Never Leave Me
Sequel to 'In Your Heart'

Chapter 1

Ashlee's POV:
"One hundred and eighteen pounds," My mom, Ella, said. I stepped down off the scale, my light brown curls bouncing, and turned to face her. "I told you i'm not losing weight." i said dryly. She let out a heavy sigh. "I guess your right. Its just, you have barely been eating and--" I interrupted her before she could finish. "Can i get in my pajama's?" I asked rudely. I watched her face soften and instantly felt bad for being so rude. She nodded and left the bathroom, shutting the door behind her. I listened to her footsteps until they slowly faded away. Once i was sure she was gone i locked the door and pulled down my pants. I bent down and carefully untied the heavy weights from around my ankles. I stepped on the scale once again, and read my actual weight. Ninety four pounds. Truth is, I stopped eating two weeks ago, the day Jake and Matt died.

Comments? Feedback? Is that a good beginning for the sequel?! Should i rewrite it!?

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Never Leave Me Sequel to 'In Your Heart' Chapter 1 Ashlee's

55 faves · 14 comments · Apr 18, 2011 8:24pm

st_stories · 1 decade ago
I just went trough everyone off your stories, every page. And this made me cry. I cried. =( wah, matt & jake died< / / 3
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Kyla_xo · 1 decade ago
Last night all I kept thinking about was the first one ! IT SHOULD BE MADE INTO A BOOK ! I read it all last night ! (: -xoxoo
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Storys4Life · 1 decade ago
Thank you guys sooooo much!
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writingismalife · 1 decade ago
amazing dont rewrite i love it!! :)
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lori_bunni · 1 decade ago
matt died too? why? and where is parker
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xoxRachiee · 1 decade ago
omigodd its adorable... but sooo sad.. awwweee poor girl

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KARLiROSE · 1 decade ago
i'm already hooked. (: keeeep writing. PLEASE. it sounds amazinggg. write, write, write, write. PLEASE !(:
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RockrChik1121 · 1 decade ago
Im so sad now :( Make her mom get preggers :D
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xxXLoveMeHateMeXxx · 1 decade ago
your such a good writer im like crying reading your last couple chapters)": i cant believe they died)": oh well better for the story i guess? please write more...this is like one of my favorite stories!!<33
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KayMay13 · 1 decade ago
You should write more !
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katie69072 · 1 decade ago
first one and im hooked. :)
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MirMir12 · 1 decade ago
Its reallly good.
Where's Parker?
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Storys4Life · 1 decade ago
Thank you sooo much! That means aloot! (:
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IceCreamShoppe_2111 · 1 decade ago
omg omg omg write more write more!!! :)))) great stuff!!
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