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Hi ....I love to write stories...but some of my ideas were kind of boring..Please check out my new story Your my angel
*Emma *

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July 6, 2011 10:35pm UTC

here is another chapter of my new story
Your my Angel
Chapter 2
I woke up to my alarm going off, i dragged myself out of my bed. As i trying to totally wake up i had thoughts flipping through my mind , the bad part was that it was about Tyler. I was going to his house to pick up my purse , when i walked in on him making out with some stupid blonde barbie. I was angry and I decided to take a shower to help me relax me a little bit. I got out and straightened my hair and changed into my blue faded skinny jeans and my blue american eagle teeshirt and converese. I grabbed my IPod and grabbed my bag and key and headed to school.
As I stopped the car i got out and headed into the school. I got to my locker when someone was leaning on it . Of course its Tyler. I walked up to my locker and pushed him out of the way .
" what is wrong beatiful" tyler said said rubbing his hand on my arm
" Dont touch me Ever " I said though my teeth, while pulling his hand off of my arm.
" Babe seriously what is wrong " he said trying to grab my hand
" Dont ever call me that i am not your babe anymore" i said slapping his hand away
" Emma what do you mean" he said
" umm lets see you, First you cheated on me with that girl, second you always flirt with every single girl you see. " i said half yelling
" Emma , babe are you ok i never cheated on you" he said looking calm
" are you serious , i walked in on you and the girl making out on your couch yesterday.. so if I were you I would give up trying act like it did not happen , and the smart thing to do is to just walk away and Leave Me Alone ." I said fully yelling now
I grabbed my books and walked away towards class. Why cant i get over him and just ,move on ...he cheated on you why would you want him if he does not want you .
The day pasted i kept thinking about our scene from this morning . Does he really think you are that stupid that you would not have found out soon. That question kept creeping in my mind, How long was he cheating on you with that girl?
Please comment and tell me if it is good or not .....It would really help me out if people told me what was wrong with the story and what people liked about it soo i know what to do and not to do .
Thank You. Hoped you enjoyed

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July 6, 2011 7:31pm UTC

I decided to try out a new story...soo please tell me if it is good or not.
I felt the cool breeze hit my face. i kept thinking about Tyler . Wait why am i thinking about tyler, he just broke your heart. I snapped back to reality when i heard cars honking their horns , i grabbed the wheel and tried to not hit the cars coming my way.
I pulled into my driveway, i walked into the kitchen and grabbed a bottle of water. I ran up to my room,i sat down in my spinny computer chair, and logged onto facebook. Only stupid notifications , so i logged off and took out my phone. I looked at my phone only 2 messages. They were all from Tyler
Emma we need to talk - T
Emma , Listen I am sorry- T
Tyler you had your chance but you just threw it away: I quickly replied back
Emma Please I am really sorry , Please forgive me- T
Tyler I don't think that is possible of what you did: I replied back
I shut my phone , i had tears welling in my eyes. I wiped my eyes and did my makeup again. Then I grabbed my keys and and headed to the mall.
-Mall
As I got out of my car I started walking into the mall. I went into Hot Topic , and American Eagle and got a few shirts and shorts and different types of converse. I walked up to the register and there was a lady who looked familiar .I just ignored the feeling and left the mall and walked to my car . As my car came into view someone was leaning on it. Then i realized who was leaning on my car Tyler. Wait why is Tyler leaning on my car.
" What do you want Tyler " i spat through my teeth
" What no hello" he said with a massive grin on his face
" you did not answer my question" i said with hate in my voice
" Well I wanted to see you , and i know when you are depressed or mad you come here" he said with a half smile
" Well i don't want to see you, after what you did to me, this conversation is over" i said getting annoyed with him
" Ok Bye Beautiful" he said moving away from my car
I was now officially mad, I drove home listening to music. As soon as i got home i ran to my room slamming the door .I jumped on my bed , pulling out my IPod and listening to music , just staring off into space . It felt like hours , just staring at the posters on my ceiling . My eyes getting droopy , i closed my eyes for a split second , then just fall into a deep sleep .
Sorry kind of bad...my friend told me to make up a quick story..please tell me if it is good or not . Comment please

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February 14, 2011 7:54pm UTC

Threats and Lies
Chapter 3
I woke up and took a shower and put on black skinny jeans and a green Hollister shirt . And put on my black flats , I grabbed my I -phone and grabbed my backpack and went down stairs . Alex and ryan and jacob were sitting at the dining room table. As soon as I came down stairs ryan’s head came up looking at me alex looked at me, then rolled her eyes and went back to her phone. “ your dad bought you a new car ” ryan said throwing the keys at me . “ ok thanks, see you at school” I said turning to leave for school. I went outside and there was a new red convertible outside in the long driveway. I ran over to it, there was a little card in the drivers seat .
Dear Emma ,
We all know that I have not been the best father for the past years . But I have been trying to change that, I am trying to make up all of those years that I had missed . Of seeing you grow up, so here is a present to my wonderful gorgeous daughter Emma .
Love your dearly father Sean,
I closed the card , I had tears pouring down my face. I grabbed my purse that was in the passenger seat , and did my makeup over again. I pulled out of the driveway and went to school.
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I pulled into the school parking lot , there was a lot of different types of cars. I got out and headed to the main office , as soon as I got there I got my schedule and my assigned locker and my locker combination . I headed off to science , I went to go sit the back when I sat down. A girl sat down at the next table over , as soon as she sat down the legs of the chair fell off. Everyone in the room just started laughing, she got up and ran into the bathroom across the hall crying . I got up and followed her into the bathroom, I found her sitting in the corner with her knees pulled to her chest . “ are you ok” I said sitting next to her, “ I think I am now, thanks I am Rebecca” “ hi I am emma , I am new here” “ how about we get out of here and head back to class so you don’t get into the trouble on your first day” “ yeah we better go “ I got up and put out my hand to give her help. We walked out of the bathroom and me and Rebecca walked into the room laughing. I took the seat what I had taken before when a guy with blonde hair and green eyes came and took the seat next to me . I could not try to look away anymore, I looked over at him and he was looking at me , I froze I couldn’t move I just looked at him. The rest of the school day flew by quick , as soon as the last bell rang I started heading toward my car, when someone called my name. I turned to see the blonde hair and green eyes guy start running towards me. As soon as he got towards me he started to do a cute smile . “ hey we did not get to exchange names I am erik” “ hi I am emma , but you probably already know that” “ yeah I got to go but how about we exchange numbers or something” . I nodded and pulled out a pen and wrote my number on his hand and he did the same but he also put a winky face . I smiled and giggled ,we said got byes and he winked at me . I thought about how much I might actually start to like it here it Florida .
sorry kinda long,and sorry if errors. Fave, Comment , Follow
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February 11, 2011 8:07pm UTC

Threats and Lies
Chapter 2
I looked out the window and saw the welcome to Florida sign, I sighed and thought that this might be a good thing leaving New York. It might be a good experience to get to know my so called “father ’’ and maybe meet some new people here . We pulled up into a big house ….I was shocked. “ t-this is your house ? ” “ yeah ..why is it that shocking . ” I nodded. I grabbed my bags and we went into the huge house, the house looked more bigger on the inside . As soon as we walked in two boys and one girl came into the room, and following them was a young looking woman . My father walked over and put his arm around the boy who was on the right . “ emma this is ryan ” he said while taking his arm off of ryan , and walking towards the other boy. “ this is Jacob” he walked next to the girl “ this here is alex” he said and walked over to the young woman and put his arm around her waist. “ this is my lovely peyton and she is soon going to have a little one named Elizabeth ” he said with a giant smile on his face. “ well we totally did not come up with a name yet ” she said touching her small stomach , I smiled at how happy their little family was. “ here I will show you your new room ” ryan said taking my bags I just nodded and followed ryan to my new room. As soon as we stepped in I was in shock I had a huge room it was all blue and green , and it had a balcony and a gigantic walk in closet, and a huge bathroom connected to the room. “ emma please promise me something” “ yeah sure , what is it ryan ” “ you are gorgeous emma, please don’t let any guy take advantage of you ” “ of course ” “ ok, now I feel better” he said kissing my cheek . Oh my gosh , why does he have to be my new brother . This is going to be very hard , well lets hope these feeling will go away. I looked at the time , ten great well I might as well start to unpack my things . I hope tomorrow I will be able to find things tomorrow. Well I better hurry and unpack my things , and head to bed here soon.
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February 11, 2011 6:47pm UTC

Threats and Lies
Chapter 1
Hello my name is Emma I am 16 years old. I have blondish brown straight hair, and baby blue eyes , I am 5’5 , and I am the sporty type . I live with my mom , I have not seen my dad since I was 5 . Now my father wants me to live with him all of a sudden.
I woke in my small little room , I got up and took a shower, and put on skinny jeans and a blue aeropostole shirt , and put on black flats . I grabbed my phone and my bags and dragged them outside. As soon as I got outside there was my best friend Lulu standing on the sidewalk. As soon as I saw her tears started to well up in my eyes. We ran towards each other and hugged each other, we both had tears rolling down our face. As soon as we stopped hugging a car pulled into my driveway . I said my good bye to my mom and lulu, and grabbed my bags and got in the car. I stared at my mom and lulu, until I could not see them anymore. We were now leaving New York and heading to Florida , it will be a chance to start my life all over .
sorry if any errors and sorry kinda short . Please comment fave , or follow :)
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storywritter98
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February 10, 2011 7:43pm UTC

I am starting a new story ....yes i know i have not been writing my story. My computer crashed and also my story just deleted its self . So around tommarow I will post a new story called Threats and Lies .
Well thank you !

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storywritter98
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January 13, 2011 7:56pm UTC

this is the first chapter of a story i wrote before , what do you think.
Life Upside Down
Chapter 1
Hi my name is Emma , I’m 15 years old . I have blonde wavy hair I have blue eyes . I live with my foster parents Jane and Nick in California ,and yes I guess I can be classified as a nerd, type of girl, like I get very high grades, sometimes I love to read . But I have a crush on this guy named Nathan. We live in a huge house , in the center of town. Our house is almost the biggest, one that you can see. I don’t really have that many friends… because I just got adopted by my new “ parents ” , so I just moved to this state . I have two new brothers : john , and drew they are both 10 , also I have a new sister ; Abby she is 5 . Well that is about my life .
I woke up from my blue fuzzy alarm clock , it matches everything in my room, everything in the room is either white or a light blue color. I got up and took a quick shower , then put on my skinny jeans and a blue shirt on it , it says aeropostole in white lettering . I put on my black flats , and brushed my teeth , then I grabbed my phone and headed downstairs . I grabbed a poptart and walked to school .
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As soon as I got to the school , everyone looked at me . A lot of people was commenting about my hair , and my eyes , and my outfit. I just said thank you and smiled , I went to gym class. The only pair of gym shorts were kind of a little bit to short, every guy was looking at me like I was some piece of meat or something. By the end of the day , I made a few friends : Kate she is 15, and Taylor he is 16 . We exchanged numbers and everything , we are in mostly every class together.
do you like it ? ..Please comment ...fave
comment tell me if i should keep writing this one or the other "untitled " one . So which one ?
Hoped you enjoyed

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January 12, 2011 6:44pm UTC

A few years ago a mother and a father decided they needed a break, so they wanted to head out for a night on the town. So they called their most trusted babysitter. When the babysitter arrived the two children were already fast asleep in bed. So the babysitter just got to sit around and make sure everything was okay with the children. Later in the night, the babysitter got bored and so she wanted to watch tv but she couldnt watch it downstairs because they didnt have cable downstairs (the parents didnt want their children watching too much garbage) so she called them and asked them if she could watch cable tv in the parents room. Of course the parents said it was ok, but the babysitter had one final request. She asked if she could cover up the large clown statue in their bedroom with a blanket or cloth, because it made her nervous. The phone line was silent for a moment, and the father(who was talking to the babysitter at the time) said.....take the children and get out of the house.....we'll call the police...we dont have a clown statue..... the children and the babysitter got murdered by the clown. it turned out 2 be that the clown was a killer that escaped from jail. if you dont repost this within 5 minutes the clown will be standing next 2 your bed at 3:00am with a knife in his hand. JUST 2 B SAFE PUT IT ON YO PAGE

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storywritter98
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January 9, 2011 7:57pm UTC

sorry i havent written in a couple days .. I was hanging out with the family over the weekend .
Untitled ( please think of a title )
Chapter 3( i think)
Math was sort of easy even though I am in a advanced class. I was working on my math homework ,when the kid on my right passed me a piece of paper that had his phone number. I looked over at him, he just winked at me and smiled and I had to laugh and smile. Math ended quickly , then I had science . I sat in the middle , we had to have a partner for science. Ok these are the pairs ; ; Emily and Luke ; , ; Ally and Ryan; …. I wonder who Ryan is . A guy with blonde shaggy hair ,and brownish eyes , came and sat next to me . “ hi I am Ryan “ he said , “ hi I am Ally “ I said , “ I know who you are , beautiful “ he said winking . I paused wait …I know him he was the guy who was think trying to hit on me during math class. Wow this is going to be a very long year.
Comment ...fave sorry i know short i was in a hurry sort of
please comment for a title
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storywritter98
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January 6, 2011 7:49pm UTC

Well thank you for the faves on the late chapter ....hope it is worth it this time..sorry might be kind of boring
Untitled ( Please suggest a title )
Chapter 2
I woke up from my stupid blue and green alarm clock . I did my usual routine ; brush my teeth , take a quick shower , put on skinny jeans and a blue or green plaid tight shirt, and straighten my hair. I put my flats on then I grabbed my phone, and my car keys. I went down stairs , kissed my dad on the cheek , and headed to the car , Megan was already in the car waiting. As I pulled into the parking lot , the school so huge. How would I ever find my way through this school ? As we got out we headed to the office to get our schedule . Of course Megan and I have no classes together except ; gym , history . Every time I was walking through the hall everyone just stared at me . I walked to math class, and sat in the back, some boy sat next to me . And another boy sat on the other side of me, a girl sat in front of me . Wow I might like it here, lets hope it goes well.
Comment and fave ...Will gett better.
Hoped you enjoyed....

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January 5, 2011 7:49pm UTC

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January 5, 2011 6:44pm UTC

Ok I think i am just going to start a whole new story . Her name is either Ally or Alexis . Then the story will be kinda a lot different type. But this time I will try to make it alot better . I will either post tonight or later tommarow . Please comment to give me ideas . I am just going probally delete that other story that is on my profile. So Please, please ...give me ideas . I need to know what to sorta do in the story .
Thank you !
Comment Please for ideas!

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January 2, 2011 4:51pm UTC

I dont know if I should contuie with my story Trouble in Knomes . Or should i start a whole new story. Please tell me what i should do. Cause to me Trouble in Knomes is getting kinda boring to me . Please comment . Thank You !

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December 27, 2010 4:25pm UTC

dont you hate it whenyou are writting a qoute then .. you click submit. Then it say you have to sign in, .... specially when you just signed in before.. then you try to sign in . And it says you are already signed in silly.
Fave if u hate when it does that too!!

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December 27, 2010 1:50pm UTC

I dont know if i should contuine Trouble in Knomes. I want to know who is actually reading my story . I need to know if i should contuie writing this story , or just start a new story. Please comment and tell me what i should do.

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December 23, 2010 3:29pm UTC

Omg. Today I was walking around with my friends. When we saw these dogs that looked like they were abused. We want to do something, to help animals . Find homes, where they wont get abused.
Fave if you hate seeing animals that are abused . And you think you cant do anything to stop it!

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December 21, 2010 7:56pm UTC

who ever says that labels matter ... it does not!! It does not matter if you are popular, smart , emo people. It should not matter . What you are ...we are all people . Who cares what clique you are in... It does not matter!!
Fave if you think that labels should not change what you think of a person

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December 21, 2010 7:37pm UTC

Sorry for a late update .
Trouble in Knomes
Chapter 4
I woke up today because now i actually got a reason to go to school now . I did my usual thing to get ready for school, I grabbed my IPhone . I had a text from Ryan .
Ryan: Hello beatiful
Me: hi Ryan !
Ryan: can't wait to see you at school today ...
me: yeah same!
Ryan: ok..well i got to go .. see you later Ally
me: ok bye.
I grabbed my keys, and ran to my car. Alex and Dan did not ride with me today ..they decided to drive themselves. So i blared the music,as I was on the way to school. I pulled into a parking space, I saw Ryan walking towards me. He opened the door and helped me out.
me: aw what a gentle men.
He smiled...so i had to smile.. his smile is gorgeous . He grabbed my hand ,and we walked towards homeroom. Everyone was staring again, so i just looked at Ryan while he looked at me. The day went by so fast, there was many questions again today. But during lunch I was called to the office . Wait...am i in trouble? I walked in ,the people told me I had to go home ..for certain reasons. As i walked to my locker ...Ryan grabbed me and asked if i was ok ...i said yeah. and he let go. I got to my car,then I drove home. There was nobody home ..so i went shopping . I went to a Store in town,and as soon as i entered . There was a scream , i turned around and that was when i saw it . My Mom, was bleeding from a wound . On her leg, and blood from her throat , i took out my phone and called 911 . After a few minutes the people came and took my mother away, they asked me if i wanted to come with her. I said no i will just follow the ambulance .
Sorry i know it might be a little boring . Will get better!!
Check out profile!! pictures of what Ally and Ryan look like sorta!
Fave or comment .
Hoped, you enjoyed

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December 20, 2010 7:39pm UTC

Sorry last chapter i forgot to mark the chapter and the Title. Well here is the next chapter.
Trouble in Knomes
Chapter 3
As soon as i gott home i ran up stairs and logged onto Facebook. There was a few notifications . Like the people questions about you, or accept friend requests , or comments on a stupid status . Like the one from this morning . So i posted a new status " Home, Bored to death .." . As soon as I posted that status I got a comment right away." I know how it wont be " . As soon as i read it i replied " how?'" . Ryan commented again " you say yes to going out with me " .
I dont know how to answer so I just IM Kayla
Me; Kayla !!
Kayla: what Ally!
Me: Ryan just asked me out
Kayla : Really?
Me; yes what to do ?
Kayla: Oh No ...Ryan is my brother!
Me: Oh ...ok so i wont go out with him.
Kayla:No its ok ..you can
Me: ok .. well thanks!
Kayla : your welcome !
Kayla has logged off. What am i going to do?
me: Ryan ..i have made up my mind
Ryan: ok ..what is that
Me: yes i will go out with you !
Ryan: really?
Me; of course .. well text you later ok
Ryan:ok Ally
i clicked the refresh button. It said Ryan is now in a relationship. It made me so happy I could not stop smiling.I went down stairs to go eat dinner. I told the family about what just happened , they just smiled . I ran back up stairs and headed to bed .
sorta long. Fave or Comment.
Check my profile for the looks of Ally and Ryan .
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December 19, 2010 7:21pm UTC

Today was the day where the Drama starts at school , Oh great . I'm not really like one of those people who really has everything ready the night a head of time . But I'm not like one of those people who wait until the last minute ethier, i guess you can say that I'm in between .
I got out of bed ,and hoped into my own personal shower . All of us has our own bathroom , that way we don't fight over who's turn it is to get in the bathroom. I came out and put on my skinny jeans , and my blue areopostole shirt, then i put on my coverse. I grabbed my IPhone , and my car keys and headed down stairs. I kissed my dad and hugged my Lucy, we kinda bond she gets what I'm going through. I walked outside ,to see Alex ,and Dan already in the car. I got in and headed off to school , Sasha goes to middle school still.
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As i parked in a spot , I realized how big the school actually was .....it was huge!!!
We got out , I had only a couple classes with Alex ,and Dan . I got my new schedule , and stuck my backpack into my locker . Then i headed off to math with Alex , as we walked in everyone turned and stared at me .
Teacher: I'm mrs. Claire , please take a seat behind Kayla .
i nodded , and tried to pay attention , but most of this stuff i learned before .
The whole day people keep asking me question , and we swapped numbers and stuff. But Kayla was the most help like in Science she helped me understand what we were doing . Finally the bell to go home rang, yes Freedom! I got outside some cute boy was leaning my car, I walked over there .
Guy: I'm Ryan , you must be Ally . I am in most of your classes.
Me: oh nice to meet you .
Ryan: So heres my number , text me sometime , i got to go.Bye
me : Bye
Ryan had blonde hair, that matched the color of his eyes. I hopped in the car as Dan , and Alex was walking towards the car.
Post more tommarow , sorry a little long
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