BustedGirlxxx · 1 decade ago
awesome story :)

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Litoudaki · 1 decade ago
my god, it's perfect! It's all I wanna read! going to the 2nd chapter now good job :D
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witheverythingihave · 1 decade ago
OMG I think you vented to me about this when it happened , right ... ? I think so ...
Anyway this is a really good story !
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Chloeeee · 1 decade ago
sooo interestingg!!
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Apurva · 1 decade ago
I liked it! :) its cute! You must keep on writing.
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IHeartCupCakes · 1 decade ago
I love it! :)
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DancerGirl24 · 1 decade ago
nice!!!continue please:)
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LivingMyOwnWay · 1 decade ago
awwwwn!! I really loved it!! you are an amazing writer.... I'm dying to know what happens next... can you PLEASE write chapter 2??
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cutevirus · 1 decade ago
can u plz write chapter 2. what story book did u copy it from.soo cool loved it biut kinda sad.aww
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uoy_evol_i · 1 decade ago
read mine?
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uoy_evol_i · 1 decade ago
Very good!
The only suggestion I would make is to slow down just a little.
However I love the plot and the characters are a lot of fun.(:
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bluebear77 · 1 decade ago
this is really good(: keep writing
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Kate1126 · 1 decade ago
its really good...dnt stop writing it
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RandomGirl42 · 1 decade ago
Awesome Keep Writing
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thesweetestmoments · 1 decade ago
A bit confusing, but REALLY good!(: I like it!
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RYERYE* · 1 decade ago
i love this
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