles as I grab the rose.
I walk some more when Louis is in front of me.
"You." He winks as I slowly take the rose.
Confused, I walk passed.
"Marry." Zayn smiles as I take the rose.
Harry is right in front of me.
"Me?" He hands me a bouqet of flowers. He slides out of the way revealing Niall with a guitar.
He sings the acoustic version of One Thing, with the guys backing him up. He finishes the song and gets down on one knee.
The tears start forming in my eyes.
"Will you marry me Bayley?" He smiles holding the most beautiful ring I have ever seen.
I'm speechless. I can't form any words in my mouth. Everyone smiles at me.
"Of course!" I'm finally able to choke out.
My life is complete.
Amber's point of view.
She looked totally shocked. You could tell she was surprised. Especially when Liam handed her that first rose. I thought she was going to run.
They share a long kiss after he slides the ring on her finger. Harry comes over to me and holds my hand. I smile.
We have a tiny party by the river. It's dark out so we light some candles and the river looks absolutely beautiful. Everyone is slow dancing with somebody. Sophia, Anna, and Natalie are dancing together. Justin even makes a "surprise" appearance and dances with Brittany. He was supposed to be on a business trip for two weeks.
I guess everyone gets their fairytale ending tonight.

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Forever mine ♥ chapter 5; a fan-fiction of 1D part two

15 faves · 3 comments · Jul 20, 2012 9:03pm

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dancelover728 · 1 decade ago
aww that is soo cute:)
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amillionsecretsx3 · 1 decade ago
it's in new york c: even though i have never been there. trololol. i just needed a river.
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invisabledinosaurs · 1 decade ago
Aaawwwwww adorable and what state is the hudson river in XD
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