I'm trying poetry.... please
read((:
~this is my first poem,
i know its probably bad, bear with me witty. Its describing a
sunset from a cabin by a lake~
The sun painted the sky shades of pink as it began to fall from the
sky and into the deep depths of the earth. I could feel the
darkness begin to consume myself along with the cabin, as the
last streaks of pink began to fade from the sky. The red hot
reflection of the sun nestled itself between the lake and the
horizon. The last bits of sunlight abandoned the lake,
spreading back as far as the eye can see, giving the lake an eerie
glow as if it were on fire. I watched the moons reflection
slowly replace the sun's on the claming water, just feet away
from were I sat. The lulling, consistant lapping of the
gentle waves hugging the shore put me in a trance. I watched,
mesmerized, as the small sailboats rocked up and down ever so
slightly in unison with the water around it. I managed to
divert my eyes from the majestic scene and caught my glance
creeping towards the stars. Those tiny balls of light
illuminated the night, providing a peaceful glow on the land
beneath. I felt comphorted. I felt amazed. But
overall, i felt happy, extatic even, that while the world was
crumbling into pain, suffering, and hunger, it's beauty was
never sacrificed, never abandoned us. The beauty was here to
stay. And for some peculiar reason, that gave me hope.
how'd ya like it? i warned
you it was baddd..... feed backk?!??!
thankssss((((:
I'm trying poetry.... please read((: ~this is my first poem,
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Feb 7, 2012 7:58pm
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ktb19 · 1 decade ago
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jaggers taught you well jim