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Love Is Sweeter the Second Time Around..
Chapter one
I looked at myself in the reflection of the mirror and sighed. I couldn't be pretty even if I tried. I put my hair in a ponytail as I went downstairs to leave to go to the pool. 
"Darling! You look amazing in that swimsuit!" Mom said as she twirled me around. 
"Thanks mom! It was the only one that fit me." I stopped smiling.
"Louisa.Honey, it's not that you're big! it's just that they didn't have your type of bikini. That's all!" Mom said as she kissed my forehead. When we got to the pool, I saw Kendall waving at our car.
"LOUSIA! OVER HERE!" she screamed, waving like an idiot. Kendalls my best friend, and has been since 4th grade. It's been 6 years since we met, and she hasn't changed since. I got out of the car and hugged her. 
"Its been so long since I've seen you!" I said letting her go.
"Yeah! Ever since I switched schools, things got rough!" Kendall exclaimed.
"Sure has.Hey let's go in the pool now!" I said grabbing her arm. "I'll see you later, mom!" Screaming at the top of my lungs, still having Kendall's arm attached to my hand. As we got through the doors, I dropped everything and dived in. Stupid enough, there was a totally hot lifegaurd staring at me. I couldn't tell if he was staring at me because I was cute, or because i just DIVED in.
"CANNONBALL!" Kendall bellyflopped into the water.
I laughed as I splashed her. She splashed me harder. A couple minutes of splashing, we had a breath holding contest. Kendall came up first, making me a winner. Still underwater, My hair got caught onto something! I swiveled my head to seer the surface of the pool. I stopped trying to get free and shut my eyes. I was out of time, But it wasn't just my hair, it was my strap! I screamed and screamed but nobody heard me.I was stuck, and there was nobody there to save me.


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Louisa:
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Kendall:http://i776.photobucket.com/albums/yy50/cortneyl1231/girlish-girl-portrait-eyes-face-green-cute-smile-brunette-sexy-lips-peutiful-had-girls-tjbwolf-Portrait-of-a-Woman-PAUL-MCQUEEN-ALBUM_large.jpg
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crazy4quotes · 1 decade ago
amazing!!! keep me updated/posted
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CaitlinAtTheDisco* · 1 decade ago
Really good. Keep me updateddd!
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storydiva4eva · 1 decade ago
great keep me posted :)
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