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The one whos always been there
 
chapter five.


 

     The doctors didn’t let Ben in the room right away. They told him that Savannah had hit her head pretty hard, and she could have internal bleeding in her brain. So he sat in the waiting room, helpless. He didn’t think about anything but Savannah. He couldn’t think about anything else, because she was the only thing that mattered. He was scared he would lose her, and that worst part was… he didn’t even have her yet. He didn’t get to kiss her lip, and feel as though she wanted him as much as he wanted her. This broke his heart, and he felt hopeless. He prayed that she would be okay. She needed to be okay, because if she wasn’t Ben wouldn’t know what to do with himself. Savannah had always been there, she was always there when he needed a shoulder to cry on, or if he needed someone to tell him that things would get better, and that life was okay. She was the reason he was still here today. He thought about taking his life many times in the past, but he never did, because Savannah was always the person that stopped him. He loved her, He desperately needed her.

     When the doctor finally came out, Ben stood up, bracing himself for the worst. “ We don’t know if she’ll be okay.” the doctor said, starring at his clip board. “ What do you mean you don’t know?” Ben asked, his heart dropping. “ We still haven’t figured out how bad her condition is.” Ben felt his eyes water, but he fought back the tears. “Can I please see her?” The doctor saw the hurt in his eyes and nodded, “ She’s unconscious, but yes.” The doctor pointed to the room on the left, room 345. Ben walked to the door, and opened it slowly, taking a deep breathe before stepping in.  



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Nicoleexwoah · 1 decade ago
thank you guys so muchh!
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jssx623 · 1 decade ago
i lovee it! dont listen to herr vv
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tiaamyrandaa · 1 decade ago
i think its amazing and need to keep writing because she cant die her and ben need to go out ! and dont listen to anyone you have amazing talent
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Nicoleexwoah · 1 decade ago
i wasnt asking you to read this, this is for anyone who WANTS to read it. But please, if you dont have anything nice to say..dont say it at all. Im just trying to write my stories, thats all. no harm done.
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julia99 · 1 decade ago
heres ur comment im not readinq this whole thinq . k cool bye
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