Im just rewritting the story over ....So it will be alot better!!
Trouble in Knomes
Chapter 1
Hi im Ally i am 16 , i have blonde wavy hair ,and blue eyes. My dad and i just moved back to this town/ city . It has alot of shops , and has a giant mall! . I can definally get use to being back here, we live in a huge house i guess you can say it is a little bit smaller than a mansion . Well anyways my dad just got married to a girl Lucy , she has 2 sons . Alex who has straight blonde hair ,brown eyes he is 16, and Dan has straight blonde hair with green eyes he is 17. Then I have a youngher sister sasha she has black hair , with green eyes she is 14 , she got her black hair from our mom . But the newest little one to the family is Kate she is 4 she has blonde hair and green eyes.
It is the first day of school tommarow , and I think im prepared for my Nightmare to begin.
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