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"Mind Games"
Macy's POV: Chapter 4 ; Part 1

 
The sky was dark gray. It looked like it was about to storm. I looked in front of me. I saw my brother Matty. He looked like happy like nothing bad ever happened in his life. He was smiling. But deep down I knew that smile was fake. Suddenly everything came rushing back to me. I remembered everything. I remembered waking up on September 11th . 2010 at exactly 8:45 to a ten paged text from Matty. I remembered not being able to get to the hospital fast enough. I remembered watching my brother slowly fade away. My brother attempted suicide. He was successful. I remembered taking my phone out of my back pocket and reading the text he sent me. I watched the video he sent me before he tried to hang himself. My Big brother. He looked so happy. I heard the song “Half way gone” playing in the background. Most people would look at my brother and wonder why would someone so happy want to kill him self. Well no one knew my father pasted away in 2008. He had lung cancer. He had been battling it since 2001. A couple months after 9/11. My dad was a firefighter. My dad was my brothers hero. My brother, slowly became more & more depressed as the days went on. Finally he cracked. I couldn’t help but want to cry. But I didn’t understand so much. Where was I and why was I here? I felt someone shaking me. As if they wanted me to move. I heard “Macy, Please, wake up” in a faint voice. My eyes fluttered open. I saw George’s face hovering over me. “where am I” I could barely get the words out. My throat felt like sand paper. “Your on the beach, Tayler called 911, You be fine” George said while tears were running down his face. I felt so much pain in left shoulder. I reached for it with my right hand. It felt like I was touching hot wax. “You’ll be fine” were the last words I heard. George say as he kissed me.
 

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Ralph* · 1 decade ago
I loveove LOOOVE thiiss! I've been readingg sincee the very first one &im inn a romance right noww with this story- hope you dont mind(;
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iamabanana · 1 decade ago
love it(: Witty won't let me fave for some reason. :c
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zebragurl97 · 1 decade ago
this is awesome plus my name is macy so that makes it even cooler
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citynightlightsx · 1 decade ago
LOVE it!!!!
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