RUNAWAY GIRL
Chapter Ten

Whoo. 
"I'm going to go to the caf," Allison said, "Give me ten minutes."
"Yeah." my stomache felt sick. I needed food, or maybe I was just nervous.
I looked at the clock. 
Ten minutes. Allison left. 
Whoo.
I sat there. Thinking.
Time passed.
Three more minutes. 
The door slid open, except it wasn't Allison. It was mom.
She approached me, "You thought you could escape?"
Scream.
But I was speechless. I reached for Allison's bag. 
The camera.
Allison appeared, she pushed my mom.She grabbed my wrist, mom fought back. She punched Allison in the stomache.
Allison cried out in pain, I kicked my mom.
"Nice try." I ran, Allison followed. We found the door, and our mom was right behind. getting closer.
"JUMP!" 
I held onto Allison's hand, we jumped rolling into a river, and mom screaming at us. We swam, and swam., 
leaving mom behind. 

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