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Of Two Minds

This is weird. I am now using my parents computer, which is a regular Windows computer instead of my precious MacBook computer that I had to give back to my school. I am losnig patients for how slow it is :/
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It was Tuesday and in retrospect Tuesday was one of the most blah days of the entire week. Every other day I always had something to do or was recuperating from something the day before. Tuesday was pretty much a waste of my life. Except for this Tuesday. After the whole debacle with Bryce and David yesterday I was determined to make sure I never hurt either one of them again. That meant that, since it was Bryce’s week, I had to learn how to trust him with the things that happened, no matter what. I could live with that, I realized. Bryce was a great guy; girls still feel over him at school. Not that that was saying much since girls practically swooned over David too. The surprising thing was that neither Bryce nor David even looked their way anymore. I felt a tiny tinge of pride at the fact that I was all they saw now, even if that was conceded. I was also determined to make yesterday up to Bryce since technically he had lost a whole day of spending time with me when I wasn’t gallivanting around with David. I didn’t feel bad for spending time with David, I just felt bad that I had to hurt Bryce to do it. But either way, I was going to make it up to him. So when he asked me to go somewhere with him after school, even though he didn’t tell me where we were going, I felt myself saying yes. Don’t get me wrong: I really did want to go. But I think I made my response a little too fast and he might have gotten a little suspicious of ulterior motives, but when I pushed my head up and kissed him softly I was sure he felt a little better. During the last hour of the day, 6th hour, I couldn’t help but get anxious. I was genuinely excited for my date with Bryce, seeing how the first one had went so perfectly. He seemed to know a lot of unsaid and unspoken things about me and in the short time I had known him, he seemed to really care about what I wanted and who I was. I was standing at my locker after the bell rang at the end of the day, shoving books in my locker, when I was suddenly being hugged from behind. I smiled to myself and played along. “Guess who?” Bryce said and I could tell he was smiling. He seemed to have completely forgotten yesterday. I laughed to myself and thought about it. “Hmm… Abraham Lincoln?” I asked, hopefully. I was suppressing a giggle as he spun me around to face him. He was smiling when he pulled me into his chest. “Very poor guess, Hannah. And here I was thinking you were a scholar,” he said, trying to be serious while grinning. It didn’t work out too well. I laughed. “Sorry. I have history last hour. I got Lincoln on the brain,” I responded. Bryce laughed and then leaned in. I quickly met him halfway and pushed my lips against his. We kept it strictly PG but it still gave me butterflies. I was all but breathless when he pulled away and took my hand. I reached into my locker to grab my books and he quickly snatched it out of my hand. I looked at him quizzically. I raised my eyebrow. “You know, you guys need to stop acting like I’m cripple. Just because I’m three months pregnant doesn’t mean you have to do everything for me. I’m perfectly capable,” I told him, practically sticking my nose in the air. He chuckled at my statement and shut my locker door, pulling me into the mass of people heading towards the exit. “Did it ever occur to you that I like doing things for you?” he asked, expertly weaving through people without taking his eyes off of me. I thought about it then sighed. I guess I could see his point. “But still…” I said, not wanting to give in so easily. “I would like to hold onto my independency so that when I really need you to carry my books you won’t be sick of doing it,” I told him truthfully. What was I going to do when I was 8 months along and couldn’t even get out of bed by myself? I was going to need help and I needed to count on someone then, not now when I was still able bodied. Bryce’s face went from playful to serious rather quickly. “I’ll never get sick of you, Hannah,” he replied, his eyes scorching me. Gosh, how I wished I could live in his eyes. Instead of answering with what I was sure would be a totally lame response, I reached up and cupped his face and kissed him lightly. Then I pulled back, squeezed his hand and followed him into the parking lot. “So…” I said, subtly changing the subject. “Where are we going?” I asked, knowing he probably wouldn’t tell me. What was up with guys keeping our dates a secret? He kept walking but looked down at me with a devious but adorable grin. It was nothing like the evil grins he used to give me. “You’ll see,” he whispered in my ear and then opened my car door, ushering me inside.
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---Caitlyn
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Of Two Minds This is weird. I am now using my parents computer,

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eknovels · 1 decade ago
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