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One Heart Less
Chapter 6
Emma's POV
The voices of frantic doctors erupted all around me. heard the sound of wheels on tile and felt my body shift and random spots. Was I on a gurdy? I had no idea where I was.
Some voices I recognized. My brother Dylan was trying to explain to someone what happened. I heard my best friend Shellie whispering something to herselfover and over again. Someone was holding my hand…
“Emma! Emma stay with us. Don’t close your eyes.” My mother’s voice sang out. She grabbed my hands, but I couldn’t feel their warmth. I couldn’t feel anything.
I blacked out. Well I guess I blacked out or passed out or something like that. I didn’t have the strength to open my eyes. The noises around me died down.
I guess this is what it feels like to die?
Peaceful… and quiet.
I didn’t want to die but what could I do?
No one was going to be able to save me. I knew this was coming. Everyone tried to think it would never happen but I knew it would.
And I was actually going to accept it.
Until, of course, I met a certain boy only hours ago.
I don’t know what it was.
I just felt like something was there, connecting the two of us.
When he had brushed up against my arm I felt electricity  spread throughout my entire body.
It was like nothing I’ve ever felt before. He was different than all the other boys I’ve dated. Just by standing outside with him for twenty minutes I could tell what kind of person he was.
He was kind, and considerate, and respectful.
He was the kind of boy I could see spending forever with.
But unfortunately for me, my idea of forever was a fantasy. I felt death coming quicker than anything.
I would never get my chance at forever. I would never even get a chance at life.

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One Heart Less Chapter 6 Emma's POV The voices of frantic

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writing_wingsxo13 · 1 decade ago
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