Mary's
POV
Nurse Kelly places her hand on my mother's hand
"No, he helped her. I don't exactly know what
happened because....." Because your f/cked up
daughter doesn't speak. "Some girl said mean
things to her and she tried to run but she tripped. And I
convinced her to go to the nurse's office. Her knee
looks pretty bad, but it looks like she'll be
fine." My mother looks grateful and she rewards
him with a small smile. "Thanks you so much for
looking after my daughter, umm...?" She pauses and
waits for his name. He reaches out and shakes my mothers
hand. "James. And it's been a pleasure meeting you
and your beautiful daughter!" He says. He makes my
mother blush. My mother swats his hand. "You are too
kind. The least I could do is invite you to dinner!"
Please say no. Please say no. Please say no. He
smiles wickedly, "I would love to join you both for
dinner." James has gracefully worked his way into my
mother's heart. My mother gently squeezes his hand and
whispers, "Thank you very much for taking care of my
daugher, James. You will never realize how much it means to
me." He seems shocked by her strong, poigant words.
And I wait for him to run, but he doesn't. His eyes
blaze with power. "Oh, it's my pleasure." He
says. His fiery, blue eyes seem to darken and I can't
bare to stare at him. His breath tickles my throat,
"I'll be counting the hours untill I see you
again." His voice holds so much promise and I'm
suddenly scared. My mother pulls a piece of paper out of
her purse and writes down our address. James gratefully
takes it and thanks her. His eyes never leave my eyes. I
tug on my mother's sleeve. Can we please go?
She reads my eyes and almost instantly. After I stopped
speaking, we learned how to communicate through body
language and eye movements. Some days are easy and others
are hard. Some days she looks at it as if I'm
aghost trapped in her daughters body. "We need
to leave but we will see you very soon, James." My
mother promises.
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gingerfox3 · 1 decade ago
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Julia, make sure you close and open the quotations. Its great so far just make sure you go over it and make sure everyting makes sense