The Summer Everything
Changed
Four
“Um, Dad…” I swallowed hard waiting for a
response.
“Sweats, you won’t have anything to worry about, she
will love you! Your so mature for your age and you are seventeen.
If you want I could let you go to the beach, the waters great
this time of year.”
“Yeah, that sounds okay.” I looked over his shoulder
to the black door. “Can I go now?”
“Well… I was hoping you would want to meet Grace.
She’s just amazing and if you’re staying with me for
long, she might become your new mom.”
“Alright dad, whatever makes you happy.” I smiled
graciously at him. He had to be giving up so much by moving here.
“Let me get changed.”
“Right, you have the room in the loft. There’s your
own bathroom but if Grace moves in you might have to share it
with her. She doesn’t think it’s appropriate for a
male and female to share a bathroom.” He pointed towards
the stairs that spiraled up a little onto a platform hallway.
“Thanks.”
***
The room was nice with a cozy couch and full sized bed. It
wasn’t too big for my style like I thought it would be. The
walls were painted a sunset orange that made the whole room feel
not as new as it really was. There was an open door that led
outside to a balcony that overlooked that beautiful ocean. The
curtains were flowing into the room and the warm light from the
sunset trickled in leaving a picture perfect scene.
I felt my phone buzz in my pocket ruining my moment of
beauty.
One new message
From Jack
Hey Susie, what if I move up near where you live? I’m old
enough to move out aren’t I?
I sighed and hit reply,
Jack,
I don’t think that’s a good idea. Ur family
needs you and you shudnt live on Ur own
I hit send and put my purple suit case on the bed to get a summer
dress out. I chose a light blue one with a streak in it. I
slipped it over my bathing suit because on the way home dad said
the pool was open 24/7.
“How do you like it here?” I turned in surprise to
see a very young woman standing in the door.
“Oh my God, are you Grace?” She was way to young to
be my dads girlfriend. She laughed and shook her head.
“That would be odd. I my parents live next door with my
younger brother, Derrik. I’m visiting from collage and I
remembered you a little from the last time you visited us. You
were little.” She smiled seemingly remembering a good
memory. “You had a crush on my brother.”
“How old was I? I don’t remember that at all.”
I wrinkled my nose at he thought of having a loud partying boy
live next to me. Well, maybe he was cute.
“You were both like four I think.” She played with
her brown hair awkwardly.
“Do you want to sit down?” I asked, patting the
bed.
“Sure!” She smiled. I had a weird feeling that she
had some kind of disorder. “Actually, my brother wanted to
come over and help your dad with something. I’ll go get him
real quick.”
She ran out of the room before I could say anything else.
Derrik, I thought, what a strange name.
Little did I know he would be the boy that changed my life
forever.
Thanks guys, love you all, I will
write the next chapter after five faves
12 faves · 7 comments · Mar 22, 2012 10:29pm
xonedirectionx
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1 decade ago
PLEASE CHILD!XD
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xonedirectionx
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1 decade ago
chpter 5 chapter 5 chapter 5 chapter chapter 5555555555555555555555555555!!!!!!!!!!:DDDDDDDD
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Jermaine
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1 decade ago
Very nice writing, miss, youre great at it, nice memory, and details, and although it wasnt a poem, it was so graceful, and lflowerd through my mind very well. Keep it up miss.
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What_She_Never_Said
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1 decade ago
I'm hooked! :)
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xonedirectionx
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1 decade ago
im dying 4 the next chapter!:)
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xonedirectionx
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1 decade ago
i love it cant wait for the next chapter!:)
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xonedirectionx · 1 decade ago
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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