One Heart Less
Chapter 6
Emma's POV
The
voices of frantic doctors erupted all around me. heard the sound
of wheels on tile and felt my body shift and random spots. Was I
on a gurdy? I had no idea where I was.
Some voices I recognized. My
brother Dylan was trying to explain to someone what happened. I
heard my best friend Shellie whispering something to herselfover
and over again. Someone was holding my hand…
“Emma! Emma stay with
us. Don’t close your eyes.” My mother’s voice
sang out. She grabbed my hands, but I couldn’t feel their
warmth. I couldn’t feel anything.
I blacked out. Well I guess I
blacked out or passed out or something like that. I didn’t
have the strength to open my eyes. The noises around me died
down.
I guess this is what it feels
like to die?
Peaceful… and
quiet.
I didn’t want to die but
what could I do?
No one was going to be able to
save me. I knew this was coming. Everyone tried to think it would
never happen but I knew it would.
And I was actually going to
accept it.
Until, of course, I met a
certain boy only hours ago.
I don’t know what it
was.
I just felt like something was
there, connecting the two of us.
When he had brushed up against
my arm I felt electricity spread throughout my entire
body.
It was like nothing I’ve
ever felt before. He was different than all the other boys
I’ve dated. Just by standing outside with him for twenty
minutes I could tell what kind of person he was.
He was kind, and considerate,
and respectful.
He was the kind of boy I could
see spending forever with.
But unfortunately for me, my
idea of forever was a fantasy. I felt death coming quicker than
anything.
I would never get my chance at
forever. I would never even get a chance at
life.
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Remember I'm not revealing who "He" is so it's
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10 faves · 2 comments · Feb 8, 2012 4:25pm
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1 decade ago
Love it!!! Nothing is wrong with it & it totally makes me check 20 - 30 times a day! Need more!!! Pleasse?
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writing_wingsxo13 · 1 decade ago
Thanks so much:) I'll try to post another tongiht:)!
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