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Heeeyy :)
My name is Julia.
I'm 13 years young and I blow out my candles on July 8th.
My favorite color is Purple.
I absolutely love soccer :)
I love One Direction, Justin Bieber, Nicki Minaj, Demi Lavato, Snooki, etc.
I love texting, shopping, and listening to music :)
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  1. storywriter52 storywriter52
    posted a quote
    August 13, 2012 10:00am UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 6
    Mary's POV
    He smiles apologetically, "You look surprised to see me. Did you really think I would stand you up?" Yes. My mother walks through the door and is truly relieved when she sees James. "Oh James, I'm so glad you could make it!" She says. James nods. "So am I. I'm really sorry I'm late. My car broke down this morning and I had trouble finding a ride. I can leave if it's--" My mother intrupts him, "Nonsense. All that matters is that your here now!" James pulls out a bouget of flowers from behind his back. The flowers are white lillies which just happens to be my mother's favorite. "For you." He tells her. "Oh, you are too sweet. I need to go find a vase for these." My mother says. James looks rather pleased with himself and I want to wipe that smirk right off his face. "Don't worry. I didn't forget about you. I have a surpirse for you too." What kind of surprise? James follows me into the dining room. He looks intimidated by the entire family. The entire family is engaging in an argument but James's prescence seems to bring them to a stop. The rest of my family smiles and acknoledges his prescence. "This is Mary's friend, James." My mother announces. James smiles politely, "I'm sorry for being so late and inturrupting your dinner." My brother looks shocked, "Take a seat." Thomas says. No, no, no! Don't sit by him! James takes a seat next to Haley. "Sit down, Mary." My mother says. I sink down into my seat with a heavy sigh. "Well, it's really nice for you to come, James. For a while, I thought you were made up!" Thomas says. James remains calm, "It's my pleasuse. Plus, it gave me an excuse to see your sister." Thomas crosses his arms firmly over his chest, "Well that's nice of you to say. I can't imagine why anyone would want to see her." James seems stunned by my brother's comment, "That's kind of--" My mother intrupts both boys, "I'm going to warm you up a plate, James. Is there anything you would like to drink?" She asks. "Yeah do you want a beer?" Thomas asks. "Thomas!" My mother says. Thomas shrugs, "Most teens start drinking. I started when I was thirteen." And look how you turned out. "I'll just take a water." James says. My mother disappears into the kitchen and I feel lost without her. She knows how to keep a watchful eye over Thomas. "Well, if theres anything you would like to know about Mary, let me know. There's a few gaps I could help you fill in." Thomas promises with evil intentions. James looks over to me and he can sense I'm uncomfortable.
    Hey guys. This is my first story. Tell me what you think! If you wanna be notified, comment and tell me :) Sorry for the wait guys. I was at camp all week.
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  2. storywriter52 storywriter52
    posted a quote
    August 1, 2012 10:33am UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 6
    Mary's POV
    All the color drains from my mother's face. "You think you're pregnant?" She asks. Haley nods and rubs her stomach, "I hope so. We've been trying to get pregnant. I"m hoping for a little baby girl." My mother pulls her napkin down. "Excuse me, I have to go to the bathroom." Haley looks disappointed and I almost feel sorry for her. The other relatives squirm Haley. Everyone seems to be thrilled by the idea of a baby. "You'll have to start picking put nursery colors." One of my aunts says. The rest of the group begins to argue over baby names. My eyes zone out and in of the conversation. My grandmother takes a sip of her water. She's the only one out of the group that doesn't drink. "Marget is not a good name for a girl. She will be teased for the rest of her life!" She says. My aunt says, "My mother named me Marget!" "And you were bullied at school because of it." My grandmother snaps. My mother returns shortly with dessert. Her cherry pie is the group favorite and the group is soon fighting over who will get the last piece of pie. The door bell rings. "Get the door. Mary." My mother says. I'm so full I can barely move. I don't want to get teh door. "Mary, get the door! Now!" My mother says. I stumble to my feet and walk to the front door. James is the last person I expect to see.
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  3. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 28, 2012 1:11pm UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 5
    Mary's POV
    "I invited Mary's friend over for dinner, but he seems to be late." My mother says. My uncle stands up and helps her bring the food to the dinning room table. "Mary has a friend, that's not imaginary?" Thomas remarks. My mother hits him. "Thomas, you could at least try to be a little nicer to your sister. And yes, she does." He's not late. He's coming. I'll have to survive this miserble evening, alone. My brother snorts, "How can she have a friend when she doesn't even talk?" Thomas lives to torture me. "People can communicate in other ways then speaking. Body language is far more powerful then talking." My mother says. Yes. Sometimes words are truly useless. Dinner is served at six-thrity. My mother engages in conversation with the rest of her guests. Her eyes linger to the clock every few mintues. Her thoughts match mine, perfectly. He's really not coming. "How do you vision yourself in the next five years, Haley?" My mother asks. Haley giggles and sips her wine. "Barefoot and pregnant. There is no greater joy then having kids." My mother swallows hard and tries to hide her discomfort. "You have no plans for a career." She states. Haley strokes Thomas's arm. "I plan to take care of my husband and my home. I want to be a housewife." My mother is not impressed. Thomas's eyes glow with pride. I guess you've found yourself the perfect trophy wife. "Oh, I'm sure you'll make a great mother." My mother says. "Well, I for one, can't wait for grandchildren. You my dear, are beautiful. My grandson couldn't have picked put a better wife." My grandmother says. She places her hand over Haley's hand. Haley is gratefull that my grandmother is on her side. My mother couldn't disagree more. Haley is the opposite of what she pictured for her son. "Infact, I might already be expecting." Haley says.
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  4. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 18, 2012 9:56pm UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 2
    Mary's POV
    "I didn't realize you were engaged." She says. Thomas shrugs, "We've only been engaged for a week, but we have already set a date for the wedding. Isn't that right, baby?" Haley leans down and kisses her cheek, "I love your son very much, Mrs. Dun. And I want to spend the rest of my life with him. But, I need your blessing." My mother wipes the sweat from her forhead. "Listen, this has all come as a shock to me. We can discuss things over dinner because I need to get this pie in the oven." She says. Oh, you're really f/cked up now, Thomas. Mom doesn't seem to like your future bride, does she? Thomas sits at the head of the table and Haley sits besides him. He squeezes her hand under the table. She seems comforted by his touch. "She'll come around, Haley. The engagement has just come as a surprise to her." He says. Haley turns to him with eyes full of tears. "What if she doesn't like me, Thomas?" She asks. Thomas smiles with ease. "She will love you because I love you." He says. While my mother's back is turned, he leans down and kisses her. The kiss is brief but I can see a spark growing in her grey eyes. And she looks at me, briefly. And, then she quickly turns her gaze to Thomas. "Is she okay?" She asks. My body goes numb. Thomas sighs,"Yeah, she's fine. She just has...problems." I can still hear you, Thomas. "Just ignore her. I don't want to focus on her. This evening is about us. We are here to celebrate our engagement." Thomas says. Haley strokes his cheek, "Good. Because I can't wait to spend teh rest of my life with you." Do you really want to be a part of our f/cked up family, Haley? By six O'clock, ten more people have arrived for dinner. James is no where in sight and I don't think he is going to come.
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  5. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 16, 2012 9:16am UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 2
    Mary's POV
    My mother spends an entire evening preparing a feast. She always cooks for an army. She rolls out a sheet of dough with her small fingers. She cooks everying from scratch and even insists on making her own pie crusts. "I'm making cherry pie. It used to be one of your favorites." My mom whispers. It was one of dad's favorites too. "You're father would've been so proud of you." She says. Her eyes grow heavy with tears. He hated me, mom. And I don't miss him nearly as much as you do. She wipes the remainder of the tears on her sleeve. "I won't upset you by talking about your father but I wanted to let you know that I'm proud of you too. And, James seems like a really special guy and he likes you, Mary." She says. Her words almost make me laugh. Almsot. Guys like James are not interested in girls like me. The doorbell rings and my thoughts are instantly forgotten. "Could you get the doorbell, honey?" My mom asks. I slowly walk to the front door. Minutes tick as I stare at the door knob. My body is frozen in place and I'm unable to move. Time seems to spin faster and faster. With shaking fingers. I yank the door open. I feel a stab of disappointment when I see my brother, Thomas, standing in the door way. Thomas doesn't look my way. His lips frown in disapproval and he says, "You really shouldn't open the door for guests." It's nice to see you too, brother. His eyes are empty and distant. He won't look at me. He hasn't looked at me in years. He walks into the house and a young woman follows him inside. The young woman seems afraid of my presence and I can only imagine the horror stories my brother has told her about me. I'm sure he's told her his own version of the truth. I walk into the kitchen and and take a seat at the end of the table. "I think she should be upstairs when we have other guests in the house. People will not understand her...condition." He warns with an unsteady voice. "Thomas, I want all of my children together. If you are uncomfortable in my home, then feel free to take your guest and leave!" My mother says. Her voice has a sharp edge and she is clearly not in the mood for a conflict. The edge in her voice surprises Thomas and he quickly steps down. He knows better then to challenge my mother. "I'm sorry, I was just worried for her." He says. When have you ever cared for me, Thomas? You weren't worried about me. You were worried about what your girlfriend would think. "Well mother, this is Hailey, my fiance." He says. The word fiance rolls off his tongue. My mother stop brething, but she quickly recovers.
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  6. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 14, 2012 4:28pm UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 2
    Mary's POV
    Nurse Kelly places her hand on my mother's hand "No, he helped her. I don't exactly know what happened because....." Because your f/cked up daughter doesn't speak. "Some girl said mean things to her and she tried to run but she tripped. And I convinced her to go to the nurse's office. Her knee looks pretty bad, but it looks like she'll be fine." My mother looks grateful and she rewards him with a small smile. "Thanks you so much for looking after my daughter, umm...?" She pauses and waits for his name. He reaches out and shakes my mothers hand. "James. And it's been a pleasure meeting you and your beautiful daughter!" He says. He makes my mother blush. My mother swats his hand. "You are too kind. The least I could do is invite you to dinner!" Please say no. Please say no. Please say no. He smiles wickedly, "I would love to join you both for dinner." James has gracefully worked his way into my mother's heart. My mother gently squeezes his hand and whispers, "Thank you very much for taking care of my daugher, James. You will never realize how much it means to me." He seems shocked by her strong, poigant words. And I wait for him to run, but he doesn't. His eyes blaze with power. "Oh, it's my pleasure." He says. His fiery, blue eyes seem to darken and I can't bare to stare at him. His breath tickles my throat, "I'll be counting the hours untill I see you again." His voice holds so much promise and I'm suddenly scared. My mother pulls a piece of paper out of her purse and writes down our address. James gratefully takes it and thanks her. His eyes never leave my eyes. I tug on my mother's sleeve. Can we please go? She reads my eyes and almost instantly. After I stopped speaking, we learned how to communicate through body language and eye movements. Some days are easy and others are hard. Some days she looks at it as if I'm aghost trapped in her daughters body. "We need to leave but we will see you very soon, James." My mother promises.
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  7. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 13, 2012 1:59pm UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Chapter 1
    Mary's POV
    "Are you okay?" He manages to ask. No, I'm not okay. I shake my head reassuring. "I never realized girls could be so evil." He says, "I don't know how you can stand to put up with that sh/t." I try to force a smile. His eyes thoroughly examine my body but his eyes stop at my knees. I follow his eyes and realize that both of my knees are bleeding. I shrug as if to say that I'm okay. "Let me take you to the nurse. Please, you need to get your knees checked out." He says. I shake my head. No, I don't need your help or your pity. "I'm not taking a no for an answer. You either walk with me to the nurse or I will throw you over my shoulder and carry you there myself." He says. What? Mymouth drops open. He wouldn't do that! He winks, "Don't give me that look. Because I will do it if i have to. Now, are you going to walk to the nurse or do I have to carry you there? Nod your head once for the first choice, and twice for the second one." I nod my head once. He drapes his arm around my waist and I lean on him for support. He tightens his grip on my waist. "You feel nice." He mumers. He doesn't like you. He's just being nice. "And I like that your quiet. Most girls talk to much. He says and laughs. He countinues to talk even though I don't respond to any of his comments. "I just moved here from Britain a few weeks ago. I used to have a thick accent but now I almsot sound American. I wish I could hear your voice, I bet it's really sexy!. He says. I try to keep my face neutral. Is he messing with me? Maybe, he made a bet with the otehr guys. He has to have a alterior motive. Guys never talk to me.
    *******
    "Does it hurt to walk?" The nurse asks me. Nurse Kelly knows that I don't speak. I nod, yes. "I don't think that anything is broken. I'm going towrap your knee in bandages to stop the bleeding. And then I'm going to call your mom, alright?" Yes. Nurse Kelly looks at the man in the doorway. "Can I help you sir?" The man shoots her dazzingly, helf smile. His smile makes my heart beat faster and faster. "No, I'm just waiting for her." He says. Nurse Kelly blushes. "I didn't realize you were a student here." Nurse Kelly can not hide her disappointment. Nearly five minutes later, my mother marches into the office. Her eyes resemble the dark flames of a fire. She grabs my face and kisses my cheek, "Are you okay, baby?" I nod. I'm fine mom but your embarrasing me. "What happened? Did he hurt her?" She says and turns to him.
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  8. storywriter52 storywriter52
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    July 12, 2012 9:41pm UTC
    Never Been Kissed
    Prolouge
    Mary's POV
    "Do you mind if I sit here?" A man whispers. I can feel his warm breath gazing the top of my cheek. Heat surges through my veins. I've never been this close to a boy before! The entire cafateria gasps in shock and the whispers burn like fire at my back. I try to block out the voices. There is just one voice that stands out among the rest. "Why would you want to sit with her?" Stacy Williams says. Her heels pounce on the floor and she makes her way to the newest victim. She eyes the boy up and down with interest. Desire flickers in her deep, blue eyes. She wants him and will stop at nothing to have him. "Why wouldn't I want to sit with one of the most beautiful girls in the cafateria?" He challenges. He thinks I'm beautiful? "HER?" Stacy Williams says, "You have got to be joking. You can't possibly think that she's remotely attractive. Just. Look. At. Her. Look at the hideous scar that has branded her for life. And not only is she ugly, she's a freak! She doesn't talk to anyone. In fact, she doesn't even know how to f/cking speak!" I want to die. I want the ground to open and to swallow me whole. I stare at my lunch, but am no longer hungry. I want to run away from everyone's gaping stares but my legs feel too heavy and numb to run. I force food down my throat and try to stop the tears from spilling. Stacy leans down with a wicked gleam in her eyes, "Oh, you poor baby! Are you going to cry now?" I stand up to run, but trip under my own shoes and fall to the floor. Everyone laughs. Everyone, but him. I stand up and race to the door. Once I'm outside i breathe. My knees are burning and I don't think I can run much further. The cafateria door opens and the man slowly walks outside.
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