Should
I write
a story?
here's a bit of
it...
I inhaled
sharply, my breathing getting slower by the second. I
pulled my phone out, and dialed His number. He answered on the
2nd ring. "Hey Hailie, whats up?" A tear slipped down my face.
"Oh nothing..." I said, getting close to sobbing. "Hailie, what's
wrong?" More tears fell, as I managed to choke out, "Brent, I-
I'm...dying."
He laughed nervously over the phone, as he said, "We're
all dying." I gasped for air, as I said,
"No... I'm literally dying." The voice on the other side of
the phone got quiet. "Brent.. I just wanted to tell you something
before I die-" "No, don't think like that I'm
coming over-" Those were the last words before everything went
black.
Watcha
think?
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keegster
16 faves · 7 comments · Apr 12, 2012 9:35pm
maddig11
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1 decade ago
sounds really good, you should definetly write a story
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xmakesmestronger27x
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1 decade ago
that sounds soooo good! you should deff write it!
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ilovemylittlejennabean
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1 decade ago
yess! it sounds zoo good. I'm excited please keep writing.. comment and let me know please!!
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sophee
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1 decade ago
it sounds good please notify me if you do write it!!!!:)
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Onedirectionloveexx
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1 decade ago
its sound good! I would read if you posted it(;
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AmberRenee
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1 decade ago
Keep writing(:
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Perri917 · 1 decade ago
I love it!
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