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Never Been Kissed
Chapter 2

Mary's POV

My mother spends an entire evening preparing a feast. She always cooks for an army. She rolls out a sheet of dough with her small fingers. She cooks everying from scratch and even insists on making her own pie crusts. "I'm making cherry pie. It used to be one of your favorites." My mom whispers. It was one of dad's favorites too. "You're father would've been so proud of you." She says. Her eyes grow heavy with tears. He hated me, mom. And I don't miss him nearly as much as you do. She wipes the remainder of the tears on her sleeve. "I won't upset you by talking about your father but I wanted to let you know that I'm proud of you too. And, James seems like a really special guy and he likes you, Mary." She says. Her words almost make me laugh. Almsot. Guys like James are not interested in girls like me. The  doorbell rings and my thoughts are instantly forgotten.  "Could you get the doorbell, honey?" My mom asks. I slowly walk to the front door. Minutes tick as I stare at the door knob. My body is frozen in place and I'm unable to move. Time seems to spin faster and faster. With shaking fingers. I yank the door open. I feel a stab of disappointment when I see my brother, Thomas, standing in the door way. Thomas doesn't look my way. His lips frown in disapproval and he says, "You really shouldn't open the door for guests." It's nice to see you too, brother. His eyes are empty and distant. He won't look at me. He hasn't looked at me in years. He walks into the house and a young woman follows him inside. The young woman seems afraid of my presence and I can only imagine the horror stories my brother has told her about me. I'm sure he's told her his own version of the truth. I walk into the kitchen and and take a seat at the end of the table. "I think she should be upstairs when we have other guests in the house. People will not understand her...condition." He warns with an unsteady voice. "Thomas, I want all of my children together. If you are uncomfortable in my home, then feel free to take your guest and leave!" My mother says. Her voice has a sharp edge and she is clearly not in the mood for a conflict. The edge in her voice surprises Thomas and he quickly steps down. He knows better then to challenge my mother. "I'm sorry, I was just worried for her." He says. When have you ever cared for me, Thomas? You weren't worried about me. You were worried about what your girlfriend would think. "Well mother, this is Hailey, my fiance." He says. The word fiance rolls off his tongue. My mother stop brething, but she quickly recovers.


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